Summary – die neusten Beiträge

gibts noch andere möglichkeiten außer "the text is about..."?

Hey, was kann ich in einem Summary für Wörter oder Konstruktionen benutzen, dass die Sätze nicht so eintönig und doof klingen. Ich mein, es klingt nicht besonders schön wenn man jeden einzelnen Satz mit HE; HE; HE; HE; HE; HE; HE; beginnt.

Ich freue mich über jeden Vorschlag.

hallo, ich schreibe am freitag eine englischarbeit, in der eine summary vorkommt. (klasse 7) ich weiß, dass man diese eigentlich in present schreiben muss aber muss man sie wirklich durchgängig im present schreiben? ich finde es dumm denn der text spielt im past und es hört sich komisch an wenn man das alles ins present setzt ... darf man teilweise auch past verwenden?

beispielsatz: in the late 1870s they lived in jacobs valley in idaho ...

ich finde es würde sich komisch anhören wenn man den in der summary plötzlich im present schreiben müsste, da es ja eindeutig 1870 war und keine gegenwart... vielen dank schon mal vorweg

sina

Was bedeuten die einzelnen Buchstaben beim tattsatz ? Das erste t Titel das a Autor Das zweite t Thema ?? Und was das 4. ? Kann mir bitte jemand helfen

In Chapter 3 of the novel „No Tigers in Africa“, written by Norman Silver, published in 1990, the main character Selwyn explains his familiar situation, especially the difficult relationship between his father and his mother, and his resulting problems by comparing the events in Bristol with those in South Africa. The action is set at Bristol in the present and the narrator remembers details of his dormer life in South Africa.

At the beginning Selwyn tells about how hard his father works, so that they could have the same standard of living as they had in Africa. However he says that for his mother the situation is difficult too, because in Africa she used to have a good life with lots of friends, but not in England. In addition he criticises how difficult it is to make friends in England in contrast to Africa and says because of that problem, his mother is not (oder no?) longer her old self, she is uncertain. Besides that he compares the situation in England with their move from Cape Town to Johannesburg, when he was seven. Selwyn admits that he needs time to “arrive”, but that the time, when they settle to Joburg, was actually more easy than settle to this country. After he mention he often skips school and goes to a place where he could see the gorge and the suspension bridge, however he hears that that bridge is a favourite place for suicides and finds similarities to his situation. Thereafter the narrator speaks about Brunel and the Voortrekker Monument which was built because of the victory of the whites over the blacks years ago in South Africa. Moreover he describes his feelings when he stays at the gorge at this time by comparing it with the thoughts he had when he looked over the railway of the Voortrekker monument, because there was a voice in his had, saying he should jump. However the voice means that he should jump over the cliffs inside him .He concludes that he needs to built such a bridge, metaphoric meaning, inside him. On top of that Selwyn tells when he walks once from gorges to the market, where he is instead of school often too, one day he recognizes his mother who is cheating on his dad with a black man. This is a big shock for him. The boy tries to explain his feelings, says he is confused and cannot believe what has happened. Selwyn describes his condition by comparing it with the a ground which has opened under his feet, describes that it is deeper than the liftshaft his dad fell down once at Christmas after he has drunk too much. Finally Selwyn feels very bad and sick, basically helpless and lost, he does not know what to do and starts to be silent again.

Muss zu einer Summary ein Schlusssatz? Wenn ja was muss drin sein ... eigene Meinung darf ja in keine Summary... LG coco

Also dies was jetzt folgt ist eine eher schlechte Summary wie ich finde aber zu meiner Verteidigung hatte auch nicht sehr viel zeit Wäre schön wenn ihr mir schnellstmöglichst(da ich es morgen abgeben muss) mit Verbesserungsvorschlägen helfen könntet

The lost girl

The folk tale 'The lost girl' is about a family on a north Island with a daughter, who disappeared.One day the father and his sons come to a beautiful house on an island. A man, who lives in the house and invite them, introduce them his wife, who is the lost girl. They was very happy to see her again! After the man ask the father, if he has cows to sell, but he must tell him the way to get here. The man says, that he will come and get a cow. As exchange the father can choose anything, that he would like. Then they go home and the cow was dead!

