Aufsatz – die neusten Beiträge

Wir müssen in der Arbeit einen Text über Australien schreiben.Ich hab es mal schnell daheim probiert.Könntet ihr mal drüber lesen und verbessern.Sowohl Grammatik und Inhalt.Wäre echt wichtig weil ich eh schlecht in Englisch bin.Groß und Kleinschreibung nicht beachten.Das wurde so als ich es hier eingetippt habe.

I will tell you something about Australia.The Name Australia comes from the Latin word austalis which means southern ans the native Australiens Are Valley Aboriginal.

Australia is one of the most urbanised countries in the world.That is because there are large Parts of the country with very climatic conditions which means that Therme Are very high temperatures and Little Rain.The Capital of Australia is Canberra but the bigest City is Sydney.Sydney is known für example für the Sydney Tower or the Opera House.

The Opera House is located in the West of Sydney and there Are More Than 1000 Shows in a year.

Australia has also Dome famous people how Margot Robbie or Keith Urban.Keith Urban is a singer Andy Songwriter ans he is active since 1990. His Most famous Songs eure for example Somebody like you or you will think of me.Margot Robbie is a achtes and Producer.She grew up in Gold Coast and now she is living in Los Angeles.

Australia has also a beautiful Wildlife with very fascinating animals how the Tansania Devil or the koala.But los of the animals stand on the red List because of the bushfire because it is very hot ans dry and much animals lost Their Habitat or died.

In Australia There ist also the Great Barrier Reef.It is a UNESCO World heritage ans it is known for his biodiversity.The Reef is the home of More than 1000 of sea Snakes,Fish,Chorals and a lot of More animals and ist is as big as Germany.

show me what your seeking

kann ich auch das r weg nemen dass es so heisst: show me what you seeking.

Hey,

wenn in einem Text ein genaues Datum gegeben ist. Wird dann alles was an diesem Tag passiert ist, solange kein Signalwort fürs presenet perfect vorkommt, im Simple Past geschrieben?

Z.B.

On 18th April there was a big Katastrophe. A Lot of people died. A Lot of people lost their home

Hallo ich muss eine geschichte schreiben für die schule und zwar im thema Gothic Literature das ist was ich soweit habe:

The Face

I lay in my bed in the eerie midnight dreary, with my wife beside me while she read “A tale of two cities”. Outside the rain was hammering down and once in a while thunder sounded. The fire crackled in the wind that entered through the gap of the window. Every once in a while you hear raven’s shrill shriek screech, as it is tring to flee from the horrid thunderstorm. I glanced at the gloomy moon that lit up the room through the curtains. The murky moon was the only light source that kept shapes regocnizeable, as the candles were flickering and soon showed no sign of light. 

The bed creaked as I gradually turned around to wish my love, “Good night.” The light of the deep silver moon taking one's time passed the house, and the room fell into deep darkness. I quickly dozed off into deep slombering.

There was an ear spliting screach echoing through the house in the dead of the night. I wanted to grab for my wife, but she wasn’t there. My heart sank and my eyes widened, I fell into a state of schock. I suspected horrid things, as I leaped for the door and slammed it open. It felt like I did the greatest long jump down the stairs. But it was too late. There was no sign of her anymore other explanation for me than that my love was taken away. I knew I had to find this horrid creature who dared to take her. I screamed,”Elenor!” but no reply.

I went back up the stairs in deep sadness but also in such anger. I asked myself “What will I do now,” or “Will I ever see my love again.” It felt like an eternity until I reached the top of the steep stairs. When I did I colapsed onto the bed falling trying to process the schock I don’t remember properly but it was maybe 4-5 am and I just layed there like a dead body until it was about 7 am.I decided to slowly proceed down stairs and grabbed myself some cereal and threw myself onto the well worn couch. 

When I turned around and looked outside there was a face, a face that stared deep into my soul through the morning dawn, with eyes that were as white as snow and the body was covered in a black coat as black as his soul I supposed. It rapidly came into my mind that this might be the creature of horror that took my wife. I rushed through the pitch black kitchen and grabed the largest knive I could find. I wanted revenge, but not any one wher he could never get me back.

When I came outside there was nothing, it had disappeared. It vanished into thin air with no sign of it, it was gone. I looked around for a few minutes but still no sign of the beast. Fustrated, I back inside.

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Und ich habe mir vor geschtelt das er dieses Gesicht noch weitere male sieht und er dann ganz paranoid wird und dass dann im ende das Gesicht ihm umbringt werend er schläft und die frau sieht das durchs Fenster und rent weg in denn Wald und dass die Geschichte dann so interesant ended dass sie wegrent und man sich dann so fragen stellt.

Es wäre sehr nett wenn mir jemand helfen könnte die Geschichte fertig zu schreiben

Danke im Voraus

Hey, meine Lehrerin hat meine ursprüngliche Gliederung überarbeitet, dabei ist dann das rausgekommen:

Ich hätte gerne für die anderen Kapitel (außer 3.) auch mehrere Unterkapitel. Leider hat sie die, die ich dort hatte, eben woanders untergeordnet. Hättet ihr Ideen was man noch so behandeln könnte? (Mein Thema: "Ist die AfD eine wirkliche Alternative für Deutschland?"

Vielen Dank!!

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt (reported speech)
,,She asked me if I liked it and said that the teachers had told her that I was doing an amazing job“

Könnte jemand eventuell einen Blick über meinen Englischtext über das Praktikum werfen (besonders bezogen auf die Grammatik) ? Das wäre echt lieb, danke!

