Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

Hallo also ich habe eine Klassenarbeit am Donnerstag . Da muss ich eine summary schreiben , ist diese gut ? Was kann ich besser machen. Bitte achtet nicht auf Rechtschreibung oder Komma Setzung denn darauf habe ich jetzt erstmal nicht geachtet , dankee schonmal

We ... (have) enough time now if we hadn't wanted to see the castle.

was kommt da anstatt diese ... rein? ich habe geschrieben would have had aber das ist falsch.

Heißt "He is overwhelmed"

- Er ist überfordert

oder

- Er ist überwältigt

?

Nowadays the internet is becoming a bigger concern due to its unlimeted access. So its getting riskier to be online especially for children as there are many threats, such as fake profiles. However, is the internet really that dangerous?

First of all, I think the internet makes us very dependet, which can lead to developing addidictive behaviors, impacting both our personal lives and careers. For example during a family dinner, there is less conversation and more time spent surfing the internet. This can lead to conflict, just as when someone constantly checks their phone at work or in the school.

The next point is we are not always aware of the dangers online, because the internet is has become part of our everday life. From my point of view is this a big Problem, especially for young people, because they can visit websites that aren’t safe for them. For instance it can also be dangerous for children, as older people can pretend to be younger and attract children.

The next argument is that the internet also offers many benefits, such as educational plattforms, that help young people study for school. In my experience the internet provides learning materials and online courses, for example, which can help save time by avoiding long commutes.

Lastly its important to say that the internet make it easy to do many things online, which is often faster. For example shopping online is usually easier than going to a store especially when time is short.

All in all I can say the internet has good and negatives sites. One the one hand is the internet not good for children, because there are many dangers on the internet, on the othder hand you can benefit from internet.

Oder was könnte man ändern?

Hallo,

ich habe eine Frage zu participles im Englischen:

Ist es egal, wie das participle im Satz steht und sind alle Sätze grammatikalisch richtig?

The woman, speaking English very well, watched TV.

Speaking English very well, the woman watched TV.

UND

Waiting at the bus station, the boy thought about the day.

The waiting boy at the bus station thought about the day.

The boy, waiting at the bus station, thought about the day. 

Danke für Hilfe!!!

„The main reason being is because…“

Kann man das sagen?

Wäre eventuell jemand so lieb und könnte sich jemand meine Zusammenfassung anschauen über die USA beziehungsweise deren Einwohner besonders wegen der Grammatik, also den Tenses und der Word order? Das wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Hier ist der Text dazu:

Meine Zusammenfassung:

The text is about the US and its immigration history. Today it is called a nation of immigrants. But thousands of years ago, only Native Americans lived there. The famous railroad that we know today was built by immigrants from Japan and China who came in the middle of the 19th century. A lot of German people came to the US but some of them left because they were discriminated. When some of them stayed, they started a new life mainly in Pennsylvania but later they decided to start a new life in Wisconsin, Michigan, Minnesota, North and South Dakota, Nebraska and Iowa. Ellis Island is known as a museum in New York today but in the past it was called "The Isle of Tears" because when immigrants wanted to go through, they had to prove their good health and they had to be able to write and read. When they could neither read nor write and didn‘t have a good health, they were sent back home. The people who wanted to immigrate into the US had a lot of problems since, in 1924, the US government passed "The Immigration Act“ and people from poorer countries weren‘t allowed to go to the US. Today, if people want to live in the US, they need a greencard which allows them to live and work in the US. People are given 50000 greencards all around the world each year, so there‘s a chance for everyone to immigrate to the US. 

Habe meine english lehrerin gefragt was der fehler bei einem meiner sätze ist. Sie hat mit mir sicher 5-10 min überlegt ob mein satz richtig ist oder nicht. Danach sagte Sie das Sie sich ein wenig Zeit nehmen wird und mir eine Mail schreibt wenn Sie herausfinded was das Problem hier ist. Der punkt wäre schon wichtig für mich weil ich dieses Semester noch einen 5.5 schnitt im englisch haben will (schweizer Noten)

Hier die Mail:

You wrote: Mike saw it before they could`ve ran off. (could have plus past participle run)

It should read: Mike saw it before they could have run off. Or, Mike saw it before they ran off.

Hat Sie recht oder ist mein satz richtig?

Kann das bitte wer übersetzen?

people say things without thinking to get certain things but then once they have it or they don't get it they leave. That's why I don't get into a relationship so quickly

Wie findet ihr meine Argumentation. Ich freue mich über eine Bewertung.

Aufgabe: Never mary someone your parents didn't approve of. Do you agree?

Living a life with full of love is maybe one of the most important things in life. Especially then, when you find your biggest love, the person with whom you want to spend the rest of your life. But in many cultures this doesn't work like that. For example in India, the parents get to decide who their child will marry. By that the question arises, if parents should approve a marriage. 

Firstly, a marriage doesn't just happen. If two people want to engage, they think about it. That's also the reason that some couples break up with each other. They realize that love doesn't mean mean the same for them, e.g. they think differently about love. Just like parents do. They come from a different timeline. Oftenly they're 20 to 30 years older than their child which leads to the matter of fact that their mindset is completely different, than their childs. By asking the parents for approve, you will not get a correct answer because you're the only one who knows, what's the best for you and who fits you the most. 

Secondly, as time goes on we get older. By that we have to take responsibility for our choices. In order to do that, we have to choose between things and decide. Marriage is such a choice. If somebody can't decide, wether he/she wants to marry its partner or not, then he has to rethink his/her love life, but asking the parents (or others) is immature because you do not take responsibility. If can't decide, then I'm not ready for marriage. 

To sum up, asking the parents for approval is wrong. It's only you who can make the right decision, who can decide, what's important for him/her and what's not and if she/he is really the right one. 

Ich habe in einer Englischarbeit geschrieben: ,,He told them to dont look away.“ Meine Englisch Lehrerin hat mir dafür einen Fehler angestrichen.Ich habe mal gegoogelt, aber es gibt keine Ergebnisse.Kann mir jemand helfen?

Hallo!

Wie findet ihr diesen Leaflet? Die bullet points waren:

• explain why it is important to protect the environment in your area
• advise tourists on how to save resources on their holiday
• encourage tourists to use local products and services

Going green

How green is Wildalpen?

Wildalpen may be a small village, but that doesn't mean that it can't do a lot against climate change. With a population of just 450 people, Wildalpen is one of the smallest towns in Austria, but their participation in making our planet greener is huge. This small village contains a lot of forests and sources. That is the reason why Wildalpen's focus is set on water and trees. Nearly every source is protected and is used for local water consumption. Moreover, it is not allowed that trees are cut down, but rather they try to make the forests healthier with more biodiversity.

