Hi, kann jmd mein Text durchlesen und nach Rechtschreibfehlern korrigieren. Wäre echt lieb. Wenn etw komisch formuliert ist, vllt abändern :)

I think that the plastic bag ban is a positive step towards reducing waste and protecting the environment. I think it's important for our world. 

people should do something together against pollution. companies should try to produce their products in such a way that they do not harm the environment. In addition, consumers should be careful not to pollute the environment and dispose of the resulting waste properly.

on the other hand, one could also look for other environmental problems. Banning plastic bags would be an alternative way of doing something good for the environment. however, one could also combat other problems such as plastic straws or plastic drinking cups/bottles. you could, for example, change from glass or introduce a deposit as in german...

Hallo, das war die Angabe (Nummer 11):

Könnt ihr bitte meinen Blog comment korrigieren, umschreiben, alles was geht, damit es ein guter text wird? ich würde mich echt freuen, es wird sogar benotet, bitte hilft mir dabei:

Hi Artsy Tiger,

there is a difference between spray painting and vandalism. If your friend use to paint an wall, which is not someone’s property, then it is not viewed as vandalism. However, if he painted for example a school or a market wall, can be considered as a crime and it may also carry consequences because of damaging the property belonging to others without permission. It is important to respect other people’s property and seek permission before making any changes on it, like spray painting. 

So, as already mentioned and also according to the law, spray painters painting on public property without permission is considered illegal and can result in serious consequences for the artist. I guess, your friend was not properly informed about this and didn’t do it on purpose, maybe for fun. I mean, spray painting is also a form of art, just not the typical type of art. I can imagine that they are doing it from their heart, let their voices hear and from the experience of something that really impacts them like your friend, who painted his “world” on the wall.

By the way, there are many crimes in general considered worse than spray painting, such as violent offenses like assault or murder, which can cause physical harm or death to others.

I don’t know if it was fair though but I hope that your friend gets released as soon as possible!

Den Text habe ich selber geschrieben mit einem Text den wir bekommen haben.

Ich bin LKler, jedoch die schlechteste im Kurs :(....kann jemand mich korrigieren?

Many Americans are divided because they do not know whether the widening inequalitiy is a problem and they do not know the right solution for this problem.

The social immobility of America is doubtful and America should take more effort to ensure that the poor people who nevertheless work hard, get a chance to develop and to chance their lives and lead a better life.

America is compared to other countries on of the lowest countries with regard social mobility.

Children in the USA have a low chance of moving up into the top quintile.

The gap between rich and poor is growing.

To close this widening the politicans do not know how to deal with it.

I moved to America in search of better jobs and greater economic opportunities that are the way to success , aren’t they.

Hallo!

Wie lauten diese Sätze in den Reported Commands?:

• He said, Let's keep a secret.' We answered, "No, let's not.
• Sheila said, 'Let's take the nine o'clock bus,'"

Hallo!

Wie lautet diese Frage in der Reported Speech/Question?

was kann man als satzanfang schreiben anstatt he/she sais?

Noise pollution is a serious problem, albeit one that is often overlooked.

Ich glaube das ist falsch, weil der Satzteil ein „independend clause“ ist. Aber ChatGPT meinte, es sei richtig.
Vielleicht so: …, albeit overlooked.

Oder kann ich es einfach mit however, although oder even though machen?

Guten Tag,

Ich wäre wirklich dankbar wenn Sie mir bei dieser Frage helfen könnten. Also ich muss ein Essay auf Englisch schreiben mit Hilfe von 3 Punkten und die sind:

1. The importance of tourism for Austria.

2. Negative side effects of tourism.

3. How tourism needs to adapt in the future?

Die Problem ist, dass ich bei der Frage 3 keine Idee habe. Was meint diese Frage genau? Kann bitte jemand von euch mir ein paar Ideen geben. Und danke sehrrrr :-)

Liebe Grüße

Ranii*

Hallo!

Sind diese Sätze in der Conditional richtig?

1.) If Pit can go out, he will do this.

2.) If Pit could go out, he would do this.

3.) If Pit had been able to go out, he would have done this.

Schreibe bald eine Englischarbeit, inder wir auch eine Summary schreiben sollen. Wenn ich im Hauptteil kurz den Inhalt zusammenfasse sollen meine Sätze dann eher wie Vision 1 oder 2 starten:

Vision 1: The author wants to explain... ; In the beginning of the article... ,The text says...

Vision 2: Direkt mit dem Inhalt einsteigen: By unsing social Media and the Internet to find new friends... ; All in all the meaning of...

Danke für eure Antworten im Vorraus

Unglaublich das ich das frage...

Ok egal, kann mir villeicht jemand sagen welcher Satz richtig gebildet ist?

alright, please make a troop of about 5 people and go out into the forest.

alright, please make a troop __ about 5 people and go ___ into the forest.

alright, please make a troop of about 5 people and go ___ into the forest.

alright, please make a troop __ about 5 people and go into the forest.

