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Dialog Englisch

Hallo, in englisch sollen wir einen Dialog machen, da sollen wir eine Party planen..

Könntet ihr euch das mal durchlesen und mir die Grammatik/Rechtschreib-Fehler nennen?

Danke!

Fiona: Hey Lara! How are you?

Lara: Hello. I'm fine, thank you. Franzi has got birthday at the 12th December.

Fiona: How about a surprise party?

Lara: That's a good idea!

Fiona: I suggest, we make the party at your home.

Lara: No, my parents say I am not allowed to do a party at home. I thin we ought to do the party at your home.

Fiona: That's okay. And when we make the party?

Lara: At Franzis birthday. Have you got time at the 12th December at 5 o´ clock in the evening? Fiona: Yes, I have. What want we do with her?

Lara: I've got an idea. We could go to the cinema or we can go bowling?

Fiona: I decide on the cinema. What movie want we see?

Lara: We can see „Fack ju Göhte“ and after the movie we can go to your home.

Fiona: We can eat pizza.

Lara: I am able to bring the pizza. What can we drink? How about coke?

Fiona: Yes, coke is tasty. I'm able to buy the coke.

Lara: That's good. We have to hear music!

Fiona: We could hear charts, but I'm not allowed to hear it to loud.

Lara: Shall I send the invation to Emely and Charlott?

Fiona: Yes. When ends the party?

Lara: I have to be home at 10 o´ clock in the evening.

Fiona: Okay, but I have to clean the room. Can you help me, please?

Lara: Yes, of course. Sorry, I must leave now. I have other arrangements.

Fiona: Okay, I will call you.

Lara: Bye!

Englisch, Party, Dialog, Grammatik

Dringend - Deutsch - Grammatik - Satzgliedbestimmung

Hallo wie in der Überschrift schon hoffentlich verständlich ausgedrückt, erbitte ich Hilfe bzw. ein kontrolierendes Auge bezüglich meines "kleinen Werkes".

Da ich morgen eine Arbeischreiben werde, dessen Teilaufgaben sich auch auf dieses Thema erstrecken, wollte ich mir einen kleinen Diktattext hinaussuchen und die Satzglieder bestimmen... Wie ich merkte sind die Sätze (leider) nicht so "schön" bzw. "einfach", wie die im Unterricht besprochenen.,,, und so sind mehrere Fragen offen geblieben, die ich mir bis jetzt noch nicht beantworten konnte.

Ich würde mich über jeden kleinen Versuch mir zu helfen, indem "der rote Stift" geschwugen wird, dankbar

(für mich "nicht zuordbare" Wörter sind mit zwei Fragezeichen in der Beantwortungszeile eingeschlossen und diese wiederrum von Klammern, also: (?x?) Attribute, die

Danke. :)

Gut| ist| manchmal| besser Subjekt Prädikat Temporalbestimmung Modalbestimmung(?)

Dass man die meisten Adjektive steigern kann,| ist| dir| todsicher längst bekannt. Objektsatz Prädikat Dativ Modalebestimmung

Auch| weißt| du,| dass man sie durch das Zusammenfügen zweier Adjektive in ihrer Bedeutung abschwächen oder verstärken kann. (?auch?) Prädikat Subjekt Subjektsatz

Rechtschreibung| ist| dann| plötzlich| nicht mehr nur einfach,| sondern supereinfach. Subjekt Prädikat temporale Bestimmung Modalbestimmung Adversativbestimmung

Und aus kurzen Pausen| werden| mal eben| ultrakurze Pausen. Präpositional-O., Prädikat, Temporalbestimmung, Dativ-O.

Aber| wusstest| du| auch| schon,| dass Adjektive uns manchmal gewaltig an der Nase herumführen? (?aber?) Prädikat, Subjekt, (?auch?), temporale Bestimmung, Subjektsatz

Zum Beispiel| dann,| wenn etwas schon besser ist. Präpositional-O., temporale Bestimmung, Konditionalsatz

Dann| ist| es| nämlich| noch lange nicht unbedingt gut oder supergut. Temporale Bestimm ung Prädikat, Subjekt, (?nämlich?),

Und| wer| ist| eigentlich| älter,| die alte Dame oder die ältere Dame? (?und?) (?wer?) Prädikat (?eigentlich?) modalbestimmung, Subjekt (da geht ewahrscheinlich viel schief bei mir...)