When I arrived at my old primary school today, I went to the secretary to see in which classes I had to go. A lot of teachers were there who greeted me in a very friendly way. Then I got a timetable on which I could see where I had to go. The first lesson was in class 3b at 7:45 a.m. The class teacher was called Mrs x. She told me to help two students at reading and writing who didn’t speak German at all. At first it was quite difficult because they didn‘t understand me well and I wanted to teach them how to write s, m and o and how to read some words. Therefore, I tried to speak in English and make signs so that they would understand me better. It actually worked and they managed it to write the letters and read some of the words! It was really fun because they were so cute and they always listened to me and respected me. In the second lesson which began at 8:40 a.m., they had maths where I tried to teach the girl multiplication of the number 2 and it worked really well because she always understood me when I said something. I tried to teach the other boy the addition of numbers and he also understood me. At first it was pretty difficult as I said, but then it got easier and easier! At 9:45 a.m, the first break began and I went to the teacher‘s room to talk to teachers. They asked me a lot of questions, for example, what my name is or which school I go to. Everyone was kind. When the break was over at 10 a.m, I should go to class 3c which is taught by the class teacher Mrs xy. They had science and the topic was potatoes. I should help two students at completing exercises in their book. They had to match pictures to expressions which were about potatoes and so on. It worked well. There weren’t many exercises to do. Again, they were very kind and loved spending time with me. Then, the second break began at 10:50 a.m where I went outside to get some fresh air. Suddenly, a lot of students came to me and asked questions. It was so cute and stressful at the same time because you had to answer to a lot of questions in a short time. After that, a girl came to me to tell me about people who were on the climbing wall without any permission and she wanted me to tell them they should get off the wall. That‘s why I went to the wall and told them to get off and they listened to me. By the way, they should get off because it was wet to avoid accidents. Apart from that, I was walking in the school yard while I was watching the students which were playing. After the break, I didn‘t really have to do anything because the class teacher of class 3c only explained a lot of things about the school, so things which had nothing to do with lessons and so on. After that, I had another break where I went to the teacher‘s room to ask some questions about the job, such as the advantages and disadvantages. She answered them very clearly which made me happy because I could think  better about whether the job is perfect for me or not. I came to the conclusion that the job would be suit me! Then, at 12:45 PM I had to work in the school cafeteria to have the control about the children’s behavior and to lay the table. Next, the students of class 1a had P.E. at 1:45 PM. They really wanted me to play games with them which made me feel very comfortable and happy because they enjoyed spending time with me. It was very fun because the students were really funny, lovely, and cute. In the last lesson, so at 2:45 AM, we went back to their classroom and played games again. I also resolved disputes, for example, someone judged the other one without any reason. That‘s why I talked to the person and said it was not okay and he should not do it again. Luckily, he listened to me. In the end of the day, it was a very funny day and I loved spending time with the students there because they are very cute and I think the job suits me very well!

Ich muss für die Ausbildung zum Biologisch Technischen Assistenten auf Englisch zu schreiben, warum ich mich für diesen Beruf entschieden habe.

Ich muss auf folgende Fragen beantworten: 

1. Why to train as a BTA?

2. What do you learn?

3. What do you espect?

Könntet ihr mir da helfen, was ich hier auf Englisch hingeschreiben soll und wie ich es ganze auf Englisch formuliere?

Was soll ich da herumschreiben?

Warum soll es ,,This was the first case in over 2 years which Inspector Blockhead had finished in such a short time“ sein anstatt ,,This *has been* the first case in over 2 years which Inspector Blockhead *finished* in such a short time“?

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt? ,,It depends on how the weather will be.“

Hello Friends,

Kann mir jemand sagen was das bedeutet? Finde nichts dazu im internet. Habe nur den Satz gefunden „the moon is beautiful…“ aber über „the lightning“ nichts.

(Habe es auf TikTok gsesehen)

Wir müssen in Englisch eine pro & contra Argumentation Schreiben ' ob es gut oder schlecht ist Jung zu sein. Wie ist mir diese Einleitung gelungen?

When we are young we explore many things that help us in growth because of new experiences In our youth we find ourself and build a character. But being young can be very annoying, so many people of our age think they want to grow up faster while others want to stay young forever. This topic raises the question of whether being a teenager serves an advantage or disadvantage in different aspects of life.

Dankeschön für feedback :)

Als ihr in der Schule wart und vielleicht mal Hausaufgaben vergessen habt, ihr es verheimlicht habt , aber trotzdem dran kamt vom Lehrer. Habt ihr dann in Deutsch zb. einfach paar Zeilen improvisiert??😂😂

Als wir im Unterricht anfangen durften mit den Hausaufgaben , es dann Zuhause fertig machen sollten, habe ich es manchmal vergessen/ nicht gemacht und dann eben etwas improvisiert. Zum Glück erfolgreich😅

Habt ihr das im der Schulzeit auch einige Male gemacht und wart ihr erfolgreich oder seid ihr aufgeflogen?

Könnt gerne auch lustige Erfahrungen mitteilen.

Hallo! Wann sagt man im Englischen “Thank you very much”, wenn man das nicht als Dank meint, sondern nach einem einfachen Aussagesatz? Ich kann leider kein konkretes Beispiel nennen, kommt aber auf einer der ersten Seiten von HP And The Philosopher’s Stone vor…

Danke :-)

Was kann man in einem 'about me' - Vortrag erzählen?!

Wie findet ihr den Spruch ?

Was ist der Unterschied?

Vorweg sorry, dass zu wellness versus health schon massenhaft Fragen von mir kamen, aber ich möchte,dass das sitzt.

wellness: the state of being healthy; especially when it's somthing you actively try to achieve

Nimmt dieses "it" Bezug auf "wellness" oder auf 'the state of being healthy'.

Danke.

„The exercise of running, swimming pool, or cycling is a great way to increase your physical and mental health. These activities decrease stress and anxiety. Furthermore, it improves sleep quality and your cognitive abilities. When you doing it among people, can help you to create social connections. All in all, sports can lead your life healthful.“

wir müssten eine kleine Zusammenfassung schreiben, ist das eine gute Zusammenfassung. Kann dieser Text auf einem soliden B2 mithalten? Ich möchte in der Oberstufe Englisch als LK wählen.

Auf die Frage "How are you" antwortet man ja üblicherweise mit "I'm fine, thanks" aber es geht ja auch mit I'm well/good aber was von beidem wäre denn grammatikalisch korrekt?

Guten Tag,

ich habe vor ein work and holiday jahr in Japan zu verbringen,
Dafür benötige ich allerdings eine motivation Letter, welche auf Englisch geschrieben werden soll.

Da mein Englisch jetzt nicht wirklich das beste ist wollte ich einfach mal fragen ob ihr denkt, das mein Text aktzeptabel ist oder ich ihn doch lieber neu schreiben sollte.

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am Max Mustermann, and I just graduated from high school.

In the following, im going to describe how and why the idea of applying for a working holiday visa in Japan came to mind.