Willy Wonka is the owner of the chocolate factory. He announces that somebody have the chance to win five golden tickets. One of the winners is Charlie Bucket. Charlie learn everything about the inventions, how the factory looks like and the special workers that nobody knows about them. At the end there is a big decision that no one suspected.

Hallo, könnt ihr meine Texte anschauen. Habt ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge? Wir müssen eine Präsentation zu Neuseeland machen und das hier sind meine Texte zum Präsentieren.

General Facts: Around 5 million people live in New Zealand. The capital is Wellington. New Zealand is located southwest of the Pacific Ocean. The official currency is the “New Zealand Dollar”. There are two time zones in New Zealand. No matter where you are, the nearest coast is a maximum of 128 kilometres away. New Zealand had the largest volcanic eruption in the world and the first women’s right to vote. In addition New Zealand has the steepest road.

Area: New Zealand is a country located southwest of the Pacific Ocean. New Zealand comprising of two islands, one is called “The north Islands” and the other “The south islands”. Both are shaped by many volcanoes and glaciers. 

Language: English is the most widely spoken language, it is also used in legislation but only Māori and New Zealand sign language are the official language. Here you can see it ( ich zeige ein Bild☺️)

Religion: Nearly half of the population in New Zealand have no religion. 37% are Christians and 0,1% are Jewry. There are other special religious communities, but these are only 1,3%.

Blue lake: the blue lake holds the record for the clearest lake in the world. It is located in Nelson Lake National Park. Only scientists with a special permit are allowed to dive and swim in the lake to take tests and pictures. For tourists access to shore is possible at any time.

Māori: the Māoris are the indigenous people of New Zealand, they make 10% of the population. They lived in tribes. In the past there was cannibalism. The Haka dance is a ritual dance. It was mostly performed by armed men’s.

Hallo, Ich möchte gerne fragen ob mein summary Text gut geworden ist? Ihr könnt mir gerne bzw. Ich bitte drum mir paar Tipps zu geben um sie zu verbessern oder auch wenn ihr möchtet mein Text ganz zu verbessern (Wäre sehr dankbar dafür) Ich mache solche Aufgabe das erste mal also bitte ich euch nicht so gemein zu sein.

Summary:

The Text „History of New Zealand“ Deals With important and intersesting informations and facts about the History of New Zealand.

The First Text is about the Arrival of Maori. The informations are about that the first inhabitants in New Zealand were Maori, and that New Zealand is Valley Aotearora. Next informations are about the First Explorer to reach New Zealand and that he travelled in his waka Hourua (big canoe) from his Polynesian homeland, Hawaiki. In the third part they write about where is Hawaiki? They Write that hawaiki cannot be found on map. In the next part the writer writes about what maori eat? It says that maori eat Fish, hunted native birds, vegetables and also native food like berries.

The writer writes in the next Text about that In 1840 the treaty of waitangi was signed by maori and British reprensentatives and that in 1872 the wars over land had ended, moreover he also write in the next topic about maori culture it says that most maori lived in rural communities ,  in the 1970s the maori language became more important and that  the first Officially bilingual school opened in 1978. All in all is the history of New Zealand very fascinating.

Hey,

für die Schule muss ich einen Schüler Zeitungsartikel über Sandra Laing schreiben, auf Englisch.

ich suche nach einem spannenden Start-Satz und Titel.

Es sollte nicht so etwss langweiliges sein wie:

Sandra Laing and her life through the Apartheid

Hey and welcome to my blog. Today I’m going to tell you something about Sandra Laing.

Hat jemand eine gute Idee?

Danke schon mal!

Ist dieser Text so korrektes englisch?

The loss of someone beloved. The photos tell a story about the pain, the loneliness, the desperation. The different stages of grief. First the experiences with the person you love. Then grief: the word seems colorless, there is no point in going on. But time heals all wounds: little by little the colors come back and with them the love of life. You won't forget them, but you keep living.

English: Hello guys, can somone help me? I have to write a summary about the book "Born a Crime" by Trevor Noah but im not really good at summarys. Does anyone have some advice for me?

P.S. The summary must have 250 words.

Deutsch: Hey Leute, kann mir jemand helfen? Ich muss eine Zusammenfassung des Buches "Born a Crime" von Trevor Noah schreiben, aber ich habe Schwierigkeiten wenn es ums zusammenfassen geht. Hat jemand ein paar Tipps für mich, wie ich gut schreiben könnte?

P.S. Die Zusammenfassung muss 250 Wörter haben.

1. Comment on the pressure the British feel to maintain the myth of their identity. How should other nations deal with them ?

was würdet ihr dazu sagen ?

Comment on the Quote: "We're colossal, hit-it-out-of-the-park cultural over-achievers" (I1. 44-45) and explain what attitude the author is criticising.

kann mir jemand dabei helfen ?
was meine er damit ?

Der Text

Hallo, ich frage mal lieb ob jemand mein Text verbessern könnte, wäre super, ich danke euch!! :)

Lifestyle choice as a student in a boarding school

Attending a boarding school is a lifestyle choice that means living on campus while studying at the same time. Boarding schools provide a safe atmosphere where students are encouraged to explore their studying interests, develop new skills and form new friendships. Though, as a boarder’s point of view, how is it to choose this kind of lifestyle?