What can I do while I am here?

As a tourist, you can also contribute to making Wildalpen green. You should not throw away your dust in nature and stay in an eco-friendly hotel. If you arrive by train and not by car, you can reduce your carbon emissions too. In your hotel, do not ask for towels to be changed every day and turn off the lights and air conditioning when you leave your room.

Why should you go local?

We can protect our environment by using sustainable local resources. It is important to eat at local restaurants that use food grown in the area, to support them and the local farmers who try to be as eco-friendly as possible. On the one hand, this contributes to our local economy. On the other hand, this cuts down on a lot of emissions since the food doesn't need to be transported over long distances.

Enjoy your stay in Wildalpen and help us keep it clean and green for future generations!

For further information, visit our website: www.goinggreen.at

Wie findet ihr diesen Article in Englisch? Die Fragestellung war:

• what does your school do against climate change
• what is hard about it
• what do you do personally against it

Is the environment important for your school?

Have you ever thought about the importance of the environment? Usually, schools don’t care enough about this topic, but it does not have to be like this. Our commercial college tries to make the world a better place.

Our school organizes several activities like collecting litter. Furthermore, we save energy by replacing light bulbs with energy-saving lamps and we turn off the heating and the lights when we don’t need them. Another important aspect is that we can visit some very interesting lectures about environmental change.

But it always sounds easier than it is in reality. We have to give up a lot if we want to succeed. We are not allowed to print out a lot of texts; we have to make sure that our computers are powered off if we don’t need them. I also have to mention that we try to make as few emissions as possible even when we go on a trip. For example, we try to avoid planes and prefer electric vehicles.

But we can never do too much for the environment. That is the reason why we should also care about it in our free time like I do. I only buy organic food, never drink from plastic bottles, and I do not wrap my food in plastic. Last but not least, our daily routine has to change too. Not every student can drive a car to school. We should use public transportation instead or found a carpool.

So, in conclusion, what are the key points to bear in mind if you want to save our planet? To sum it up, three things are important: don’t waste electricity, avoid plastic, and make use of public transportation. On the one hand, it is not always easy to live an eco-friendly life. On the other hand, it is worth it because we can all benefit from a healthy planet.

Hallo ihr lieben, ich weiß es ist schon sehr spät aber kann mir jemand helfen dazu eine gute Outline zu schreiben, das wäre lieb dankeeeeee ich brauche eine vollständige und fertige outline

Könnte mal jemand eventuell bitte über meine Zusammenfassung über die Geschichte von Annie Moore drüber schauen? Danke!
,,The story is about Annie Moore who was the First immigrant on Ellis Island. Annie and her two younger brothers are in Ireland in 1891 and they want to board a ship which brings them to New York since their parents and their older brother are there. Annie is very sad because she thinks that she won‘t ever see the beautiful things such as the Emerald Isle again but on the other hand she is happy to see her family again. Her parents had to emigrate because of the potato famine in Ireland in 1845. It is very hard to live on the ship as it is crowd, cold and the food is poor but on January 1st, 1892 the ship reaches New York and Annie is the first person who leaves the ship and arrives on Ellis Island. She even gets $10 as a reward to be the first person on Ellis Island and she had never got so much money before. That‘s the reason why she is so happy. Now, there‘s a statue of Annie on Ellis Island.“

Hallo, kann sich wer bitte meinen Text mal anschauen und mir ein Feedback bezüglich Fehler Aufbau Inhalt geben. Im Anhang habe ich auch das Lösungsblatt angefügt.

Dear readers,

in the following text I speak about the topic the role of sports among young people. The text based on the cartoon from pinterest. The role of sports in children‘s life has changed.

The cartoon shows two parts divided into the years 1998 and 2018. In the forderground of the part of 1998 can you see a mother, who stops a boy. Next to the boy is a ball. The mother pulls hin in the house against he will. The part two of year 2018 shows the mother with the boy too. But the mother pulls the boy out of the house against he will. The Boy is holding a game console in his hands. In both parts acts the mother vigorously to get him in and out of the house. Furthermore can you see in both parts, that the boy does not seem pleased to have to finish his activity.

I think the cartoonist is intended to show, that the young generation spend variously sporty activities in the past and today. In year 1988 the boy wants to spend his free time outside playing ball games. The boy in year 2018 wants to play games inside on his game console.

I agree with the cartoonist, because playing online games are very popular at present and are the new trend under young people. A lot of teenager spend a lot of time inside and playing game console. But this have for the young generation negative consequenses. I think playing online games are very bad for the Health of young generation. Because of, the people get not enough movement and this can lead for example to overwight. On the top the youngs start to meet gaming friends instead of their real friends. Through this the youngs lost the realitiy. An another big consequense is that the childrens could become a addict. So, the young generation get not even physical but also a mental health problem.

In summary I can say that the kind of doing sport are different in the past and now. Today, the role of sport for childrens focused in playing online games.

• Zum Beispiel eine Entscheidung oder Handlung auszuführen.

Meine Übersetzung:

• 1) For example to carry out a decision or an action
• 2) oder For example, to carry out a decision or action.

Wisst ihr wie eine outline aufgebaut ist weil ich sehe einmal eine outline mit introduction und main part und einmal im internet sehe ich eine outline mit so einer groben Gliederung.Und manche sagen im internet es kommt nur ein schluss dazu.Jetzt schreibe ich morgen die klausur und bin verwirrt.Die themen sind Outline , Cartoon , und Comment.

ist die Summary gut?

Und ich hätte noch eine frage, Wie schreibe ich die Analyse? ich verstehe es nicht

Hey ^^ Ich schreibe übermorgen eine Enflisch Klausur und da muss ich eine Summary schreiben. Ich will das ganze aber nochmal üben jedoch finde ich keinen guten Text worüber ich ne summary schreiben könnte. Das soll so sein wie in der Klausur: Kann jemand seine alte englische Klausur schicken mit einer summary exercise? Das wäre meega. Am besten mit Erwartungshorizont

Hey!

Vielleicht kann sich jemand von den Englisch Profis mal meine Übung zum Partizip ansehen & nachgucken, ob alles richtig ist.