Hey, hab 'nen Summary zu dem Buch "Speak" auf englisch geschrieben, kann mir jemand sagen ob da Fehler sind? Hört sich nämlich übelst scheiße an, finde ich. :D

Summary The novel „Speak“ by Laurie Halse Anderson is about a girl, called Melinda Sordino who has been raped at a summer party and has then called the police. It tells about how her „friends“ react after holidays and how she lost her voice and comes along with all.

The party has been given by one of Melinda’s friends. At the moment she has been raped she has called the police to help her but when they arrived they only find many drunken teenagers with illegal alcohol. After holiday in High School she becomes an Outcast because nobody of her ex-friends knows what has really happened. The ‚raper’ is on the same school as she is, so it’s really hard for her to forget everything. She makes and looses new friends and spends this terrible year with realizing the whole situation and finding her voice back which she has lost as a result of her trauma to tell the truth. Only her art teacher notices that she is a nice and talented girl.

Dankee. ;)

Hallo, ich muss als Englischhausaufgabe einen Summary (Inhaltsangabe) von einem Sachtext machen. Leider weiß ich nicht genau, wie das bei einem Sachtext geht. Wäre nett, wenn mir jemand helfen kann. Danke

Guten Abend...da ich meine Probleme hab in Sachen Summary würde ich gerne ein paar tipps von euch hören um Struktur/Wortwahl etc. bzw verbesserungsvorschläge.

Das ist der Text den ich bearbeiten muss. http://www.thestar.com/news/investigations/immigration/article/901584--so-you-think-you-know-everything-about-canada-eh

Summary: The next citizenship test written by Raveena Aulakh in December 2010 deals with the topic of harder rest for Canadian immigrants.

It will be new and difficulty citizenship test introduced. The outraged Canadians discuss internet on radio and tv shows about the test, they think many of immigrants have been passed the old citizenship because it was too easy and the answers were simply to memorizing learning. At first the test will be difficulty and many immigrants failed on the lessons to 30%. Officials revised the old rules of the test and make it a little bit easier than the default rate was by 20%. Canadians also only have the test done with 90% (18/20 questions) . Many of the Canadian test persons failed on the same question it is that tripped up almost everyone was on who can vote in federal elections. Every year 150000 immigrants take the test, each of the failed can retry the test.

Sers, ich schreib morgen ne englisch arbeit und da soll ich vorraussichtlich ne outline schreiben. was ist denn der unterschied zwischen ner outline und ner summary?

danke

Hello English freaks :D Ich habe einen kleinen Text über "Caribbean London" vorbereitet. Über Feedback, Kritik und Korrekturen würde ich mich freuen :)

There are many British citizens who have their own countries belonging to the Commonwealth. Black people maily came from the Caribbean. Afro-Caribbeans are slaves from Africa who were transported to the Caribbean by British ships. In 1807, Britain stopped the slave trade.

London has been completely changed by the Caribbean people. They have influenced the social, economic and cultural life in London.

After the World War II, the British economy needed workers.The Caribbeans settled to London in larger numbers in the late 1940s to rebuild a post-war nation in London, they came with passion and excitement. But they had to face a different Britian and were very disappointed; Founding a home was not that easy. The rooms were often in bad condition and the rents were high. They had to do work with low wages that nobody else wanted to do. Police protection was not adequate so they had to deal with physical and verbal abuse.

Thus they developed selg-help organisations. Later, they created their own first Black newspaper "The voice".