Basically, boarding school is equal as a classical school, only in addition that students stay away from home. They still focus on their education, enjoy a lot of activities and build strong social relationships with their classmates. There are many opportunities to travel or even more to practice a foreign language. It is also a great way for students to grow as a person: they can become more responsible, independent and mature. That’s why it helps them, as already mentioned, develop important skills as communication which can benefit them later in life.

Despite of that, the disadvantages of sending students to boarding school are quite numerous. For example the day in a boarding school is strictly structed: Students have planned mealtimes and also “study times”. In the other hand, it can also be difficult for parents to stay connected with their children while they’re away at school, this could lead to feelings of loneliness or homesickness on both sides.

Those students, who choose to attend a boarding school have usually the same reason: Their classical school was too far away from their home or potentially they just wanted to study abroad. Another reason could also be that some of them just want to get away from home because they don’t get along with their parents.

In conclusion, parents should carefully weigh their options but if they decide for it, they can be sure that their child will have the opportunity to receive an excellent education and numerous abilities. 

Hallo, ist dieser Satz in der Conditional 2 richtig?:

If Pit didn't like his job, he must changed it.

Reported speech kann mir jemand die Sätze hier korrigieren? Wäre super nett, danke.

Ich habe leider keine Ahnung worauf er sich dabei bezieht bzw. wie ich sie bewerten soll

ich soll zur folgender Aussage meine Meinung sagen

Education has in America's whole history been the major hope for improving the individual and society.— Gunnar Myrdal 

Essay: Pet and Teenagers

Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Having a pet at a early age helps teenagers learn about responsibility and taking care of others. At the same time, it can help them learn to take care of themselves. Some teenagers though, should never have pets of their own if they can’t control themselves and have difficulty with empathy. Therefore: Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Teenagers mature at different rates. Some can handle the responsibility of caring for a pet already and others not. That’s why the age is for the parent to decide. If teenagers are animal-friendly, then cats make excellent pets. They can be playful and entertaining, especially if people adopt a kitten. They are also relatively easy to take care for: good quality food, clean water, a clean litter box, toys and interaction with their owners for affection.

As mentioned, owning a pet helps in the development of a teenager for example learning to take responsibility for another life and experience what it means if someone depends on them. A pet also helps teenagers learning to give attention even if they are not in the mood for it.

Despite of that, how can teenagers even cover the costs of keeping a pet? Well, pets are expensive but if teenagers have a pet, they can buy cheap food or cheap toys, if they want to cover their costs. Teenagers can also spend their pocket money more for their pet or can earn some money in holidays.

To conclude, I would say teenagers should keep a pet, if they are ready to take care of it. If they care for their pet, they return the love. A pet doesn't question what kind of job the kid’s parents have or how much money they make, etc. They would love their owners if they show affection to it.

Wofür steht das 's in diesem Text:

it has even been possible to reconstruct the kinship of the house's inhabitants

One of the most famos dishes is the Biryani.

Biryani or in english spicy rice is one of the national dishes of Indi. This dish is made with highly seasoned rice and meat, fish, or vegetable. You youse many different spices for many different dishes in India.

In Biryani, for example you youse Bay Leaf, Ginger, Garlic, Chilis and many more.

Most indians are vegetarien because of their religion or because their poor.

In India you eat with hands or use an spoon.

You only eat with the right hand because the left one is not clean.

Also, the indian women eats after the men because she is subordinate to the man.

But in most modern families, these traditions no longer exist.

Satz: Anna: we need to find a dog today.

Satz in reported speech:

Anna insisted on neededing to find a dog that day.

Wenn vorrausgesetzt ist dass insisted on verwendet werden soll. Alternativen gibt es, aber ich will den Satz in reported speech mit "Anna insisted on"...

??? in englisch bei if sentences

Guten Tag,

Heißt es "many Computers are needed at school" oder "a lot of Computers are needed at school"

Liebe Grüße

"The Universe is Regular,stable and uniform to the extent that human life or any life exist within it." Also keine wortwörtliche übersetzung sondern was damit gemeint ist und ob es richtig ist

Guten Mittag,

ich schreibe in zwei Tagen eine Englisch Klausur. Den Stoff kann ich (ausgeschlossen „Indirect speech“). Bei dem Thema „Indirect speech“ weiß ich allerdings nicht weiter. Die Grundlage hab ich soweit verstanden. Könnte mir jemand diese Grammatik erklären (backshift of tenses, question->bezogen auf Indirect speech)?

Danke!

Wie lautet dieser Satz in Reported Speech?:

The teacher told us, "The dinosaurs died out because of a change in the climate."

• The quote stresses that the law provides that corporal punishment is prohibited. However, there is a debatte whether it is outdated or an effective measure.
• It is crucial since many students behave properly fearing a threat.

Wie findet ihr diese Sätze?