The first bond with Japan was tied way back when I was a little boy who enjoyed watching Dragonball on the TV. Since then, a lot has changed, but my fascination for the country has stayed the same.

I started dreaming about going on vacation there, which sadly couldt be fulfilled, due to several reasons. Now that my schooldays have come to an end, I started questioning what to do after. Soon the idea of traveling to Japan consolidated, and I wanted to absolve a year of work and travel.

After learning more about the traditions, gods, and spirits that can be found throughout the whole country my interest was caught. I want to experience first hand what its like to go to a shrine or learning from monks and priests, what inner peace realy means.

Of course, I also heard about Japan’s hospitality, kindness, and patience. It astonishes me that a whole country can have a reputation that good, so much that I want to spend the whole next year there.

I plan to explore a lot of different sides of Japan. A few destinations are for example, Tokyo, Kyoto, Nara, Uji and Shimoda.

Furthermore, it is about being interested in Japans daily life, work, food, history, and what similarities and differences there are compared to Germany and the whole country itself.

I hope to improve my Japanese and learn a lot of interesting things in/about Japan.

Thanks for taking your time.

Kind regards,

MAx Mustermann

„Today is the First Day of the Rest of My Life“ (Liedtitel von John Denver)

Ich muss über die Ferien noch einen Aufsatz für schwimmen schreiben. Wir sollen Argumente für und gegen den schwimm Unterricht in der 8. Klasse finden und darüber eine DIN A4 Seite schreiben. Mir fehlt noch ca 1/4 bis ich fertig bin und mir fällt nichts mehr ein hab nur so : gutes Training, blöd wegen Periode, in badekleidung fühlen sich manche unwohl usw. Habt ihr noch andere Ideen?

Hallo, habe selber nen Aufsatz in Biologie geschrieben aber das Problem: ich kann das jetzt trotzdem nicht auswendig wiedergeben.

Ich habe es doch selber geschrieben aber ohne es voll verstanden zu haben. Ich sollte es aber können. Was kann man da tun? Nochmal ganz oft lesen? Mit Marker Markieren? Was würden die Lehrer unter euch empfehlen?

Lg

Hi,

vorab ich habe zwei linke Hände und keine Ahnung von Werkzeug. :D Ich habe einen gebrauchten Metabo BS 18 li Bohrschrauber geschenkt bekommen. Die Aufsätze zum Schrauben sind dabei. Aufsätze zum Bohren jedoch nicht.

Nun meine Frage:

Sind alle Metabo Bohraufsätze mit der Maschine kompatibel oder brauche ich etwas Bestimmtes?

Vor allem, da die Maschine schon etwas älter ist, bin ich mir unsicher was ich bestellen soll.

Viele Grüße

Ich brauche …?

kommt in dem Song von Travis scott vor

,,I keep wanting to Hit u up But I Freak out „

das macht mir Angst

Hallo!
Wann benutzt man would, abgesehen vom Konjunktiv? Zum Beispiel im Satz: For each album, he would write several songs.

Also would in der Vergangenheit.

Danke :-)

• Can I have your number?

No, I do have a boyfriend.

• Okay fair enough, fair enough. You’re good.

Wie würde man im Deutschen antworten?

Liegt das Problem in der Art der Theorie, oder eher in den Menschen, die sie aufstellen? Folgender Text behauptet doch eher letzteres, aber die meisten Menschen sehen doch das Problem bei ersterem, oder?

Verschwörungstheoretiker sind (kulturell) dadurch gekennzeichnet, dass sie sich entscheiden, an bereist klar und eindeutig widerlegte Theorien zu glauben. Sie entscheiden sich dazu, nur "Beweise" zu bewerten, die für ihre Theorie sprechen, weil sie ja es sich so ausmalen, dass alles andere von ihrer Verschwörung einfach gefälscht wurde. So haben sie immer Ausflüchte, egal was passiert. Sie haben auch (kognitiv-psychologische) Defizite, entgegenstehende Beweise zu bemerken.

Darüber hinaus haben Verschwörungstheoretiker schwächen im Verständnis von Zufällen, sodass sie von Zusammenhängen ausgehen, wo keine sind. Beide Probleme lassen sich durch psychologische Studien belegen, haben aber neben der Psychologie auch einen kulturellen Grund dafür, der diese psychologischen Schwächen noch verstärkt.

Was würdet ihr noch ergänzen?

Kann jemand diesen Spruch erläutern - wortwörtlich ins Deutsche übersetzt hört sich der nämlich merkwürdig an:Im not longer shrinking to be digestible, you can choke. Danke schonmal 🫶

Yabetta, mate! Grab a snag and a bevvy, just a standard for ya and all profits go to charity, for the kids and their footy, gotcha?!

Was heißt in diesem Kontext "Yabetta"? Hab das noch nie gehört. Wenn das mein English-Professor sähe, der kriegt nen Herzstillstand.. 😂

Take:-

SB/STH for granted

my arms around her

my advice

offence

ages

part

place

no notice

a risk

Put:-

somebody in charge of

pressure on sb

criticism

a plan into practice

his work first 

Hallo, wir mussten einen Aufsatz über das gewinnen und verlieren schreiben der benotet wird. Oder zumindest sollte, nun weigert sich meine Lehrerin den zu benoten mit der Begründung; „Es fehlt McDonalds oder Apple“ ich und meine Freunde lachen immer über McDonald’s (Insider) und ich bin ein Apple Fan. Nochmals, der Text geht ums gewinnen und verlieren wie soll man da McDonald’s einbauen? Dazu kommt ich schrieb noch nie über McDonald’s oder Apple einen Aufsatz… Ihr zweites Argument ist, „Es ist Chatgpt“ das konnte ich widerlegen, das ignoriert sie allerdings einfach.

ist das fair? Like ich konnte ihr Beweise bringen während sie eine plumpe Behauptung in den Raum wirft. Auf mich wirkte es mehr wie sie wollte mir die gute Note nicht gönnen. (Weil der Text war offensichtlich gut, wenn sie denkt er ist von ChatGPT)

Könnte man sagen: In todays episode we will talk about my internship at the „…“ and the experiences that i had, the good ones as well as the bad ones. And there were a lot of bad ones, you can trust me on that.

