Hey, ich schreibe bald eine Klassenarbeit in Englisch und dadurch, dass ich nicht allzu gut in Englisch bin, ist halt meine Frage, ob der Text so gut geschrieben ist bzw. verständlich und so gut eingeteilt ist.
Er soll: Modalverben, Adjektive, Zeitformen, Adverbs, linking words, relative clauses und einen topic sentence enthalten. Außerdem soll er im Simple Past geschrieben sein und eine Einleitung (Introduction), einen Hauptteil (Body) und einen Schluss (Conclusion) haben.
Hier ist der Text:
At the end of the 6th class, we went to the swimming pool because we wanted it.
We were all so excited, so then it started, first we all met, and then we went to the swimming pool together.
When we arrived, we were allowed to jump into the water first, but we should to put up the tents later.
There were two fast slides and one slowly slide, but it was longer than the others.
Next, we all played Volleyball together and listened to music, which was really nice.
Before dinner, 4 of us girls had a water fight with the boys, which was very funny.
We had burgers for dinner and they were so delicious.
When it was 10 p.m., 8 of us played hide and seek in the dark, which was really cool but also scary and at 3 a.m. we went to sleep/ bed.
The next morning, we all got up early and we girls must had to cleaned all the dirty plates and cups (dishes) from last dinner, but we didn't like it.
After breakfast, we were to be able to jumped into the water again, even though we were tired and the water was so cold.
Later we packed our things and were picked up.
Those were two great days and two of my best days.