Hallo, ich muss in Englisch ein formaler Brief bzw E-Mail schreiben wobei ich die Vorteile von Austauschschüler benenne. Der Anfang meines Hauptteil lautet:

Firstly through the student exchange many students lear their personality better and develop it further.A student exchange often gives them the opportunity to start from scratch. They try new things and learn how to deal with conflicts and problems independently.

Kann jemand mir bitte es für mich korrigieren?

Danke

Hi, meine Frage ist ob es when oder while ist:

The boy was playing the bagpipes when his chair broke.

ODER

The boy was playing the bagpipes while his chair broke.

?

Bitte mit Begründung!

LG

Hallo,

kann man das so im Englischen sagen bzw. kann man es in irgendeiner Form noch besser klingen lassen. Thanks for your help!

In the movie “Victoria and Abdul” (released in 2017 by Stephen Frears) the viewer experiences the extraordinary true story of an unexpected friendship between Queen Victoria and the Indian prison clerk Abdul Karim. Since the film follows the exemplary structure of a drama, it can be transferred to Gustav Freytag’s pyramid. 

Die Aufgabenstellung lautet : Write the negation of the statements in formal English (long form)

Bei zwei war ich mir nicht sicher:

1. She has blue eyes : Würde es dan She has got long eyes heißen?
2. I have got time to read the paper today

Hallo, wird in der Summary bei Englisch Klausuren nur das Simple Present verwendet oder darf man bei der Reproduktion von narrativen Texten auch auf das Present Progressive zurückgreifen?

Hallo, kann jemand mir bitte diesen Text korrigieren?

Interests of German Teenagers

Dear Tim,

How are you doing? I hope your doing well . I would like to answer your questions about what German students think about their future after the school time . Well well in Germany you can also meet students with the same idea about the successful careers in order to earn a lot of money to have a happy life.

But on the other hand for some students money and career are not necessary, because they have dreams for their futures they want to follow.

They don't care about the expectations their family, since they notice that following their dreams is not easy , because it is going to take work,dedication,focus and drive, but as long as you keep that laser focus than nothing is impossible.

It's the best time to decide about their future career for their own.

Enjoy every chapter of your life, but don't ignore the obstacles.

Be purposeful and don't listen to frightened people.

I hope my massage could help the American teenagers to reach they life they wish to have.

best wishes

Fatma

Danke im Voraus

Ich bin mir halt nicht sicher, ob mein comment in Fach Englisch mir gelungen ist, daher wäre ein Feedback nett :)

Many people argue whether or not the British monarchy should be abolished.

In the following, I present arguments for and against a monarchy so that you can form your own pinion.

On the one hand, the British monarchy should be abolished because a monarch only rules but has no real political power or function. this means that a queen or king is unnecessary and unimportant to the state.

Also, the UK is not a democracy, as is claimed, because in a democracy people can elect the head of state, but since the royal family is still alive, they will continue to be the head of state.

This is very unfair and unequal to the rest of the population.

Also, people can never be 100% sure if the next monarch is good for the state and does not have bad intentions.

This could make people very worried.

Another important aspect is that the royal family spends a lot of money on the palace when they could use the money for more important things.

On the other hand, the British monarchy should not be abolished, because a monarch is very important even if he or she has no real political power.  

His or her importance is reflected in national stability.

Since a monarch embodies the British history, values and tradition, this leads to stronger national identification, which brings people closer together so that there is national stability.

In addition, members of the royal family are very important to charities, because since the royal family has a good image and is important, charities can be heard better, so they continue with their charities.

Some people may think that a monarch spends a lot of money, but that doesn't mean a president doesn't.

there are many presidents with many

There are also many presidents with many offices, even more than the British monarch.

The fact that the royal family has always been at the head of the state means that people trust it because they know its good intentions.

This means that the monarchy is in safe hands, so to speak.

Another important point is that the royal family has shown that it can modernize and adapt to the times.  

This is very important because many people claim that they are unmodern and have different thoughts than today.

But the Queen, for example, has allowed her son Charles to marry a divorced woman, whereas in the past this was a very dangerous issue. 

that means she was able to “modernise”. 

Weighing the pros and cons of the British monarchy, one can say that it should not be abolished because the British monarchy has been very successful, mainly because it has adapted to the times and modernized.

The speakers, that are part of the smart system, comment on the couple's mistakes or behavior in a rather insulting way.

Ich muss eine Rede in Englisch machen. Ich komme von einer Umweltgruppe und muss über einen Protest von unserem fiktiven lokalen Supermarkts machen, der Produkte verkauft, die aus dem Regenwald kommen und somit die Umwelt zerstören. Welches Produkt könne ich beispielsweise nehmen und welche Argumente könnte ich bringen ?

Ist diese Summary gut geschrieben und in Simple tense? Kann einer für mich das einmal gucken? Wäre super nett.

Könntet ihr bitte tips und gerne eure Meinung zu dieser Summary geben?

The speech extract “The importance of students exchanges” from Michelle Obama published in the year 2014 is about how important studying abroad is and what we can learn in an other country.