People watching (People who are watching) a demonstration often do not realize what it takes to organize such an event.
I talked to Kyle T., an animal rights activist. Because regularly organising (Because he regularly organises) demos against factory farming, ...
After having planned (After you have planned) your demo, the next thing is to tell the local police.
When having been informed (When they have been informed), they can plan how they are going to deal with it.
You should also give clear instructions to all the people attending (people who are attending).
For example, people demonstrating (people who are demonstrating) for the rights of farm animals shouldn't carry posters against child labour.
However, the most important thing is that everybody involved (everybody who is involved) should act peacefully.
If feeling (If they feel) positive about the demonstrators, people are more likely to support the case!

Not taking a risk is a real risk. Was möchte man damit sagen?

Title: Report on DoctorsIntroduction: Doctors are important people who help keep us healthy. This report talks about doctors and how much money they make and if they like their job.Salary: Doctors get paid different amounts depending on what kind of doctor they are and how long they've been working. Usually, doctors make a good amount of money, especially if they specialize in something. Even though becoming a doctor takes a lot of schooling, they usually earn enough money to live comfortably.Job Satisfaction: Some doctors really like their job because they get to help people and see them get better. But sometimes, being a doctor can be stressful. Still, many doctors feel happy because they can make a difference in people's lives.Conclusion: In the end, doctors are important in our lives. They earn good money and often feel satisfied with their work, even though it can be hard sometimes.

ist dieser report für englisch gut?

Hallo ich habe einen essay geschrieben über compulsory first aid courses for fourteen year olds und das ist ein maturabeispiel gewesen und ich wollte fragen, ob jemand das durchlesen könnte und es bewerten könnte, welche note das wäre, vor allem mit den fehlern und so. Ich habe den Text komplett alleine geschrieben und das in 20 Minuten, weil bei der Matura haben wir sehr wenig Zeit für zwei Texte also nur eine Stunde. Ich würde mich echt freuen. :)

Nowadays young people has access to more goods like education. In our modernity, they can extend their knowledge pretty easily as technology, for instance, is spread all over the world and as they can attain school which offers a ton of diverse subjects. However, people still argue that many of these don’t teach valuable lessons about the real life. Instead, young people already want to accomplish experiences that educate them for certain situations, perhaps helping someone out in hazardous situations. In result of these arguably issues, people suggest signing 14-year olds up for compulsory first aid courses.

Compulsory first aid courses can be ideal and influential for young people collecting more real life based experiences. Moreover, they can even give them an insight on how a situation can alter in only one instant and how people can put themselves in danger, precisely fighting against death. Teaching sessions about helping someone, in terms of surviving, can reflect young people’s interests. Some students already complain on having deplorable teaching sessions at school, regardless of their subject area. Maths, science, biology,  physics might enforce their intellectual thoughts but what about focusing on their mind set. Are they even that mentally stable to handle emergency situations? Would they even risk themselves to help someone out after they crashed their car into a tree? Are they even willing to sacrifice themselves and is it even worth?

At this point, students would take school more seriously as compulsory first aid courses influence students mental mind set. In this case, the integration of first aid courses into school is essential for young people. 14 year olds must bear the importance of life teaching sessions. So, the government need to go after their obligations to pay these courses. After all, education should be free and accessible to everyone. School subjects should not only consist of languages or natural sciences, but the government also have to consider the fact that students have to train their cognitive skills as well.

Moreover, the government can also detect people’s reactions would shape in a deferential way if the education system would be more comprehensive and creative. I mean, how can someone not find it intriguing that the education system develops more on its way to be immaculate. It would pique everybody’s curiosity how young people desirably helps out to change the world into a better place. Knowledge has the power for it.

In conclusion, it can be said that if someone comes up with compulsory first aid courses, it should be already associated in the school’s education system. Fourteen year old should be, at this degree, handle emergency situations and activate their human instincts to sacrifice themselves. 

Ich will sowas schreiben:

"These methods are later on contrasted in terms of their advantages and disadvantages"

Sagt man das so?

hallo,

ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit und muss eine Summary schreiben, meine Frage ist, wie ich den Einleitungssatz schreiben könnte. Ich habe hier eine Vorlage, ich verstehe sie aber nicht ganz. Dort drin steht, „the extract…taken from the novel…was written by…“

und habt ihr ein Text den ich zum Üben nutzen könnte?

JOE:

Have you read the newspaper article about Susi Shine? It says she IS EXPLOITING (exploit) Chinese labourers. Actually, that SOUND (sound) terrible.

HEATHER: | AM WORKING (work) on a class project and didn't have time to read go papers. I DOUBT (doubt) that a successful celebrity like her would do anything like that.

JOE: it is true. I PROMISE (promise). After she became famous as a singer started designing clothes and shoes. She IS MAKING (make) money with her fancy dresses and her shoes. And now she even OWN (own) a company that produces her clothes and shoes in China! Three activists investigated labour conditions at this factory that SEEM (seem) to produce shoes under terrible working conditions.

HEATHER: Oh, yes. Sure, I REMEMBER (remember) the news! The three activists ARE WORKING (work) for China Labor Watch, which is based in New York.

They ARE INVESTIGATING (investigate) this factory in China. How could I forget?

JOE:

Exactly, the activists INDENT (intend) to publish a report showing that Susi Shine BELONG (belong) to the group of business people who ARE ACCEPTINV (accept) low pay, massive overtime, crude verbal

abuse and unacceptable misuse of labour in Chinese factories to increase their profit.

Heeeey, ich schriebe morgen ein Englischarbeit und wir sollen dann über einen Film einen Essay schreiben, ich habe heute mal geübt über den Film ,,die Eiskönigin" und och wollte mal nachfragen, ob das so okay ist, also ist das gut so?

(Bitte ignoriert einfach Rechtschreibfehler)

THE FROZEN SUMMER

The Film “Frozen” is an animated Disney Film released in 2013. The story revolves around sisters Elsa and Anna and Elsa was born with magical ice powers. She runs away and Anna wants to find her. The film is a very good film for the whole family because it has a lot of emotions and it wouldn’t be boring.

The Film is about two sisters Anna and Elsa and Elsa was born with magical powers, but she cant control them. So she runs away to the mountains to live alone, because she turns Arendell to an very long winter. Anna go together with Olaf the Snowman, Kristoff and his reindeer Sven to bring back the Summer. Bacause of Elsa Annas hair turns white and Sven brings her back to the castel to Prince Hans, because only true love can save her life. Olaf cames and do a fire, but Anna leave the castel to seek Kristoff. At the same Time Hans wanted to kill Elsa,because he want the castle for himself. But then Anna turns Into Ice and Elsa was very sad, so she hugs her sister Anna and then Anna returns to normal and Elsa can Controll her ice Powers.