Was heisst "Auf hoher See" in Englisch. Im Deepl steht "On the high seas". Stimmt das so?

Könnte jemand bitte wieder über meinen Text drüber schauen? Es geht wieder um einen Tag in dem Bildungszentrum. Danke!

,,When we arrived there on the fifth day, we had to go to our maintenance group/department (Gewerk?) immediately because we already knew which group we belonged to. At first, we had to start forming the dough into small balls for the Cakepops. The dough was dough of a marble cake which we had baked the day before. It was pretty hard because they weren‘t allowed to have cracks in it and the dough didn‘t form into a ball because it always fell apart which was very annoying. It didn‘t matter what I tried. Then the manager helped me and after that I managed it myself. We put them into a freezer and while they were getting cold, we were cleaning the kitchen. I had to wipe the kitchen counters by using a cleaning cloth and then we had to use a water hole to wet the floor. Next we took a scrubber and a water squeegee to clean it. It was quite difficult to clean it because you had to be strong to clean every dirty spot on the floor. The water squeegee was very hard to use because you had to exert extreme strength to clean it correctly. After that, when the cakepops were colder, we dipped them into hot chocolate and we decorated them by using sprinkles. Then we put them into the fridge and we had to do the same things again, so cleaning the kitchen. After we had finally managed it, the day was already over. As a reward, we ate the cakepops outside.

Ich habe folgendes ende in den schluss von meinem blog in der Abschlussprüfung geschrieben: If u were here what would you guys do or visit , let me know. Im looking forward to hearing from you all.

Your max

Ist das falsch?

Wären diese Sätze grammatikalisch korrekt?

,,We discussed about what we were going to cook on the following day“ Ich weiß, dass auch would geht, aber geht were going to.. auch?

,,We found out where the dishes were placed so that we wouldn‘t be confused on the next day“

,,I really had problems (with) folding napkins“?

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt? ,,We had to put the dishes away and it was very hard because I couldn‘t find anything where the dishes normally had to be placed at“

Hallo, könnte sich jemand bitte meinen Text anschauen (vor allem Grammatik). Vorab will ich sagen, dass es um einen Tag in einem Bildungszentrum geht.

When we arrived there on the second day, we had to go to our maintenance groups immediately. On that day, there was another specialist, so we had to introduce ourselves to her. After introducing, we got two sheets of paper. On the first one, there was only an eye and on the second one, there was a whole face. She said we had to paint makeup on both the eye and the face. In my opinion, my pictures were very ugly and it was very difficult for me because I can‘t draw well and I have never worn makeup before. After that, we grabbed our hairdressing heads which still had curlers in their hair and we had to remove them. They needed to be left in their hair overnight so that a volume winding would form. Luckily, it worked! Then we had to create our own hairstyle on our hairdressing head. The specialist said my hairstyle was pretty good. Then we could style and wash each other‘s hair again and X wanted to try  volume winding again as it didn‘t work on the previous day. On that day, it definitely worked better but she had to dry her hair with a hair dryer for about one hour because her hair was still too wet to remove the curlers from her hair. I was so sorry for her. Finally, she did it after one hour and her hair looked gorgeous, so in my opinion it was worth it. In the last 50 minutes, we could wear makeup but of course I didn‘t want, so I observed my classmates again. On the one hand, I think I could work as a hairdresser in future because it‘s interesting what customers tell you while I‘m styling their hair and it‘s also interesting to try out different hairstyles but on the other hand, this job doesn‘t match to me  because I‘m scared of doing mistakes because for example I could cut off a customer‘s hair and I don‘t want to touch stranger‘s hair. 

Hallo, könnte sich jemand bitte meinen Text anschauen (vor allem Grammatik). Vorab will ich sagen, dass es um einen Tag in einem Bildungszentrum geht.

,,When we hadn‘t arrived yet, I was really scared because I had thought that it would be similar to my internship in March. But when I arrived there, I wasn‘t scared anymore because the specialists greeted us in a very friendly way. We all were standing there while the specialist was telling us where we were going to work in the following two days. I was in the maintenance group which was called cosmetic. I don‘t have anything to with cosmetic at all because I still don‘t paint my nails, wear make-up and so on, so I thought that it would be fun. When we came into the special room, we first watched a video about safety- and hygiene measures. Then we started working. We got a hairdressing head and curles because we had to do a volume winding. It was pretty difficult for me because I had never done it before in my life. Luckily, the specialist helped me and I did it alone after that! Next, we could paint our nails and do a manicure. I didn‘t do anything because I neither wanted to paint my nails nor a manicure because as I said, I am not interested in painting my nails. I was only observing my classmates who were painting their nails, yet it was very interesting because they they were hilarious. After that, we were allowed to wash each other‘s hair and also to do a hairstyle by using for example a hair curler and straightener. We washed X‘s hair and we did her a volume winding. Sadly, it didn’t work because we did it wrongly.“

Dürfrn Lehrer grundlos extra schulaufgaben aufgeben?

Heute hatten wir PUG und da wusste der Lehrer nicht was er Unterrichten sollte.

Da haben viele dumme vorschläge gemacht wie "Film Schauen" "Zu McDonalds fahren" usw.

Da habe ich dann vorgeschlagen das wir ein 4 seitigen Aufsatz schreiben können. Das war offensichtlich ironisch gemeint und das hat der Lehrer auch verstanden. Dann aber

hat der auf seinem PC einer KI die Aufgabe gegeben ein 4 seiting Aufsatz über Demokratie zu erstellen wiel das das aktuelle Thema war und hat mir diesen Aufsatz ausgedruckt und vor der ganzen Klasse laut gesagt das ich als einziger diesen Aufsatz bis morgen abschreiben muss.

Darf er so?

Das war aus purer trotzigkeit und bewusst um mich vor der Klasse zu blamieren.

Der Lehrer hat auch öfters mal gesagt das ich eine an der Macke hab, Mich immer zum Affen mach, und noch andere nicht so nette Beleidigungen.

Hey, ich muss einen Aufsatz über Hexenverfolgung schreiben, der ca 1500 Wörter lang sein soll. Ich habe nun etwas mehr als 1000 Wörter, aber mir fällt einfach nichts mehr ein… Ich habe auch schon Beispiele benutzt. Ich muss noch einen Schluss schreiben, aber der wird ja auch nicht ganze 500 Wörter lang sein. Habt ihr irgendwelche Tipps wie ich 1. den Aufsatz länger machen kann und 2. den Schluss schreiben kann? Danke!