Gut, wir| wollen| diese superschlauen Überlegungen| nicht bitterernst| nehmen. (?gut?), Subjekt, Prädikat, Akkusativ-O., Modalbestimmung, Prädikat Fortführung

Aber| sie| können| dir als Hinweis| dienen,| dass Rechtschreibung und Grammatik nicht todlangweilig sein müssen. (?aber?) Subjekt, Prädikat, Dativ-O, Prädikat, Subjektsatz

Das Nachdenken über Regeln| kann auch zu| brandneuen Erkenntnissen| darüber| führen, dass sich Inhalt und Form in der Sprache voll schwer voneinander trennen lassen. Subjekt Prädikat Akkusativ-O. (?darüber?) Präfikat Fortführung Subjektsatz

Auch wenn| dies| für jemanden|, der sich mit den Regeln von Rechtschreibung und Grammatik schwertut,| nur ein lauwarmer Trost| sein mag. (?Auch wenn?) Subjekt Präpositionalbestimmung Relativsatz Akkusativ-O. Prädikat

Deutsch, Grammatik, Satzglieder

Bitte um Korrektur text about myself

Im folgendem text sind sicherlich grammatikalische fehler. Ihr würdet mir sehr helfen wenn ihr mir helft. danke im vorraus :)

Let me just briefly introduce myself before I start to tell you about my life and my future plans. My name is .... . The letters of my name describe me best: self-confident, easygoing, loyal, independent, natural and ambitious. Currently I live in Cottbus and attend the 11 th grade at the Humboldt-Grammar-School. I am 16 years old and have the best family. I love my grandmothe, grandfather, mum, dad and my one year younger brother. I don’t remember when we have argued the last time. In my freetime I love to talk with my friends about all unimportant topics and go to parties but to be active is also very important to me. That’s why I try to go jogging regulary. In former times I was a member of different sports clubs, e.g. gymnastics or athletics. If I have nothing to do, this means no homework, nothing to learn or other aktivities I love to relax if I watch TV. My strength are in team skills, reliability and self-reliance. In addition I’m very sociable and cooperative. Some of my less great properties are listlessness and reticence. Furthermore you can describe me as reserved, because to entrust myself to someone is difficult for me. Hitherto school wasn’t a big problem for me. My strengths are in scientific subjects, this includes mathematics or chemistry. Difficult for me ist German because there is another weakness of me: spelling and grammar. Therefore English and Polish isn’t easy to me, too. Occupations like journalist or copyreader are out of the question very early.

Englisch, Text, Personen, Eigenschaften, Grammatik, Korrektur, Rechtschreibung

Sind die Zeiten so korrekt? ( Englisch / the apple tree / on the beach)

Hallo, Wäre super, wenn da jemand drüberlesen und die Zeiten (und auch alles andere) verbessern könnte. Komme da immer durcheinander. Es geht um die Bücher On the Beach und The apple tree.

Ich schreibe die fragen mal mit auf:

1. At the beginning at the novel, Moira Davidson drinks a lot of alcohol and is a real party girl, but she changes during the novel. How does he change and why does she change? = Moira Davidson changes her life during the novel because she gets to know Dwight Towers. She likes him very much. I think she wants to change her life for him and maybe she thinks Dwight will marry her if she stops drinking alcohol. Furthermore she understands that life is too short and she has to change her life before she will die of the radiation.

2. Dwight Towers spends a lot of his time with Moira, but he does not take her with him when he sails out to sink his submarine at the end of the story. Why does he not take her with him? = Dwight Towers is of the opinion, that everybody must die in their own way. He is a Navy Commander and wants to die in his submarine with his crew. Another reason why he doesn't take Moira with him is the admiration for his dead wife. I guess he thinks that i will be wrong to die in the arms of another woman.

3. Mary makes plans for her garden and they talk to each other as though life is going on. Why do they behave like that? Give reasons. = I guess they behave like that because it is hard to accept that they will die. Mary Holmes finds it difficult to know that her little daughter Jennifer maybe dies before her. In her despair she tries to ignore the reality and tries to enjoy the last days with her family.

4. Have you got an ambition that you would like to fulfil? What is it? Give reasons. = Of course I have an ambition that I would like to fulfil. There are two big dreams which I never lose sight of. One of them is to become a doctor for human medicine. I wants to study it for more than ten years and I will do everything to let it come true. I know the study is very hard and that I must have a good average to authorize for the study but it is my dream job. I think it is an indescribable feeling to help people and make them healthy and happy.

My second dream is to own a horse. I ride since I was six years old and I am of the opinion that horses are the most beautiful animals in this world. They have such an elegance and their are like friends to me. But horses are so expensive and they take so much of your time. At first I want to have a good job and then I would like to buy a Friesian horse. I am sure that I will own a horse one day.

Part 2: 1. There are two apple trees in the story. Which characters do you think they represent? Give reasons. = The two apple trees stand for two women in the protagonist's life. The first one represents his wife Midge and the second one rep

Englisch, Grammatik, Zeit

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