My favourite Character is Olaf the Snowman. I like him because he’s a bit funny and he tells jokes at a difficult Situation. And I like him because he’s friendly and ready to help.

My favourite Scene is the Scene with Olaf and Anna next to the Fire. The Scene when Olaf was very happy because he saw Kristoff and Sven coming back to the Castle. I like it, because Olaf try to help Anna and he say she has to stay next to the fire to keep warm. And I like it, because Olaf is very happy when he saw Kristoff and Sven come back to the Castle.

My favourite Quote is ‘‘some People are worth melting for‘‘ from Olaf. I like it, because it‘s from Olaf and it shows that you like someone very much, if you would do this for someone. So it shows that you are ready to do something like that for someone.

The first lesson you can learn from the film is, that you shouldn’t trust anyone you’ve only know for one day, because it can be very dangerouse and you really don’t know the person very well. The second lesson is, you don’t have to give up, when you try something. When you really want to do something, then you dont have to give up very early.

The Film Frozen is a very good disney film for everyonen. It is very adenturous and also a bit sad. The film is definitely a film you should watch.

Könnte ich das in der Englischarbeit ungefähr auch so machen?

Ich hoffe jemand kann mir helfen, danke schonmal

:)

Hallo

Ich schreibe das kommende englisch Abitur in NRW 2024.

Die Frage ist ganz banal aber die Kenner werden es verstehen: Was soll man dazu großartig lernen? Nicht nur in englisch, auch Beispielsweise in deutsch.

Ich meine der Aufbau ist ja immer gleich. Du bekommst ein text. Aufgabe 1: summary.

Aufgabe 2: Analysis

Aufgabe 3: creative task ( fortsetzen oder sowas)

Worauf soll man sich da groß vorbereiten?

Hallooo!

Ich schreibe am Dienstag die Probe ZAP und habe ein Problem.. Und zwar hat mein Lehrer mich total verwirrt mit den Aufgaben in den originalen ZAP‘s.. ich meine damit, dass wenn dort eine Aufgabe gegeben ist mit „Explain ….“ , dann weiß ich ja nicht das ich in Wirklichkeit ein Summary schreiben muss.. Außerdem weiß ich nicht, wenn da steht „comment on“ ob ich nh ganze Argumentation schreiben soll oder nur meine Argumente kurz mit einer Begründung.. könnte mir eventuell jemand helfen dabei, dass ich sehen kann was genau ich jetzt machen soll??

Guten Tag,

Und zwar schreibe ich am Montag eine Englischarbeit , wofür ich noch viel lernen möchte . Meine Frage wäre , ob der Text den ich geschrieben habe , den Anforderungen eines Summarys entspricht . Den zugehörigen feature article habe ich hinzugefügt.

Ich bedanke mich schon im vorraus für ihre Hilfe!!!!

Welcher Satz ist richtig:

• So the first thing is to stop and think.
• So the first thing is stopping and thinking.

Dankeschön :)

Hallo ich hätte da mal eine Frage.

Der Satz: Max left his book on the tabel. He stood up from his chair.
kann man ja durch participle clauses verkürzen also: Leaving his book on the tabel, Max stood up from his chair. Geht auch:  Max left his book on the tabel stood up from his chair? Könnt ihr mir das erklären?

Hallo!

Kann man hier statt could auch can schreiben?

Sole traders could also be called "freelancers".

"Did you ever catch yourself living in the past and losing focus on reality and presence? To some extent, it's totally normal to reflect upon great memories and experiences, but there are also some boundaries: If you are craving about the past rather than enjoying the here and now, this will lead to you always being unhappy with yourself and your surroundings. I am here to tell you that the past is there to remind you of all the great experiences you have had in your life, but you can't stick to them life-long . Even beautiful things have their ends, and you need to realize that. Just because your life goes on or some things have changed in your life, making that experience not relivable, it does not necessarily mean that your life will never be as great as it was. And remember: Maybe you are missing out on great people while crying over your best friend you lost and who was never good for you. All the changes you face are meant to occur. Despite all the shifts, there is someone who will always stay and never betray you: That's you and yourself! So don't stick to the past and other people if there are thousands of miles you need to discover before life really ends for you. Enjoy every minute and be grateful for having food, clean water, nice people, and a comfy place to live in!"

Wie kann ich den Text noch sprachlich verbessern?

hallo, hat jemand ein bespiel Text damit ich summary üben kann mit einer Lösung eventuell?

Danke im Voraus

Ist das richtig?

Aktiv: The cat is playing piano

Passiv: The piano was played by the cat

oder

Passiv: The piano is played by the cat

Ich danke euch schonmal! ☺️🙏

Situation:

Eine Frau isst viele Teigfladen und darin ist Fleisch versteckt.

Da kommt der Kommentar! And that is the reason she has the size of a house!

Was heisst das?

Stimmt dieser Satz.

If you have bad grades, you will get punched.

If + Present und will + Base Form. So sollte der Satz aufgebaut sein.

Wo ist der Unterschied zwischen:

little - less - the least

few - fewer - the fewest

Stimmt das:

a lot of - more - the most

Warum gehört bei diesen Sätzen einmal less und einmal fewer. Also warum darf man nicht less/fewer vertauschen?

Kids move less and less.

People play fewer and fewer card games.

Lg.

1. P/presentation

2.About the S/series

3.About the C/creators

4.About the P/plot

5.About the C/characters

???

Danke im voraus

ist meine Summary so gut aufgebaut??

der Text:

Ich hab ein One-Way Ticket gebucht, aber da ist ein Rückflugdatum mit dabei.

Ich werde natürlich an dem Tag nicht zurück fliegen. Muss ich dann Strafe bezahlen?

Cancellation available before flight and airline penalty is 200.00 EUR. Our own administration fee may apply as detailed on our travel terms and conditions.

Change available before flight and airline penalty is 150.00 EUR. You will have to pay any further costs if there is an upgrade or tax adjustment and our own administration fee may apply as detailed on our travel terms and conditions.

Was bedeutet das?

Hallo!

Ich Frage mich ob da ( beim %) ein Komma hin muss:

The extract of the novel " The Giver", written by Lowry, published in 1993 deals with the protagonist Jonas(%) who lives in a small Community(%) which is completly regulated and very restricted.

Vielen Dank

Z.b.das:Born on June 24, 1987, Lionel Messi is a football star for FC Barcelona and also a

great guy. He's won the FIFA Ballon d'Or multiple times. Off the field, he started the

"Foundation Leo Messi" in 2007. This foundation helps kids with education and

healthcare around the world. Messi donates to causes like cancer research and

has been a UNICEF ambassador since 2010, speaking up for children's rights and

better education

Even though Messi does good things, some say that he doesn't do anything for

society. In my opinion, Messi is not just a football icon; he's like a real-life superhero

using his fame to make the world better.

