Noch was zum verbessern?

Aufgabe:

Mein Text: It was interesting to read your posts, which I really enjoyed. Maybe I could add a few memories about young people who have worked for me. I once employed a young man that was a real know-it-all. Dan, who was very confident, never listened to my advice. He always said he already knew how to do things - and then continued to do things wrong! Then there was Amy. She was the girl who spent several hours a day texting her friends. This was the same girl that complained about how everyone else was so lazy. Hm.

Oh, and I'll never forget Sean, who worked for me briefly. He was the guy that at his interview had said he was 'passionate' about helping customers, but then strangely disappeared every time a customer arrived!

- Emma