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Wie interpretiert man diesen Text hinsichtlich der Entwicklung der Hauptfigur (Paul Bäumer) in "Im Westen nichts Neues"?

(Ich Perspektive von Paul Bäumer:) 'Diese Stunden. - Das Röcheln setzt wieder ein - wie langsam stirbt doch ein Mensch! Denn das weiß ich: Er ist nicht zu retten. Ich hahe zwar versucht, es mir auszureden, aber mittags ist dieser Vorwand vor seinem Stöhnen zerschmolzen, zerschossen.

Wenn ich nur meinen Revolver nicht beim Kriechen verloren hätte, ich würde ihn erschießen. Erstechen kann ich ihn nicht. Mittags dämmere ich an der Grenze des Denkens dahin. Hunger zerwühlt mich, ich muss fast weinen darüber, essen zu wollen, aber ich kann nicht dagegen ankämpfen. Mehrere Male hole ich dem Sterbenden Wasser und trinke auch selbst davon. Es ist der erste Mensch, den ich mit meinen Händen getötet habe, den ich genau sehen kann, dessen Sterben mein Werk ist.

Kat und Kropp und Müller haben auch schon gesehen, wenn sie jemand getroffen haben, vielen geht es so, im Nahkampf ja oft- Aber jeder Atemzug legt mein Herz bloß. Dieser Sterbende hat die Stunden für sich, er hat ein unsichtbares Messer, mit dem er mich ersticht: die Zeit und meine Gedanken. lch würde viel darum geben, wenn er am Leben bliebe. Es ist schwer, dazuliegen und ihn sehen und hören zu mussen. Nachmittags um drei Uhr ist er tot.'

Deutsch, Sprache, Aufsatz, Interpretation, interpretieren, textanalyse, Textinterpretation, Im Westen nichts Neues, Klasse 9 Gymnasium

Englisch-Article?

Hallo, ich habe einen English-Article über Holidays geschrieben.

Enthalten muss sein:

  1. positive Dinge über deine Ferien
  2. negative Dinge über deine Ferien

Habt ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge?:

Holidays make the life better

Nearly everybody go on vacation in their holidays. Fortunately, my family do this every year.

 

During my last summer holidays my family and I went to Italy to a theme park called ,,Luna Park”. The good things were that I spent a lot of time with my family and my brother and I rode several rides, for example ,,White Shark” or ,,Xtreme”. Another funny moment was when my sister was spat at by a llama. Moreover, I could convince my mother to go swimming in the sea because it was really hot in Italy. We had about 30 degrees Celsius. “Luna Park” has access to sea, which I really appreciated. For me food is one of the most important things in the world and that is why I was happy to see such good meals at the restaurant. Of course, this food was not cheap, but I think it was worth it.

But there were not only good memories because when we were eating in a restaurant we saw an ambulance and an injured child. I think the child had had an accident in the playground. The paramedics took care of the child and he was allowed to go back to his parents. Furthermore, this theme park was crowded with tourists. In my opinion, this destroys the pleasure of holidays.

 

All in all, I have to say that it was a nice vacation and I hope everybody will have such good holidays.

Englisch lernen, Englisch, Aufsatz, Englisch-Deutsch, Grammatik, Hausaufgaben, Rechtschreibung, article

Welche Fehler sind in diesem Text?

Ich hab jetzt den Text verbessert nach euren Empfehlungen, findet ihr noch andere Fehler? Danke!! 💙🦊😊

My Christmas was very nice. I liked it so much! In the beginning, we sang all the time. My mum sings a lot when it's Christmas. My dad doesn't celebrate Christmas because he is muslim, but he comes with us to church and he's always very happy and makes presents.
It's an african church, so we must drive a very long time because I live in a small village and the church is in a big town.
We wear very beautiful clothes with many colours. In the car when we went back, we sang all the songs from the church because it's very fun. After the church, I played piano and we opened the presents.
I got 5 books, winter clothes, a Chess board, a 3D Puzzle from Disney and Disney Figures and something for my desk.
My present for my parents was a newspaper. I wrote the newspaper alone and it's about our family and our year 2021.
And I made a joke: First gave I my parents only 1€. They asked: "Why do you give us 1€?" I said nothing and then I made a little newspaper shop. I shouted: "One newspaper for 1€!" They understood and bought the newspaper from me. This was my real present (not the 1€). My parents loved the newspaper.
My brother got a game, clothes, an alarm clock that makes sunlight when you wake up and a book.
We had a lot of time to play with the new things and to read the new books. We listened to music and my mum was singing all the time.
Afterwards we ate the dinner. It was Fufu with goat. But I don't eat meat, it was only Fufu for me. It was in a peanut soup that was very spicy. It was great and I loved it.
We ate chocolate, too.
The next days, we went to the neighbours and we rang the doorbell. We had presents and food for them because they are our friends. I had a present for my cat, too. It was a toy what I made.

Englisch, Schule, Fehler, Geschichte, Schreiben, Weihnachten, Aufsatz, Geschichte schreiben, Grammatik, Vokabeln, Weihnachtsgeschichte, englischer text

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