Hi, ich blende euch mal hier ein Bild ein von meinen Englischhausaufgaben... Und dann noch das was ich eingesetzt habe, kann mir dann jemand bitte sagen ob das richtig oder falsch ist? Danke und Lg

1) The, a 2) The 3) a, the, the, nothing 4) a 5) the, a, a, nothing, a 6) The, nothing 7) The, nothing, The, nothing 8) The, The

Habe Schwierigkeiten mit einem Buch, das offenbar in Dialekt geschrieben ist. Was ist das für ein Englisch und was bedeuten die Sätze?

“And eke the zeale which yt evoketh.”

“And his aforetime scorn of its seeming foolyshnesse; also”

”As many an other hath erred.”

”The writere essayeth the game.”

"A nation which can prefer disgrace to danger is prepared for a master, and deserves one."

Haben die Russen zuwenig acht darauf gegeben wen sie wählten? Droht Trump das gleiche in Amerika zu tun und wird Europa dann fallen?

Heyy Leute wir sollten in English eine Diskussion (Comment ) schreiben meine war nicht so gut was könnte man dort verbessern ich weiß das mit den Zahlen ist schon mal falsch was aber noch Thema ist Future Work.

Welcome to the discussion, over the last two decades the world has changed

dramatically. Not only in the aspect of developing but also in the the future,

today I’m going to show you the positive and negative effects of the future

work. As you know today many people are buying on the Internet not only that

we also let KI Intelligence do some of our work. However many people and

Experts are arguing that this could be a big concern for us and it is indeed. Do

you think our kids will have a different work-life than us? Now let’s consider the

positive aspects, and let the ball rollin.

1. The first positive aspect is that Robots will do our work. They will do our

dangerous work, like working in a very cold environment or like lifting

heavier weights or in Industries where they are doing a lot of work today

but in the future they will do most of the work. And they will work

without taking any breaks so it would be more beneficial for Industries

and big Business owners.

2. For the more we can’t ignore the second big aspect that the future work

gave us Online ordering. That has the benefit we can order almost

everything online which is very beneficial we can look in different stores

around the globe and buy from everywhere. We also have many

discounts and after ordering we can give feedback on the products.

3. The last positive aspect is that today also can work from home. Which

changed our worklife during the Corona Virus. You don’t need to go to

office so then you can also spare your time and you can also work in

global companies from home.

While you have know heard the positive aspects now you will hear about

the negative and bad aspect

1. Starting with the downside the first negative aspect it is that we

will loose our jobs to Robots it is beneficial but it will also cause job

losses and very few jobs that people can do. For example Cashiers

and construction workers to name a few are those who will most

likely loose their jobs to the robots.

2. The second negative argument has to be addressed is, is that

because of work of future many people are now ordering online

this has the bad side, that their will be less social interaction

between people and this will cause a great harm to us and our

Society. There are also many online scams that will and are doing

harm to us and it will cause fraud and theft.

3. Moving to the third point that is concerning us is that many

Companies and Enterprises are allowing and making their workers

work from home, which can effect people in many ways for

example like feelings of Isolation and it can also cause lack of

productivity because you will be working from home and their will

be no social interaction with colleagues and this can be a very

important issue.

As you now have heard of the conclusion of the future work and

the many positive and negative aspects of it. We can say that we

can only hope that it will get better for us because as u now know

we really can’t make a real Summation. Because it can be

beneficial for us and dangerous for us. And Yes the life’s of our

Children will be very different than ours because they haven’t seen

and experienced what we have so they will be very delusional and

cannot really understand our life’s and how we went.

2. Harvard University: According to the Harvard University website, the average age of undergraduate students is 21 years old, while the average age of graduate students is 28 years old.

es geht mir um graduate students, sind damit die master Leute gemeint?

Hallo, ich muss zu jeder dieser Bilder Maximum zwei Sätze auf Englisch schreiben ich weiß allerdings nicht wie ich das pro Bild zusammenfassen soll kann jemand mir helfen? Ich bin doch sogar auf Deutsch nur schreiben und ich komm damit klar oder irgendwie den Anfang geben

"Damn, don't talk about how to become confident if you're pretty. Let's just be honest: Fake it 'til you make it. That's all confidence is about."

People are already failing at finding the correct definition of 'confidence.' Confidence is so much more than faking or a result of a pretty face. Confidence is simply having trust in oneself. It's being aware of one's strengths and weak points. It doesn't mean you are drooling over yourself 24/7 or acting like you are the coolest person on earth. Communicating your weak points, not in a cheesy way, is clearly showing a great sign of confidence. Maintaining faith in yourself and never backing down, whatever someone thinks of you, is confident. I am not here to teach you how to become confident because it's a heavy and long progress expecting ups and downs to achieve. But keep the difference between being pretty, successful, or an excessive show-off far from being confident. You can't even just be born confident; it's a long-term learning process. But if you are attached to it once, you go all ways with it!

Wie kann ich den Text noch sprachlich verbessern?

Gibt es eigentlich ein Synonym dafür? Ich finde there are /is klingt voll langweilig . Geht there occur vllt.? Oder welche könnt ihr vorschlagen?

Würdet ihr was an meinem Text verbessern?

Aufgabe: Describe the diagram on page 53.

Das Diagramm + Hilfen:

Meine Beschreibung: The following chart is a line graph and was published by the "California Department of Finance, U.S. Census Burreau". The line graph is about the population of California and shows in percent the future population/cultural shift in the years 2010 to 2060 with the four groups: Latino, White, Asian and Black.

Most people are white, 40 percent in 2010, but the number of whites drops steadily. 33 percent in 2030 and 29.7 percent in 2060. The next largest group, with slightly fewer people, are Latinos, 38 percent in 2010, but the number of Latinos goes up steadily. 44 percent in 2030 and 48 percent in 2060. A minority of the population is Asian in 2010 at 12 percent, but the number will doesnt change at around 13.4 percent until 2060. The biggest minority of the population is Black in 2010 at 3 percent, but the number will doesnt change at around 4,3 percent until 2060.

Hello everyone!

A short while ago I found a letter in a library book. The letter is about the immigration of Albrecht and his brother Heinrich. They had to leave their country because there wasnt enough work. Their journey to Le Harve was horrible because there were lots of people on the ship and it took two weeks. Abrecht packed a lot of food with because he was warned. During the voyage on the ship, Heinrich became ill and he had to take care of him for two weeks. When they arrived, Albrecht got ill too and had to stay in the hospital on Ellis Island.