They achieved their own buisness in London, running their own shops, restaurant or nightclubs. Others have achieved high postions in public life. The strength of the Caribbean peopel can be felt everywhere in London.

summary bzw inhaltsangabe

Ich bitte um Feedback meiner zusammenfassung des Green line Transition 6 Textes "Caribbean London". Danke im vorraus :) hier meine Zusammenfassung : The Text "Caribbean London" by Green line is about the Integration and influence of caribbeans in london. (das jetzige) london is a lot by them, (like in arts or food for exemple ) they have contributed greatly to the prosperity of Britain today. When they first arrived in london in the late 1940's for helping rebuild the postwar nation Great-Britain, they encounters many difficulties. For low wages, caribbeans had to do inferior jobs, that no one else wanted to do. They also had to pay exaggerate high rents for bad housing conditions and many of them experienced racial abuse. The answer to that was the development of self-help organizations for caribbeans and the launch of "The Voice", one of the first newspapers, aimed at a black audience in Britain. But times changed, nowadays, the most of them are well-established in London. Many caribbeans had become business people running their own shops, and some of them also achieved high positions in big business and public life. They provide as well role models for future. So their situation has changed a lot .

So ich bin mir sicher, dass ich leider ein paar Sätze einfach vom deutschen ins englische übersetzt habe :/ naja ich würde gerne Tips von euch bekommen was ich besser machen könnte, was total falsch war, und so weiter ;) Den "echten " Text findet ihr im Anhang als Bild. Hab ihn nur als Bild gefunden, hoffe man kann ihn lesen... Danke :)

Ich bitte  um Feedback meiner zusammenfassung des Green line Transition 6 Textes "Caribbean London". Danke im vorraus :) hier meine Zusammenfassung : 
The Text "Caribbean London" by Green line is about the Integration and influence of caribbeans in london. (das jetzige) london is  a lot by them, (like in arts or food for exemple ) they have contributed greatly to the prosperity of Britain today. When they first arrived in london in the late 1940's for helping rebuild the postwar nation Great-Britain, they encounters many difficulties. For low wages, caribbeans had to do inferior jobs, that no one else wanted to do. They also had to pay exaggerate high rents for bad housing conditions and many of them experienced racial abuse. The answer to that was the development of  self-help organizations for caribbeans and the launch of "The Voice", one of the first newspapers, aimed at a black audience in Britain. But times changed, nowadays, the most of them are well-established in London. Many caribbeans had become business people running their own shops, and some of them also achieved high positions in big business and public life. They provide as well role models for future. So their situation has changed a lot .

So ich bin mir sicher, dass ich leider ein paar Sätze einfach vom deutschen ins englische übersetzt habe :/  naja ich würde gerne Tips von euch bekommen was ich besser machen könnte, was total falsch war, und so weiter ;) Den "echten " Text findet ihr im Anhang als Bild. Hab ihn nur als Bild gefunden, hoffe man kann ihn lesen... Danke :)

Hallo, ich muss bis morgen ein summary zu dem Text 'in the outback' schreiben! Kann hier jemand sehr gut Englisch und will mir helfen?

Link zum Text: In the outback: http://www.cornelsen.de/fm/165/Gesamtdokument_A5_Abschlussband_P319213.pdf

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Bei einem Einleitungssatz von einer Inhaltsangabe in Englisch schreibt man ja kurz den Inhalt auf, also was dort passiert welche Wörter kann man noch benutzen, außer ,,The text is about '' oder ,,the story deals with''. Wir dürfen diese Wörter nicht mehr in der Klausur benutzen.

Hey ihr lieben,

ich soll morgen eine Summary in Englisch schreiben. Klappt auch alles super außer der Einleitungssatz , könnte mir vielleicht jemand ein Muster schreiben, es sollte nicht zu langweilig sein, ich möchte die Lehrerin beeindrucken,

thanks ;)

Ich muss morgen eine Klausur über dieses Buch schreiben. Ich will euch eine Summary über das Buch schreiben

bitte tipps

In this book Cathy, the new pupil at Portland High is threaten by the Snakeman and his gang.