Michelle Obama expresses in her speech, that studying abroad is not just about spending a semester in any country it is much more than that. It is more to improve yourself, facing new challenges and learning the habits in the country. All of these facts can have good consequences for your school grades after coming back from studying abroad. Furthermore facing big challenges can really help in life whether it is finding a new job in a new country or facing the problems of the climate change. These are really good habits that you can learn by studyiing abroad and that is why Michelle Obama finds is so important.

Danke ☺️

"It's a competition, just a competition," Jona kept telling himself...But he can't lose, not this time...He has to win! Most people wouldn't care, but for him it had a strong meaning, the prize money meant his future. 

It was cold, very cold. It was long past bedtime, but Jona couldn’t sleep. He was sitting on his bed when a light breeze came through his window. How would he win? Every thought was worth it to him... 50 thousand dollars was worth it to anyone, wasn't it?

But behind it all, it was all about the plant that finally had to grow, the biggest wins. He measured for...well great, 40 cm high, thought Jona. It wasn't going to work out that way, and he knew it. 

So he set to work, despite the late hour. It became later and later. He visited a variety of Internet sites that supposedly had "nice tricks" in store as the plant should apparently grow faster. When the fingers were already sore because of typing, he gave it up... So on the fast would give nothing, he has no more time. 

He sighed, he made himself a coffee, he had to think. The prize money means everything to him, the prize money means the way to the university, he would finally be able to study! Wouldn't that be wonderful? The why was already clear, but the how was a mystery. If only there were a remedy... He set out on his way, the way to the city. There he would certainly find, there would be a variety of stores with products that would certainly help. 

After a long train ride, he finally arrived. Towards the center, he hoped to finally find a plant store.

Along much people and dark alleys he always passed through, through the crowd. 

Crossing the road, he discovered his destination. He walked, he ran, he almost scrambled! 

But on the way there he was stopped. An old man called him, he did not know his first name...A stranger...He was standing in what felt like the darkest alley. He promised to have a miracle cure, a miracle cure that Jona needed! Desperate for solutions, he listened to him. The latter told that his home-brewed serum, he showed him, has the ability to make plants grow faster than anything else!

Once home, he tests the serum with the color green, suspect…

He pours it out over his plant. He waited and waited. Nothing happened...But all of a sudden, the core sprouted so fast, you couldn't have seen it even in slomotion. It grew and grew. Through his house, through his roof, the garden fence flooded, the Straßenverkeht blocked by a plant. Soon the whole city was taken and numerous platforms and news portals reported that he reigned pure chaos. Jonah had not even wanted that, but it was too late. The plant did not stop, it killed one person after another, they died from lack of oxygen, because the plant really suffocated them. Jona indirectly became a murderer. He was ashamed. He heard the BBC News podcats in his ears. It continued to grow, according to the update, according to the news. The doom of the world is near…

Dick is one of the main characters in the short story ``just along for a ride´´ written by Dennis Kurumada

We do not know much information about him, his appearance or age it is not mentioned.We just know that he is friends with the first narrator and that he just got his driver license also the car he drives is the "55 Desoto.Dick does not take responsibility of his actions, when he hit Ken Benjamin instead of helping him, he decided to speed down the street, he also always thinks about himself when he said "shut up, you jerk! you want us to get nailed for manslaughter?". instead of being worried for Ken, he only is worried that he will get into jail, therefore at the end of the story when he said "I heard on the radio that he's not dead. he is not even hurt bad"the reader might think he felt bad, sadly no he is just relieved that he got away with it. As we can see when he said "no one knows" "so maybe we can get away with it"

Dick is a flat character because he didn't really change througout the story, he stayed the same,only being worried about himself.

Hallöchen, könnte ich hier noch was änderen oder hinzufügen?

und connectives benutzen (therefore, furthermore, nevertheless)

und welche Wörter könnte ich ändern?

Danke im Voraus :))))

Welche Verben/Verknüpfungswörter könnte man in einer Mediation von Deutsch auf Englisch verwenden?

Denke an so etwas wie:

• Since, as, because, However, whilst, Nevertheless, anyway, therefore
• Besides, Moreover, In addition, apart from that,
• For instance,
• deal with, to be explained,
• Finally, First, Mainly,

vor allen Dingen fehlen mir Verben

The text deals mainly with the Queen, her career, and especially with the public's opinion of the monarchy as she passed away.

danke :)

Before the advent of law and order, young Bones worked on Panhandle ranches. Back then, the vigilantes followed their own laws. 

When Bill Johnson died, Bones was the only one who knew the vigilante's password. After people went through the deceased's personal belongings, they found that Bones knew the password and made their way to him. Bones, however, refused to give the password, saying he would keep his word to the death. 