After he got better, he went to Heinrich , who has already found a room ,and lived with him. They both were happy to be in New York. Albrecht found a work in a hotel and Heinrich wanted to work on a building site

Hier der Original Text

MfG

Hallo,

es ist wirklich keine Hausaufgabe. Ich will nur sehen wie so ne Mediation ist und aussieht.

MfG

Use linking words to connect your sentences within each paragraph.

In the text below, linking words are missing. Fill in the blanks with appropriate linkers from the box.

all in all • but • first of all • for example • for one thing • perhaps • possibly

Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone. …, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, …, you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door. …, outside the house it was even worse. …, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. … there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. …, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. …, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

Ich habe das so gemacht, aber bin mir da nicht so sicher:

Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone.  First of all, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, possibly , you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door.  But outside the house it was even worse. For example, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. Perhaps, there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. For one thing, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. All in all, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

Klar: Textstellen markieren, Kernaussagen verstehen, das Wichtigste rausschreiben und in eigenen Worten wiedergeben aber das dauert zu lange irgendwie...

Gibt's da irgendwie eine schnellere Lösung?

Auch um den Text schneller zu verstehen...

Wenn man also den Titel, den Autor, das Thema, die Textsorte, und das Erscheinungsjahr in der ersten Aufgabe, der Summary schon angegeben hat, muss man das auch in der zweiten Aufgabe, der Analyse, auch (noch mal) machen?

1. She asked what their main food in winter was

Oder

2. She asked what their main food was in winter

The way she thought it should

warum sagt man night irgendwas mit imagined für das Vorstellen

ich verstehe das im Englischen einfach nicht.

weiss jemand woran das liegt ?

Ein Satz mit concentrate habe ich: Peter is very succesful in school, because he is concentrating on his exams. Ist das richtig

Aufgabe: Underlinr thr most important information in the text and sum up the text in your own words

The novel, For the win", written by Cory Doctrow and published by Tor Teen in 2010, is about an imaginary future where western countries have stopped buying products made in China

Ich hätte eine Frage zum Summary schreiben. Nämlich muss man ja im Ende sagen was der Text aussagt aber ich muss über ein fiktionales Buch schreiben das nichts genaues sagt und man soll ich nicht seine eigene Meinung benutzten also was soll ich schreiben.

Ich schreibe morgen eine Englischklausur mit den Themen Summary und Comment, da ich in letzter Zeit aufgrund von Krankheit sehr oft im Unterricht gefehlt habe, habe ich daher nicht so viel Lernstoff mitbekommen. Ich habe mich gerade eben an einen Text ran gemacht und eine Summary dazu geschrieben. Ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn jemand kurz drüber gucken könnte, um mir Feedback zu geben (einen Comment schreibe ich gleich noch, den werde ich nachher höchstwahrscheinlich ebenefalls hochladen).

Der original Text:

Meine Summary:

The article "The Dark Solitude of a Lockdown", published on September 10,2020 from Jenny Stevens deals with the reasons why the author moves into an own apartment but notice during the Lockdown, that she want to live in a flat.

In the beginning of the article, the author weites about that she lived for the past eight months at her friends apartment but decides to move into her own because of mental health. At first she enjoys the time and the place for her own, even when there are some quiet and boring days. During the Lockdown her mind changes although she stays in contact with her friends, but after some time she feeled lonely and getting jealous of her friends who are in a flat together. At this Point she decides, that she wants to live in a flat in the future. In the end of the text a friend ask her to move into his flat.

In a nutshell, she ist going to move into the flat with her friend and some others.

(175 Wörter)

Vielen Dank an jeden !!

Weis jemand von euch wo man Texte zum üben findet für eine summary ?

Ich glaube meins wäre ''the dildo of consequences often arrives unlubed''

hallo wollte fragen ob diese outline gut ist.

The excerpt of an article "I Know What You Did Last Math Class," written by Jan Hoffman and published in "The New York Times" on 4. May 2008, Deals with school programs for parents to check their children's grades and behavior. In the following paragraphs, we will outline the information related to the benefits of these programs, as presented in the text.

The main body of the text highlights that many parents utilize these programs to exert greater control over their children's lives, especially during a phase when teenagers seek more independence. Parents argue that the intensely competitive college admissions process compels them to frequently check their children's online grades. Interestingly, many parents who engage in regular online grade checks fondly reminisce about their own adolescence, where deception was common. The advent of programs like Edline eliminates the covert satisfaction associated with such deception. Nevertheless, parents like Mrs. Tarantino, a supporter of Power School, contend that the stakes have drastically changed, citing today's all-encompassing academic pressure compared to previous generations.

Quantifying the precise impact of these programs on academic performance proves challenging due to numerous variables. However, principals anecdotal report that these programs have succeeded in motivating parents and students who were previously challenging to engage. They have notably assisted middle school boys in improving their organizational skills.

According to Ron Jones, the principal of Huth Middle School, situated in Matteson, IIlinois, a middle-class suburb of Chicago with a 90-percent minority student population, "Edline opens up communication between parents and teachers. It helps keep the children focused on their academics." These software solutions also prove beneficial for working parents, allowing divorced parents to access information without the need for direct contact.

In Noblesville, Indiana, after a survey indicated that parents felt adequately informed through PowerSchool and subsequent email exchanges with teachers, the middle-school principal decided to forego parent-teacher conferences and allocate the time back to classroom instruction.

In conclusion, these programs have both advantages and disadvantages. They enhance communication between parents and teachers, motivate parents and students, and cater to the needs of working parents. However, accurately quantifying their impact on academic performance remains challenging, and concerns regarding student privacy persist.

Hallo,

Ich habe im test nur wegen 0,5 punkte einen 5er. Meine frage ist ich sollte posseive case:whose is it? (Newspaper-today): newspaper of today , geschrieben und die lehrerin hat es gestrichen und today‘s newspaper hingeschrieben. Meine frage ist, dass newspaper of today auch grammatikalisch korrekt ist oder? Wenn ja brauche ich bitte paar überzeugende Beispiele. Danke.

Wie findet ihr diesen Argumentative Essay, ich hab heute die Klassenarbeit zurückbekommen und hab eine 4 bekommen. (9.Klasse)

Die Aufgabe war folgende: Schreibe einen Argumentative Essay über das Thema: "Doing an exchange year in Australia is a great idea". Wir mussten mindestens 3 Argumente dafür, und 3 dagegen finden.