Cathy, who comes from New York, is new at Portland High. First, she meets Jamie and he interwiews her, because Jamie is in the newspaper-team. Later she knows Gorden Baker, but she calls him Snakeman, because he is big and slim. The Snakeman and his gang threaten Cathy, they extort money from her and want to hurt her and her brother Mike. Mike is jounger than Cathy. She tries the non- resistance tactic, but it does not work. Later, Cathy tells her problem to Jamie and her mother, Eileen.                                                                                Jamie asks Cathy to be in the newspaper-team and she says ok. They want to go to police, but they haven't any proof. Then they want to publish an article about the Snakeman and his gang, but Ms. Southerland, the boss of the newspaper-team rejects it! Later they publish the article without the permission from Ms. Souterland and they must to go to Dr. Callahan, the principal. The mayor(Bürgermeister) comes to Dr. Callahan and says that he likes the newspaper. They have a press conference. They make Quotes with the other victims of Snakeman.

Finally, they get a massage that the Snakeman is died. bewerten bitte

Suche eine Summary zu besagtem Buch, finde aber nirgends eine, wär super wenn mir jemand eine schicken/posten könnte =) Ob Deutsch oder Englisch ist egal.

The first chapter of Robert Cormier's novel "After the first death" consists of a series of thoughts from a boy, named Benjamin. In the beginning he thinks about his injury, namely the path the bullet took. Then, he thinks about the visit of his father and then he tells about a conversation with his mother. They speak unimportant stuff and then he tells about Mr. Chatam, who is his math teacher and might have taught his father a generation ago. (Das bringt sie zu dem Thema über die Bennung des Berufes von Bens Vater, Mark). After Ben called his mother reprimands him because his father doesn't want to be called a general. Then, he starts to describe his life with picture postcards. The first one is Fort Delta. It's an ancient army post. It has something to do withthe bus and the bridge. An incient, which Ben often mentions, but never says what exactly has happened. The next picture postcard is his father. He thinks about his father's job. ben doesn't know (genaueres, obwohl inzwischen manches rausgefunden hat). he remembers the once, when he saw his father in uniform. It was a formal meeting. Ben felt both scared an excited, because his father (ließ ben an seiner Arbeit teilhaben). In the end of the chapter Ben thinks about the shortest horror story and then he thinks again about his father and how it will be (wie sein würd)

Im Internet findet man nichts! Ich schreib morgen eine Arbeit und brauche als Üb ung einen Text zum Zusammenfassen! Biite Helfen!

Wie schreibt man den Einleitungssatz bei einer Summary (in engllish also...)

Könnt ihr mir ein Beispiel Einleitungssatz schreiben??

Hey,

ich habe eine Frage zu den Summaries im Englischen. Mir ist selbstverständlich bewusst, wie so eine aussieht und aufgebaut ist, aber unser Lehrer meinte, dass wir Wörter wie "suddenly", "later" und "after that" nicht benutzen dürfen. "Suddenly" ist mir klar, weil das sonst einen Spannungsbogen erzeugen würde, aber was ist mit den anderen Wörtern? Wenn man doch zum Beispiel sagt:

After they finished dinner, he quit doing his homework. Later on, his father noticed he didn't do his homework and asked his son why.

Geht das etwa nicht? Quellen (Internet) wären auch gut, danke!

Hay also....wir schreiben demnächst eine reproduktion in Englisch ...also eine Nacherzählung einer Geschichte die wir bekommen ! jedoch hab ich noch 2 Fragen... 1. Welche Zeit muss man benutzen ? 2. Darf man wörtliche Rede reinbringen ?

Danke im Vorraus ;)

hallo ihr lieben ich schreibe bald eine englisch klausur in der wir eine Summary schreiben müssen und ich bräuchte mal eure hilfe für den richtigen einleitungssatz

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