Bill Johnson, also known as Skillety Bill, worked on the same ranch at the time and figured in one of the most important episodes in Bones' life. As one day after, Bones was taking care of the horses of a certain cattleman, vigilantes rode up to him and asked him if he was working for those cattlemen down the creek. When he agreed, they snatched him up and began hanging him from the nearest tree, where two innocent boys were already hanging. 

hallo kann jemand das mit kontrollieren

Guten Abend,vor eine Weile habe ich Summary geschrieben.Jedoch war sie nicht sehr gut.Desghalb habe ich sie heute verbessert und hoffe das die Summary ganz okay geworden ist.

Danke für eure Hilfe!

LG Mo

Hallo,ich brauche dringend Hilfe in meiner Summary,ich habe große Schwierigkeiten eine zuschreiben da ich in Englisch ziemlich schlecht bin.Deshalb habe ich grade eine geübt zuschreiben.

Vielen lieben Dank für eure Hilfe!

hey, wie beginne ich denn bei meiner summary mit dem Hauptteil, weil man schreibt doch normalerweise in der gegenwart. Wenn ich jetzt aber anfange mit the author writes… dann muss ich dich die zeitform wechseln oder?

oder wie kann ich schreiben das ich in der gegenwart bleiben kann ?

Wir haben einen 1000 Wörter Text erhalten, den wir zusammenfassen mussten. Nun habe ich Angst, dass ich es zu detailliert zusammengefasst habe. Ich habe ein Blatt (Vorderseite) und ein Blatt( Vor- und Rückseite geschrieben).

Wie viele Punkte können dadurch abgezogen werden?

Hi,

ich muss für morgen eine Zusammenfassung von diesem text schreiben (Auf Englisch natürlich)

ich hab den jetzt 2 mal durch gelesen und überhaupt nix verstanden 🫠

könnte mir den jemand bitte auf deutsch zusammenfassen?

danke sehr

ich muss diesen Text als summary schreiben aber weiß nicht wie ich anfangen soll. Kann jemand die ersten Zeilen als summary schreiben?

danke

Wie würdet ihr das zusammenfassen?

Hallo,

Ich habe hier eine Summary zu den Folgenen Text Geschrieben und Wollte Fragen was man da eventuell ändern könnte und ob die Struktur so gut ist und ob das Sprachlich auch gut ist.

VG

Nico

Hey, würde mich gerne freuen wenn ihr mir eventuell Verbesserungsvorschläge gibt :) Vor allem bin ich mir bei meiner conclusion nicht sicher

Danke!

Should the British monarchy be abolished? 

Lots of people argue about whether the British monarchy should be abolished or not since the Queen recently died. 

Therefore, I will list arguments for and against the monarch so that you can form your own opinion. 

On one hand, a monarch is seen as a representative of the country.

That is, he or she embodies traditional national values, unity and history.

This leads to stronger national identification and brings people closer together. 

That is why many people say that a monarchy brings stability.

In addition, members of the royal family have important roles at the head of all kinds of charities, and because of their image and popularity, they help charities continue their good work. 

Another positive aspect is that the British monarchy has shown that it is able to reform and adapt to modern times. An example of this would be that Prince Charles was allowed to marry a divorced women. 

It can also be said that the queen or king is perhaps the most expensive monarch in Europe, but that does not mean that a president would be cheaper.

On the other hand, the monarch has no real political power, which means that his or her functions are mainly formal and could easily be taken away by other political bodies or an elected president. 

Although many members of the Royal Family head charities they do not really engage in political work for those charities but rather serve as a kind of figurehead. 

But it is precisely a monarchy that harms democracy, because the people cannot elect the head of state. 

Also, a monarch has no consequences to face when making mistakes and since Britain is a hereditary monarchy, nobody knows whether the next monarch will have good or bad intentions. 

Therefore, it can be said that the royal family is a symbol of an unjust and unequal society. 

Weighing the pros and cons one come to the conclusion that the monarchy has many positive sides, for example, it brings stability or embodies history, but the negative sides mask this.

because since the country is a democracy, the monarchy should be abolished so that people can choose for themselves who should be the next monarch so that there is equality. 

Hallo, ich brauche eure Hilfe.
Mein Thema im Englischunterricht ist: summarys. Da ich gerade eine geschrieben habe, wollte ich fragen, ob jemand mir Tipps, Verbesserungsvorschläge geben kann. Wäre sehr lieb!

Der Artikel ( ist nicht gut zu erkennen, leider.)

Meine Zusammenfassung:

The article “The comeback of the written word” written by Gideon Spanier on 18 July 2021 deals with the popularity of text- based communication. 

At the beginning, the author mentions British statistics. He states that text-based communication gets more famous and even more popular than talking in person with someone. Furthermore, he points out that 16-24 year olds use digital communication everyday to stay in contact with friends and family members. In addition,  the number of phone calls on both mobile and landlines fell for the first time in 2011. According to media regulator Ofcom Communications Market Report, the power of text-based communication is higher, because the new technology let us communicate in a highly effective way.

Ist meine Zusammenfassung gut gelungen? Wenn nein, was könnte ich besser machen?
Welche Schulnoten 1-6 würdet ihr mir geben?
Vielen Dank für eure Hilfe!

Hey, wo finde ich Texte die sich für eine Summary eignen?