Australia, the continent where the most dangerous animals are living, is very interesting for students who want to do an exchange year in a country where people speak English. The following essay will show argument sfor, and against doing an exchange year in Australia.

At the beginning, we will look at the arguments against the exchange year.

First, in Australia there are lots of dangerous animals, for example snakes, spiders, and others, they can kill you with just a bite, and it could be hard to get the medicin for that.

Furthermore, you could argue you cant visit your family very often, the distance between Australia and Germany is really big, and the tickets for planes are really expensive.

The last argument against the exchange year, is that it might be hard for you to understand the Australian people talking, because of their hard accent.

Lets move on to the arguments for doing an exchange year in Australia.

Firstly, Australia offers a lot when it comes to nature, on the one day you could see a shark swimming in the sea, and on the other, you could be in the desert.

Another argument for doing the exchange year is, that you can learn a lot about other cultures, for example the Aboriginals. You could learn how they lived in the Outback, or about the stolen generations.

Last but not least, you could argue that you would learn the language, if you are doing an exchange year in Australia, because you would speak English all day long.

In my opinion, an exchange year to Australia is a great way to learn English, and a lot about the aboriginals and how the lived there

Wir sollten einen Text über "Does money make happy?" schreiben. Passt das dann so?:

Happiness. Is there anything we are striving for more? Some people might say they are seeking money, their dream job, or maybe the love of their life. But all these goals are lifting up the parallel between work and happiness. These goals are about making you happy. But this brings us to our main question: Do we really have to work hard and sweaty to end up content and happy? The easiest way to come up with an answer is looking at the correlation of a job's earning and the feeling of happiness. Evidently, not every wealthy person died happy or content. There are thousands of billionaires not being thrilled about their great richness. They did work hard for their money, but this isn't making them feel okay. Looking at the opposite, we see poor people left with nothing leading a quite fulfilling life. They had enough time to ponder essential aspects of life and to conclude that life isn't about the biggest cars, houses, or private jets. And I am convinced that this work of thinking and absolutely correct conclusion takes a lot more effort than some moneybags made. The material the world is holding up for you if you work hard doesn't make you happy in any kind. A clear sentiment focusing on important things such as maintaining a loyal relationship with friends and family or growing up mentally results in a great life. Material is temporary, but what remains are your positive thoughts and ideas you share with people you love and your attemptment to become the best version of yourself. Dreams should follow you and not the other way around.

Guten Mittag,

Wir schreiben in ungefähr 1 Woche in Englisch eine Arbeit. Nun ist das Problem, dass mein Englisch sehr schlecht ist und diese Arbeit ein Listening und ein Text mit Gapped summary beinhaltet.

Hat jemand Gute Ratschläge wie ich das Listening üben könnte und kennt Websiten dafür? (Text hören und danach z.B. einen Lückentext ausfüllen : Niveau: Klasse 12)

Mein Wortschatz und mein Leseverständnis sind ebenso schlecht, bei einem Gapped Summary hatte ich bis jetzt immer maximal 2 Lücken richtig. Wie übe ich das am besten in unter 7 Tagen?

(Websiten und generell Tipps wären großartig)

viel Dank im Voraus

Guten Tag, wollte nur einmal nachfragen, ob ich da an der Summary noch was verbessern könnte. Vielen Dank im Voraus

Hier ist der Text:

Das ist die Summary:

The extract from the book „The Epic City“ written by Kushanava Chaudhury published in 2017 is about the authors childhood in New Jersey and his family. 

The parents of Chaudhury already moved twice to America and moved twice back to India. They are both scientists, who cannot decide, between their hometown and career opportunities abroad. 

As his father is forty years old, he quits his job at a government research institute in Calcutta for better career opportunities in Highland Park, New Jersey. However the job opportunities, turn out to be weaker, so Choudhury‘s father has to take on work in fields, which he hates. 

Although they do not see themselves as immigrants and prepare sometimes to go somewhere else, they stay in New Jersey and Chaudhurry has a great childhood in New Jersey. After Choudhurry‘s senior year he is accepted at the Princeton University. As a result, his parents are really excited, because it is one of the best universities in the USA and the university determines a lot in life. Although Chaudhurry acknowledges, that it is one of the greatest universities, its difficult for him to decide. He is unsure, whether he should go to Princeton or to visit his home town for a year. Chaudhurry decides to visit his hometown, but his parents do not allow him to take a year off, because it is well know university and a great opportunity for Chaudhury. As a result, he studys at Princeton and then goes to Calcutta. 

Wir sollten einen Text über self-awareness schreiben und wollte fragen, ob das so passt? :

"I have been pondering my behavior extensively and have come to the conclusion that some people deserve much better. Sometimes, I catch myself treating people as if they were my closest friends despite their jealousy and the hate-filled thoughts they spread about me. This is not about people having a bad day and getting me wrong due to their resulting bad temper. Everyone has bad days and can seem annoyed or miss the respect to another person. But I am talking about people whose envy is very evident and who try to ruin someone else's day just because they seem to be leading a fulfilling life. I always feel guilty for these poor people, but reminding yourself that you totally deserve your success in life or work is essential at this point. You're not supposed to try to uplift their mood in vain because these people will never change and want to see you fail. Leave them behind and stay focused."

Frage steht im Titel. Danke!

Hallo,

sollte ich bei einer Summary im Englischen lieber schreiben:

"The three just stare at each other.„ / "The three of them just stare at each other. "

Es handelt sich ja schließlich um Personen…

Danke!

Hallo,

ist das ein guter Satz für die Einleitung einer Summary?

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt, zum Beispiel die Kommasetzung? Denn bei Datumsangaben habe ich gelernt, dass die Kommas so gesetzt werden, aber vielleicht ist das in dem Satz falsch…

The novel "Boot Camp" written by Morton Rhue and published on 16 September, 2006, by Fischer is about the boy Garrett, who is sent to a boot camp by his parents, and his experiences there. 

Danke!

Hallo,

wie kann ich diesen Einleitungssatz für eine Summary im Englischen so umschreiben, dass der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt ist und der Satz besser klingt?

The novel "Boot Camp", which was written by Morton Rhue and was published on 16 September, 2006, by Fischer, is about the boy Garrett, who is sent to a boot camp by his parents, and his experiences there. 

Not only could Dave be talking about the car, he could be talking about a firearm, alluding to one with range, and, perhaps, an extended clip, in which the ‘extra seats’ he is referring to are meant for bullets in a gun, rather than passengers in a vehicle.