,,Das Fest ist an dem 25. Juli”

,,The festival is on the 25th July” ,

,,The festival is on 25 th July ”

mit ,,the” , Oder nicht ?

Geht beides?

Was kann man statt "Ich stimme deinem Argument zu" etc noch sagen wenn man auf das Argument des anderen eingeht?

ist die folgende Mediation gelungen?:

Hello,

So as we are working on a joint project on unequal distribution of income, I have come upon on an interesting article in the "Stern" magazine. The author Walter Wüllenberg states his profound opinion about the class mobility in Germany and how this has changed in the last years. In the following I will point out the main arguments and their argumentation.

Firstly, the author states, that the German inequality of class is not comparable to the American Class inequality, as the German discussion about class was about the under class and their immobility, whereas the US discussion about class was always accomplished by the prolific idea of the American Dream. This shows in the social spendings of Germany too, spending more than half of the income of the estate, incomparable to the US with only a fifth of theirs.

Henceforth, the author states that the class inequality in Germany much rather shows in the not existing middle class than in the poor estate of the under class. While economy has grown hugely in the last decades, the wages have nearly stagnated, showing that economies growth could not bared by society as a whole but only by the rich. Thus, the rich have gotten immensely richer, owning most of the capital of the country, and the rest just held their class. Yet the divide between the classes has grown and their nearly is no in between. This is worth the criticism because the growth of the economy is due to the work of the society as a whole, yet only few bear the fruits of the hard work, being quite unfair.

I hope that this has helped you and that it may have provoked some thoughts considering inequality. I would like to hear from you.

GaLIGrü, 

Kling das okay:?

"I would like to refrain from my social life and focus on school." (Vom sozialen Leben distanzieren)

Alternativ würde ich auch "withdraw" schreiben

Welcome to my presentation about youtube.

YOU CAN DO THAT ON YOUTUBE

•You can watch videos and also make videos youtself, so you can also make money at 1000-2000 calls,that would be abou 1-2 euros.

•Among other videos, you can usually write comments

Facts about youtube

•Youtube was invented on february 14 2005.

•It was invented in california

•The founders of youtube are jawed karim,steve chen and chad hurley.

•On youtube , 720.000 hours of video are uploaded every day tovsee everyone, you would need about 82 years.

•Youtube has 2,56 billion users active all over the world on the month.

•It´s free

•The biggest youtuber is mr beast.

DANGERS OF YOUTUBE.

•On youtube there is often fake news that is rarely deleted from youtube,sometimes there are also dangerozs trends because some peopel hav died.

•When you write something wrong, you often get nasty comments from strangers.

•You often get advertisements in videos that promise you that you will get rich.How ever this is not real of the most time.

THAT WAS MY PRESENTATION ABOUT YOUTUBE

gerne fehler sagen und in einer schulmote bewerten

Ich habe eben gelesen, dass es bei deutschsprachigen ein 'common mistake' ist.

Crime stories are our version of sitting round a camp fire and telling tales. We enjoy being scared under safe circumstances. That's why there's no tradition of crime writing in countries that have wars.

Stimmt ihr ihr zu und wieso.ich schon aber ich weis nicht wieso es so ist. Es ist ja wirklich so dass wir es lieben im warmen sicherheit oder mit jmd diese geschichte zu erzählen aber wieso ist es nicht so in Ländern wo es Krieg gibt

Hey, muss ich sagen ,,This Book was published in the year 1945‘‘ Oder ,,this book was published on the year 1945‘‘

Me and my mom share my brothers mascara wand cause it's just easier that way.

Hallo!
ich muss einen Aufsatz darüber schreiben was für einen einfluss (einweg-)Vapes auf unsere Umwelt haben, weil ich da nicht so wirklich weiß wie ich das gliedern soll oder welche informationen und von wo ich diese informationen nehmen soll und deswegen würde ich gerne wissen was ihr so denkt was ich da so reinpacken kann.

(bitte nur ernst gemeinte antworten, sachen wie ''google einfach'' helfen mir nicht weiter. ich habe schon auf google geschaut und dort nicht genug informationen gefunden.)

wie könnte man diesen Satz " the Vikings, known for their seafaring and raiding skills" auch anders schreiben?

Ich soll zum Thema Hexenverfolgung einen Aufsatz schreiben der ca 2 Seiten geht, ein bisschen mehr geht natürlich auch. Ich soll aber in dem Aufsatz eine Frage beantworten also um die dreht sich dann der Aufsatz. Zum Thema Hexenverfolgung. Mir fallen aber keine guten ein… Habt ihr vielleicht Ideen? Danke schonmal

Was ist in diesem Satz am "understanding" falsch?

Wie würde er richtig heißen

Math is actually such an underrated subject and understanding it can be fun...

Halloo

Wenn in der Aufgabe steht „Schildere eine Ereignis in naher Zukunft“, ich aber diese Schilderung in Präsens geschrieben habe

ist das dann Thema verfehlt ? und somit eine 6?

Hallo,

Ich habe eine Frage.

Wieviel Inhaltspunkte werden in einem Deutsch Aufsatz abgezogen, wenn man die falsche Zeitform genutzt hat ? (hoffe mal nicht zu viele )

“What did the name mean?” Neil asked. “Did you only read dead poets?” “All poetry was acceptable, Mr. Perry. The name simply referred to the fact that, to join the organization, you had to be dead.” “What?” the boys said in chorus. “The living were simply pledges. Full membership required a lifetime of apprenticeship. Alas, even I’m still a lowly initiate,” he explained. - in dieser Szene wird es erklärt ,aber ich verstehe es nicht ganz. Kann es jmd vllt erläutern?

Danke.

Mfg

Ich muss für die Schule einen Aufsatz in Englisch schreiben. Man soll über das Leben in Kalifornien und eine abenteuerliche Urlaubsreise nach Kalifornien berichten. Ich habe keine Ahnung was ich schreiben soll, kann mir bitte jemand helfen? Danke im Voraus!💕

Heyho,

ich schreibe morgen eine Klassenarbeit in Englisch, in dieser werden wir eine Bewerbung schreiben müssen. Ich habe mal zur Vorbereitung etwas geschrieben, hättet ihr Feedback?