Summarise the role of theatres in Shakespeare‘s London.

Ich versteh nicht so ganz, was ich da schreiben soll? hat jemand beispiel?

The book report by Janel, published on keeperofpages.com January 20th is about Patrick Suskind's book "The Perfume". 

Wenn der Satz falsch ist, wie kann ich ihn umschreiben ohne dass er zu lang wird

Heyy ich habe momentan mega viel zu tun und sitze den Ganzen Tag schon an Hausaufgaben und am Lernen wäre jmd so lieb und könnte mir eine Zusammenfassungen für die Geschichte schreiben.Auf Deutsch (in der Gegenwart)oder direkt auf Englisch(ins simple present)wäre beides mega toll.

Ich bedanke mich schonmal falls dies jmd machen würden.Finde wirklich keine Zeit um das heute noch zu schaffen hab wirklich sehr viel Arbeit wäre mega wenn sich jmd die Zeit nehmen würden.

LG

Hallo wir schreiben morgen ein English Klassenarbeit und ich kann dises Twxt nixht verstehen um ein Summary zu schreiben. Ich habe schon mein Einleitung aber Hauptteil nicht :/ kann jemand mir bitte bitte helfen

Guten Tag, ich übe gerade für eine Klassenarbeit im englischen der 9. Klasse. Es gibt das Thema summary writing und deswegen habe ich eben fix eine geschrieben und würde gerne wissen ob diese gut ist und alle Informationen enthalten sind oder dort was fehlt.

Ich hoffe man kann es erkennen

Ich muss eine Zusammenfassung vom zehnten Kapitel des Buches schreiben, nur leider fällt es mir schwer den Inhalt des Kapitels kurz im Einleitungssatz wiederzugeben, weil in dem Kapitel so viel verschiedenes passiert (Knox bei der Party der Danburrys, Charlie mit Gloria, Charlie mit dem Artikel „Girls at Welton“ und der Bestrafung von Nolan, Nolans Gespräch mit Keating und einer Unterrichtsstunde mit Keating).

Falls sich jemand mit dem Buch/Film oder Zusammenfassungen auskennt, wäre es hilfreich wenn jemand helfen könnte die Themen zu kürzen :)

Ich schreibe gerade einen Summary und würde hilfe beim Hauptteil benötigen.

Zum oberen Text sollen wir eine Summary machen, der untere Text isr meine Summary. Ist das so richtig ?

Ich habe mich an einer Englisch summary probiert. Jedoch bin ich mir sehr unsicher und wollte nach Verbesserungsvorschlägen fragen

The Great Barrier Reef in danger written by - and published in - deals with the great barrier reef and why it is in danger. The text says that the fisherman’s and the Fisher ships a huge problem who’s oil spill. And not only the ships are the problems and also the mount of tourism. The text says that every year two million peoples come and watch and touch corals. According to the text to save the corals they need to spend millions of dollars to save the reef. 

All in all the text is about what the problem is and how to save the reef. 

Eine Summary ist ja in English, bloß eine Zusammenfassung bzw. eine Inhaltsangabe der Geschichte. Wie schreibt man eine sehr gute Summary? Dankeschön :)

Man sollte eine summary im simple präsent schrieben zählt das jedoch auch wenn die Geschichte im simple past geschrieben ist?

Hey meine Lieben,

ich schreibe demnächst meine Arbeit und wir haben eine Probearbeit bekommen, bei der wir als letztes eine summary schreiben müssen (um die 100 Wörter. Allerdings ist mir das Prinzip noch nicht ganz soo klar und nun bräuchte ich Hilfe bei dieser Aufgabe

Danke im Vorraus ;)

Hallo :)

Ich schreibe morgen eine Englisch Klausur und würde gerne wissen, was eurer Meinung nach die besten/wichtigsten Formulierungen in einem englischen Comment oder einer summary sind?

vielen Dank!

Hey wir haben in englisch momentan das Thema summary und mir fällt das ein bisschen schwer, ich schreib immer viel zu viel.

Hat jemand Tipps?

Hey leute

hat jemand mal einen Beispiel Summary Text für mich? Ich würde was zur Orientierung brauchen weil unsere Lehrerin das leider nicht so gut erklärt hat und wir bald eine arbeit schreiben.

danke schon mal

The speech , given by Barack Obama on 15 February 2006 in Boston , deals with…

Hey,

morgen schreibe ich eine englisch Arbeit. Deswegen Wollte ich nochmal fragen.

Dürfte man in einer summary schreiben

You can try Paddleboard it is for people who likes water.

Ich frage weil ich nicht weiß ob das You am Anfang des Satzes auf direct speech zutrifft.

Liebe Grüße

Hey, ich habe alle im Englischbuch vorhandenen Texte gemacht, fühle mich aber noch nicht sicher.

Schreibe morgen eine Arbeit, schnelle Antworten währen nett^^

Moin ich habe gerade eine Englsicharbeit geschrieben.

Wir sollten eine Summary schreiben.

