Englische Hausaufgabe über probleme von Teenagern heutzutage verbessern?
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A frequently Problem for Teenagern today is the self acceptance. More and more Teenagern have no self-confidence anymore or even suffer from self-hatred because they have the feeling to not be good enought. Due to all the stress of the parents, The school, The acceptance of groups, the expectation of oneself and all the Tasks of everyday it can be to get lost in it. Teenager have the same redponsibilities like the afults but cant be independent and don't have the rights to Decide about themselfs. Nowadays there are evermore Teenager that suffer from mental illness. They suffer from negative body image.And they want to find out who they are. Today Teenagern feel Lots of pressure from peers,Parents and Society to conform to conflicting expectation. The parents make a lot of pressure to have good Grades and they forbid a lot of things. The Society make fast jokes about people and if you take it seriously you will get a lot of self-doubt. So a lot of Teenager try to cop with their Problems and are ready to take risk for example drugs and they don't become the Help that they need.