Lg

Dear director of Nature Camp,

My name is max Mustermann and I saw your Job application.

Let me introduce myself:

My name is Max Mustermann and I’m currently living with two roommates in Lexington. Until now I worked as a personal coach and in a Kindergarten, but I wanted to do something new.

Because I am living with two roommates, I am able to share living space and to express myself. Because I have beeen a personal coach, I have physical fitness and self discipline.

I think that I would fit perfectly at Nature Camp.

I am looking forward to a reply.

Kind regards

Max Mustermann

P.s.

Ist für ein Gymnasium, Klassenstufe 8

Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

hallöchen,

kann mir jemand den Unterschied zwischen den Stylistic Devices metaphor und Imagery erklären?

danke

Heyy,muss eine Figurenkonstellation machen und brauche dafür kreative Ideen z.B wie den Charakter als playmobil figuren darzustellen etc…

Die Figur ist Hazel Grace Lancaster

„Es war ein Sirren in der Luft, das sich über das Haus konzentrierte und…“ ist Sirren eine Lautmalerei oder nicht weil das Geräusch ja nicht nachgestellt wurde?

Wäre eventuell jemand so lieb und könnte sich jemand meine Zusammenfassung anschauen über die USA beziehungsweise deren Einwohner besonders wegen der Grammatik, also den Tenses und der Word order? Das wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Hier ist der Text dazu:

Meine Zusammenfassung:

The text is about the US and its immigration history. Today it is called a nation of immigrants. But thousands of years ago, only Native Americans lived there. The famous railroad that we know today was built by immigrants from Japan and China who came in the middle of the 19th century. A lot of German people came to the US but some of them left because they were discriminated. When some of them stayed, they started a new life mainly in Pennsylvania but later they decided to start a new life in Wisconsin, Michigan, Minnesota, North and South Dakota, Nebraska and Iowa. Ellis Island is known as a museum in New York today but in the past it was called "The Isle of Tears" because when immigrants wanted to go through, they had to prove their good health and they had to be able to write and read. When they could neither read nor write and didn‘t have a good health, they were sent back home. The people who wanted to immigrate into the US had a lot of problems since, in 1924, the US government passed "The Immigration Act“ and people from poorer countries weren‘t allowed to go to the US. Today, if people want to live in the US, they need a greencard which allows them to live and work in the US. People are given 50000 greencards all around the world each year, so there‘s a chance for everyone to immigrate to the US. 

Ich habe in einer Englischarbeit geschrieben: ,,He told them to dont look away.“ Meine Englisch Lehrerin hat mir dafür einen Fehler angestrichen.Ich habe mal gegoogelt, aber es gibt keine Ergebnisse.Kann mir jemand helfen?

Ich muss einen 2 seitigen Aufsatz über das zu spät kommen schreiben,weil meine halbe Klasse zu spät gekommen ist und der Lehrer aber alle dafür bestraft hat was ich ziemlich ungerecht finde und da wollte fragen wie ich zwei Seiten schreiben formulieren und Tricks damit Mann nicht so viel schreiben muss

Hii, beim Deutschabi dieses Jahr hab ich mich für die Erörterung Woyzecks entschieden. Die Frage war, ob oder inwiefern Groczyks Ansicht, dass Marie nur ihre Rechte als Frau geschützt habe, zutrifft.

Mich würde mal interessieren, wie viele bzw. welche Argumente ihr so eingebracht habt :)

Ich hatte nämlich nur 4 Argumente, jeweils 2 Pro und 2 Con, dafür aber sehr ausführlich und weit ausgeholt, also trotzdem um die 1500 Wörter.

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob jemand wieder bitte über meinen Text drüber schauen könne. Wäre sehr lieb, danke!

,,I have been living in the US since Monday because I wanted to start a new life. I had really wanted to go to the US before I really arrived here. It‘s very fantastic here and the people are very friendly although I‘ve only been here for one week. When I arrived at the airport in Boston on the first day, I thought that I could never live in such a crowded and large nation. But then I met a woman and she cared for me. She has become my friend. She showed me the airport and different cities. At first, we went to California where I explored different cities, such as Los Angeles and San Francisco. I went to Disneyland there and it was so much fun. I also saw the Golden Gate Bridge with its fantastic view. I even saw real Native Americans on their reservations! They looked very friendly at me but I am also sorry for them that they have to live outside. I am very happy that I‘ve immigrated to the US. After exploring California, I went to New York where I have been living now since Wednesday. It‘s so cool here because when I came to New York, it was already late in the evening and because of the darkness, I went to Times Square since it is known for its bright lights. I went to a restaurant there where I ate the popular pizza slices and they tasted very delicious. After I had eaten, I was exploring Times Square while it was pretty dark and because of the bright lights of the advertisements, it was so gorgeous and I felt like it would be my home town so that I‘ve decided to stay here in New York forever. I live in an apartment in New York with my new friends as long as I don‘t have enough money to buy my own house. I work in the Empire State Building where I work as an official and I really like living here!“

Könnte jemand mal über meinen Text vor allem wegen der Informationen und der Grammatik drüber schauen? Danke, wäre sehr lieb!

,,Lakota is a Native American tribe and they lived in America at first. Now they live in South and North Dakota. Lakota people are nomadic hunters and gatherers and they kill buffaloes to stay alive. The food is poor, so they need to kill buffaloes. They are strongly connected with the nature. They are a part of larger Sioux Nation which consists of Lakota, Dakota and Nakota. They wear headdresses with feathers and they have been a part of North American history for over 500 years. They have their own language and traditions such as Sun Dance. Sun Dance is a tradition that includes fasting, praying, and dancing to honor the sun. Another famous tradition is Vision Quest where people go on a journey in nature to seek personal revelation and spiritual growth. But they also have a strong tradition of storytelling, telling legends, and teaching from one generation to the next. Lakota is also very known for its history because in the 19th century, an argument between European settlers, the U.S. government and their tribe broke out and their tribe fought against them. Sitting Bull and Crazy Horse were the chiefs of their tribe and they protected them. They also fought against the U.S. government because they wanted to keep their land. They also did it but more arguments broke out after they had done it for the first time, so, after all, they lost their land nevertheless. Today they live on reservations.“

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wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Informationen zu ergänzen habt, dann gerne her damit! :)

Hallo. Mein Sohn bekommt einen Tadel und gleichzeitig eine Suspendierung weil er beim Spielen mit Mitschülern einen Stein warf ohne zu überlegen. Zum Glück ohne jemanden getroffen zu haben. Dies war auch nicht seine Absicht. Daraufhin bekam er einen Tadel und eine Suspendierung von 2 Tagen. Er weiß wie dumm das war und sieht es auch ein. Zusätzlich soll er einen Aufsatz verfassen zu fahrlässiger Körperverletzung. Meine Frage dazu. Darf man einen Tadel und gleichzeitig suspendieren ? Und darf man ihn zwingen dieses Aufsatz vor der Klasse vorzutragen ? Ich halte das für eine Nötigung und eine Bloßstellung. Vor den Mitschülern. Danke euch.