Ich sehe das sehr oft, dass in Texten diese Form genutzt wird, aber wie nutze ich sie selbst richtig?
Und ist das Englisch des Zitats eigentlich gut oder sind Fehler vorhanden auch mit Blick auf Interpunktion.

Robert: I watched a good film yesterday.

Heißt es dann nicht "Robert said that he has watched a good film the day before"?

"Trust the overthinker who tells you they love you. They have, most assuredly, thought of every reason not to."

Bitte keine pure Übersetzung. Englisch kann ich selbst.

Eure Interpretation bitte.

Würde dieser Text in english einem Peel paragraf entsprechen ( 10 Schulstufe )

Should young people take Relationship advice from adults?

No, I stand against that, not because I think the older generation doesn’t know anything about love or Relationships but because this is a new era.

The world has changed in a lot of ways positively and negatively, teenagers now tend to start and end relationships over their phone, because its way easier.

Nowadays if someone knows your name, it only takes a couple of second to find Info’s about you. Like where you go to school or what your social media accounts are. And if teenagers find somebody attractive, they most likely ask for their snap or Insta, not their Phone number. People can also have way easier long-distance relationships over the Phone, no more weeks of waiting just to send a letter to a friend now it only takes a click.

I think in some ways the older Generation can still give tips, like on dates and things that haven’t changed but sumarised I think youre better of talking to your teenage friends : ).

Vielen Dank

Habe leider nicht die Zeit es auszutippen.

LG

Soweit ich weiß 300 Wörter,bin mir aber nicht sicher

LG

Bitte was formales, was man in einer Summary benutzen könnte.

LG

Ich weiß nicht wieso aber ich weiß nicht wie ich die wichtigsten Sachen im Text zusammenfassen soll

Hallo, ich muss für die Schule Leute in England befragen, aber ich bin ziemlich schüchtern und trau mich nicht. Könntet ihr so tuen als wärt ihr Engländer und die Fragen beantworten.

if you’re stranded on an island, what is the most important issue

Who is leader/how to decide who the leader is

What would you train on the island (like building shelter)

You can take One item from home to the island, witch one

jetzt fragen unabhängig von den Fragen oben

What is the most challenging thing of today

Wich chores need most time

What invention would make life easier

Ist das soweit richtig:

When Blacksburg Middle School has closed in the spring of 2020 because of Covid-19, she wanted her studenrs to have access to books.

Meine Lehrerin hat das "has closed" mit einem "closed/was closed" durchgestrichen. Aber meiner Meinung nach, könnte ich ja auch auf die jetzigen Auswirkungen hinweisen, da die Schüler eben zu dem Zeitpunkt keinen Zugang zu Bücher hatten. Also warum wäre dann "has closed" falsch, vielleicht wäre es unüblich im Sprachgebrauch, aber doch nicht falsch?

Hallo könnt ihr hier mal überschauen und evtl die Sätze korrigieren?

liebe Grüße

If you had lived at that time you wouldn’t kneew (not, to know) how to drive a car.

If you had lived in those days you wouldn’t heard (not, to hear) television.

If you had lived in this country at that time then you will spoke (to speak) what we would now call old-fashioned English.

If you had lived in the south of the country you would been (to be) either very rich or very poor.

If you had lived in the north of the country you would disagreed (to disagree) with one important aspect of southern life.

If you had lived at that time then you would had decided (to have to decide) whether to support the men in blue or the men in grey.

If you had lived in the north of this country you would prepared (to be prepared) to die for man's freedom.

If you had lived in that century you would saw (to see) battles.

Hey, könnt ihr die Sätze kontrollieren und ggf korrigieren? Wäre echt nett:)

liebe Grüße

If he had known his enemies were plotting to kill him he wouldn’t goes to Dallas. (not go to Dallas

If he had known his marriage to Diana would be an unhappy one he wouldn’t married her. (not marry her)

If he had known an armed man was waiting for him he wouldn’t leaved the hotel.(not leave the hotel)

If the people of Ireland had known the potato crop was going to fail in 1845 they sowed other crops.(sow other crops)

Hallo, könnt ihr mal schauen ob die If-Sätze richtig sind?

Liebe Grüße ☺️

-If I see him I will tell him the news. (to tell)

-If you listened to me you would learn something. (to listen)

-If you hadn’t stoped smoking your days are numbered.(not stop)

-If I heard the telephone ringing I would have answered it. (to hear)

-If you play with the boy he will be happier. (to play)

-If she had really loved him she would let him to go. (to let)

Muss in eine Summary Schlussteil oder nicht ? Und bei einem Comment wo soll ich meinen Standpunkt nenne im Hauptteil oder Schluss

Moin, Englisch LK 11. wie findet ihr meine summary? Also von dem englisch level her und grammatik etc

Hallo, könnt ihr die Sätze kontrollieren und ggf. korrigieren? Wäre sehr nett:)

Liebe Grüße

If the patient has a pain in her tummy I will ask about her diet.

If the patient has a pain in her tummy I would ask about her diet.

If the patient had a pain in her tummy I would have ask about her diet.

Der Text

Meine Summary

Moin,

Ich weiß ,,he/ she/ it das s muss mit“. Aber auch wenn es eventuell einfach ist kapier ich es nicht. Sagt man: the House has oder have a beautiful garden“ ? Benutzt man bei Dingen wie das Auto, der Hund und so has oder have?

Ich hab diese Mediation geschrieben und wollte fragen, wie ich den verbessern könnte oder ob das so passt:

Hello Stefan,

since you've told me you're looking for a holiday job in London, I've been searching for different work options and came across a quite popular restaurant called "Herman ze German". Firsty, you need to know what the owner's idea of opening this restaurant was and how it came to this restaurant.

As the owners, Falak Shahi and Florian, are of the opinion that German sausages aren't comparable to English ones, their friends have taken the intiative to bring them original sausages made in German. So the couple decided to sell their sausages in local pups so called "sausageweeks". As an upgrade they started to sell their sausages on a music festival which has contributed to high success. In 2010 they opened their first restaurant located in London. Maybe you're wondering why this restaurant did blow up and has attracted so much attention.This is because Germany is very popular in UK and Berlin is seen as a trendy city. But what also plays a big role is German and English people raising awarness of how close we actually are and not as different as they thought to be. Falakshahi and Florian are also playing with cliches and have decorated their restaurants full of cliches. That seems to many clients pretty hilarious and cool. The last thing I want to address is their future objectives. They are dreaming that two or three new restaurants will open within a year and sausages will be offered with their own logo in English grocery stores. I hope this text could inspire you a little on your job search and was interesting to read.

Take care!