Ich habe ausversehen das mit den The Autor gets on point usw vergessen und nur den Text in eigenen Worten aufgeschrieben.

Ich will halt keine 5 schreiben.

Was glaub ihr bekomme ichb

Hey,darf man in einer summary solche verbindungswörter verwenden?

Although,espicially,naturally,moreover,afterwards.

Und habt ihr Tipps?

Habe eine zsmfassung über chapter 4 gescrieben. (Australian connection).

Ist die zsmfassung gut?

Chapter 4, “The Big Decision,” is about Alex coming to Sydney after his short trip to meet his dad. But his father was not there instead, dani was in the kitchen and asked Alex if he wanted to come with the band on a journey. Mary tells Alex that his father has to travel to Singapore because he arrived one week before. During the next week, Alex and the band went to Melbourne where they have their first concert. The concert takes place in a club called “Angelos”. Pete, Joe, Alex, dani and terry play in discos and clubs around Phillip island. The next evening, Alex and dani meet on the beach and the two talk a lot about it comes out of the Alex has fallen in love with dani, he kisses dani the two are now a few. The next day the band goes to the other side of the island to summerland beach there are more Engagements . Dani and Alex want to meet more and more often but this is not possible because the two have a hard band job and always gigs and new songs have to learn by arguing often.

The novel "The Wave" by Morton Rhue is about an Experiment that gets out of control. In seventeen chapters the novel show the course of an experiment that the history teacher Ben Ross conducts with his history class. Ben Ross starts a movement called "The Wave". He wants to make his student's directly experience the seductive potential of totalitarian structures. At the beginning, the wave seems to be a good experiment, but after a few days, members and non-members have fights and the experiment gets out of control.

Vlt kann da einer kurz drüberschauen ob das so für eine arbeit gänge

alsoo..ich habe hier ein summary geschrieben zu einem kleinen textausschnitt des buches slam (zu finden im green line 6). da mein englisch (wie manche vllt schon in meiner frage von gestern gelesen haben) nicht das beste ist, würde ich gerne mal über mein summary drüberlesen lassen, ob grammatikalisch alles stimmt und ob es vllt noch ein paar verbesserungsvorschläge für die formulierung gibt:)

The extract from „Slam“ by Nick Hornby is about teenage pregnancy and shows us a 16-year-old boy who is scared of becoming a father. The action takes place at the time of the narrator’s 16th birthday. His name is Sam. In the morning he gets some cards, presents and doughnuts which his mum bought him before and he already plans his birthday-afternoon and –evening. After the breakfast Sam gets a message from Alicia. She writes that she has to see him very urgent. Locked in the bathroom, Sam answers her and gets nervous. Some time ago he and Alicia petted and he didn’t prevent. Now he’s scared that her urgent message could be that she’s pregnant. He has already that strange feeling in his guts. He writes her that he has no time, but she answers that he has to come. So they arrange a meeting at the Starbucks at 11 am. Sam gets very nervous and wants to sit on his mother’s lap, like a child. And he also wishes he would still be one and not to have such problems. He is also scared, that his mother wouldn’t love him anymore if she knew what he did. While going to the coffee shop he tries to deal with god. He wants Alicia not to be pregnant and promises God that he will neither skate, nor go to McDonald’s, nor watch TV anymore. He also thinks that he won’t ever have sex after this experience. At the Starbucks he buys a drink, trying to lengthen the time he doesn’t know the result yet. Suddenly he sits next to Alicia with his Frappuccino. She wishes him a happy birthday and tells him that her period is late.

Ich habe morgen eine Klausur und muss ein Summary über diesen Text schreiben. Kennt sich damit jemand aus und kann mir sagen, ob das so okay ist?

Ich habe zur Vorbereitung auf eine anstehende Klausur eine Charakterisierung und eine Zusammenfassung geschrieben. Es wäre sehr nett, wenn jemand diese korrigieren könnte, was die Grammatik angeht.

hallo Leute, ich bin euch ganz offen und ehrlich ich hatte heute einen sehr langen Schultag und muss bis morgen aber noch eine summary für meinen englisch lk schreiben, wenn sich jmd bereit erklärt und eventuell Zeit und Lust hat mir zu helfen die summary zu schreiben und sich nochmal bei seinen englisch skills zu testen den bitte ich mir zu hel/fen!!!

es Muss auch nicht gut sein.. Hauptsache ich habe etwas stehen.. ich bin einfach viel zu müde ich kann kaum noch denken:/

wäre total lieb..

Jemand, der gut in Englisch ist?

Kann mir bitte jemand stichpunktartig (in eigenen Worten) sagen, was in diesen drei Textabschnitte gesagt wird?

Kann da bitte jemand helfen ? Habe das total vergessen und wir sollen eine Zusammenfassung darüber schreiben ? Bitte wäre wirklich hilfreich

Hi, wir sollen in Englisch ein Summary von unserem Lieblingsbuch schreiben und ich wollte fragn, ob man spoilern, also das Ende und so verraten darf oder nicht.

danke schonmal :)