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob mal jemand über meinen Text drüber schauen könnte. Wäre echt sehr lieb, danke!

,,My parents come from Kazakhstan and my mother came to Germany when she was 12 years old. My father came to Germany when he was 15 years old. They were forced to leave their home country by their parents because they wanted to start a new life and they were only teenagers, so they weren‘t allowed to decide whether they would stay in Kazakhstan or go to Germany. I was born in Germany and I can‘t speak Russian. I really like Germany because of the people but if I had to leave Germany, I would definitely go to Spain since it is a very interesting, warm and gorgeous country. I can‘t stand cold days, so it would be a perfect country for me. There are several beaches and unique sights such as the castle in Madrid. But nevertheless, a war or bad government would have to happen so that I would leave Germany because then it would be really bad to live in Germany as you wouldn‘t be treated well. But if I really had enough money, I would try to immigrate to Spain. I would hope that the people would be friendly to me and understand that I wouldn‘t be able to speak their language at first but I even think that I wouldn‘t be able to speak Spanish fluently even if I learned it for several years because it is a difficult language. I would also hope that the life would be great there and I would make new friends. I think I would also have a lot of problems for example missing my family and my friends and I would have problems with speaking their language. I would be afraid of talking to them since perhaps they would make fun of me or would talk to me in an unfriendly way. It would be a complete change for me and I would have to get used to new habits for example going to another school. On the other hand, it would be great to experience new adventures and explore new locations. You could go to a beach every day! So, on the one hand, I would really like to go to Spain but on the other hand, I would be really afraid of leaving my home country because of the problems that could "destroy“ my life. I am not sure whether I stay here in Germany or go to an other country.“

Mir wurde gerade von einem Mädchen (nach ihrer Angabe 6. Klasse) gesagt, dass sie einen Aufsatz mit 15000 Wörtern innerhalb eines Tages schreiben muss. Ich wollte nur einmal nachfragen ob ihr davon schonmal gehört habt? Ist sehr unglaubwürdig interessiert aber trotzdem.

Freue mich auf Antworten.

Hallo. Könnte mal eventuell jemand über meinen Text über die USA drüber schauen? Wäre echt lieb von euch, danke! Und wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Sachen zum Text ergänzen würdet (Themen, wie z.B. die Bevölkerung usw), dann gerne her damit!
,,The US are in North America. America is a Continental and it consists of South America, Central America and North America. The US are very popular since they created a lot of things like McDonald’s and so on. It is very cool there because of the many sights such as the Statue of Liberty which you can see in many pictures. You can see a lot of cool things of the US have become so popular. Today the population of the US are about 330 million. The capital is Washington, D.C and people come there from all over the world. People from Mexico, Central or South America are called Hispanics or Lations. Their first language is often Spanish, so the US don‘t have a national language since more than one third of the population speaks Spanish in some areas and that is why most of the signs are in Spanish and English. There are about 2,5 million Native Americans and most of them live on reservations. When white immigrants came to America in the 17th century, they fought against the Native Americans because they wanted to get their land and after they had won, most of Native Americans had to leave their land and they had to live on reservations. Today, they still live on reservations and they are very poor. They don‘t have any jobs, so they try to earn money by keeping traditions such as the powwow. It is a celebration of American Indian culture. They sing, feast and dance there. Native Americans such as the Cherokees are one of the most popular Indian tribes of the US and they live in the South of the US. Another popular tribe are the Navajos who live in the Southwestern of the US. In 1883 there were 4 million black Americans and they didn‘t have the same rights as white Americans, so people like Malcolm X fought for the rights of black people. Today about 40 million black Americans live in the US. As you can see, the US had a lot of problems in the past but it is still a very cool nation.“

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ich wäre euch echt dankbar!

Könnte mal jemand eventuell bitte über meine Zusammenfassung über die Geschichte von Annie Moore drüber schauen? Danke!
,,The story is about Annie Moore who was the First immigrant on Ellis Island. Annie and her two younger brothers are in Ireland in 1891 and they want to board a ship which brings them to New York since their parents and their older brother are there. Annie is very sad because she thinks that she won‘t ever see the beautiful things such as the Emerald Isle again but on the other hand she is happy to see her family again. Her parents had to emigrate because of the potato famine in Ireland in 1845. It is very hard to live on the ship as it is crowd, cold and the food is poor but on January 1st, 1892 the ship reaches New York and Annie is the first person who leaves the ship and arrives on Ellis Island. She even gets $10 as a reward to be the first person on Ellis Island and she had never got so much money before. That‘s the reason why she is so happy. Now, there‘s a statue of Annie on Ellis Island.“

Also bei einer Erörterung

Hey, ich bin aktuell in der 10. Klasse (Realschule, Bayern)

Und schreibe morgen meine 3. Schulaufgabe. Dabei muss ich eine zweigliedrige Erörterung mit insgesamt 6 Argumenten verfassen.

Für das ganze hab ich 260 Minuten Zeit.
Nun hat heute meine Lehrerin gesagt, ich sollte die Einleitung etwa eine halbe Seite groß schreiben. Meine Frage ist jetzt aber, wie ich ne halbe Seite füllen kann, wenn die Einleitung eigentlich nur aus einem Einleitungsgedanken, einer Hinführung zum Thema und der eigentlichen Themenfrage besteht.

Könnte mir vielleicht jemand Tipps geben, wie ich die Einleitung ein wenig Strecken kann?

Schönen Abend noch:)

• Zum Beispiel eine Entscheidung oder Handlung auszuführen.

Meine Übersetzung:

• 1) For example to carry out a decision or an action
• 2) oder For example, to carry out a decision or action.

Hey, ich muss für Deutsch einen Blog Eintrag schreiben. Das Thema ist: Die Rolle des Internets als Ersatz für Bücher. Es sollen insgesamt ca. 230 Wörter sein. Ich habe auch schon nach Informationen gesucht, aber irgendwie nichts gefunden. Wisst ihr vielleicht etwas? Vielen Dank schon mal im Voraus!

Hallo zusammen

Ich muss in Deutsch eine Geschichte schreiben und dabei gibt es zwei Wörter die ich nicht weiss ob ich sie gross oder klein schreiben muss. Die grossgeschriebenen Wörter unten in den beiden Sätzen betrifft es.

1. Ich weiss das ich jetzt nichts FALSCHES sagen darf, denn sonst bin ich noch länger im Krankenhaus.
2. Ich beantworte ihr alles und als ich aus dem Fenster schaue, sehe ich etwas WEISSES das uns verfolgt.

Danke für eure Hilfe. 😊

Ich bin gerade mit 2 Arbeiten für die Uni beschäftigt und ich habe aktuell eine extreme Schreibblockade

JOE:

Have you read the newspaper article about Susi Shine? It says she IS EXPLOITING (exploit) Chinese labourers. Actually, that SOUND (sound) terrible.

HEATHER: | AM WORKING (work) on a class project and didn't have time to read go papers. I DOUBT (doubt) that a successful celebrity like her would do anything like that.

JOE: it is true. I PROMISE (promise). After she became famous as a singer started designing clothes and shoes. She IS MAKING (make) money with her fancy dresses and her shoes. And now she even OWN (own) a company that produces her clothes and shoes in China! Three activists investigated labour conditions at this factory that SEEM (seem) to produce shoes under terrible working conditions.

HEATHER: Oh, yes. Sure, I REMEMBER (remember) the news! The three activists ARE WORKING (work) for China Labor Watch, which is based in New York.

They ARE INVESTIGATING (investigate) this factory in China. How could I forget?

JOE:

Exactly, the activists INDENT (intend) to publish a report showing that Susi Shine BELONG (belong) to the group of business people who ARE ACCEPTINV (accept) low pay, massive overtime, crude verbal

abuse and unacceptable misuse of labour in Chinese factories to increase their profit.

Hallihalloo

kann mir jemand erklären, wann man im englisch bei den relativ pronomen auch that brauchen kann und wann nicht?

the people who/that came. (hier geht ja beides oder?)

und bei where kann man nicht mit that ersetzen.

aber kann ich jetzt bei jedem satz wo ich z.b. which schreiben will auch that benutzen oder gibt es ausnahmen?

danke für eure hilfe:)

Frage steht oben.

Ich bräuchte jeweils 4.

danke für eure hilfe :)

Heeeey, ich schriebe morgen ein Englischarbeit und wir sollen dann über einen Film einen Essay schreiben, ich habe heute mal geübt über den Film ,,die Eiskönigin" und och wollte mal nachfragen, ob das so okay ist, also ist das gut so?

(Bitte ignoriert einfach Rechtschreibfehler)

THE FROZEN SUMMER

The Film “Frozen” is an animated Disney Film released in 2013. The story revolves around sisters Elsa and Anna and Elsa was born with magical ice powers. She runs away and Anna wants to find her. The film is a very good film for the whole family because it has a lot of emotions and it wouldn’t be boring.

The Film is about two sisters Anna and Elsa and Elsa was born with magical powers, but she cant control them. So she runs away to the mountains to live alone, because she turns Arendell to an very long winter. Anna go together with Olaf the Snowman, Kristoff and his reindeer Sven to bring back the Summer. Bacause of Elsa Annas hair turns white and Sven brings her back to the castel to Prince Hans, because only true love can save her life. Olaf cames and do a fire, but Anna leave the castel to seek Kristoff. At the same Time Hans wanted to kill Elsa,because he want the castle for himself. But then Anna turns Into Ice and Elsa was very sad, so she hugs her sister Anna and then Anna returns to normal and Elsa can Controll her ice Powers.

My favourite Character is Olaf the Snowman. I like him because he’s a bit funny and he tells jokes at a difficult Situation. And I like him because he’s friendly and ready to help.

My favourite Scene is the Scene with Olaf and Anna next to the Fire. The Scene when Olaf was very happy because he saw Kristoff and Sven coming back to the Castle. I like it, because Olaf try to help Anna and he say she has to stay next to the fire to keep warm. And I like it, because Olaf is very happy when he saw Kristoff and Sven come back to the Castle.

My favourite Quote is ‘‘some People are worth melting for‘‘ from Olaf. I like it, because it‘s from Olaf and it shows that you like someone very much, if you would do this for someone. So it shows that you are ready to do something like that for someone.

The first lesson you can learn from the film is, that you shouldn’t trust anyone you’ve only know for one day, because it can be very dangerouse and you really don’t know the person very well. The second lesson is, you don’t have to give up, when you try something. When you really want to do something, then you dont have to give up very early.

The Film Frozen is a very good disney film for everyonen. It is very adenturous and also a bit sad. The film is definitely a film you should watch.

Könnte ich das in der Englischarbeit ungefähr auch so machen?

Ich hoffe jemand kann mir helfen, danke schonmal

:)

Ich schreibe morgen in englisch eine Arbeit und in einem Teil dieser Arbeit müssen wir halt so einen Artikel schreiben über eine Art Unfall würde ich es mal nennen ich habe immer Probleme damit eine Spannende Überschrift zu finden oder Wörter die, die Handlung dramatisiren zu finden. Hat jemand Tipps wie ich es möglichst dramatisch machen kann ?

Ich soll für den Philosophie Unterricht einen Aufsatz zu einer Problemfrage schreiben. Da ich mich sehr für griechische Götter und Mythologie interessiere, würde ich gerne darüber schreiben. Mir fällt aber keine gute Frage ein, die man philosophisch/ethisch aufarbeiten kann.

Hat jemand eine Idee?