Buch Review Englisch?

Hallo,

ich habe ein Review zu dem Buch ‚Among the Hidden‘ geschrieben (Schule). Ich würde mich freuen, wenn ihr mir Feedback dazu geben könntet und mich auf Fehler jeglicher Art hinweisen könntet.

Imagine you were born in a society where your existance is a crime forcing you to hide your whole life. This is exactly what Luke Garner, one of the protagonists from the dystopian novel „Among the Hidden“ by Margaret Peterson Haddix is experiencing. Haddix is a popular author living in the United States and also known for books like „Running out of Time“ or „Greystone secretes“. In the novel, due to food shortages in the past, the government implemented a law limiting families to only two children. The story follows the life of Luke, a third child who must hide from the government to avoid being killed. In a thrilling way, the reader comes the characters closer and closer along the story. Considering the fact that the Chinese government had implemented a similar law with its „one-child policy“ which ended in 2016, the breathtaking story feels even more fascinating. Combined with an excellent choice of characters with very unique personalities it was a pleasure reading „Among the Hidden“.

The novel begins by introducing the protagonist, Luke Garner. Luke is forced to remain hidden in his family's attic, as he is not allowed to attend school or leave the house. One day, Luke meets Jen, another third child, and they become friends. He learns about the different ways that third children are punished and the risks involved in fighting for their rights. The book reaches its climax when Luke learns about Jen’s brutal death after she protested in public for the rights of third children. At the end of the book Luke gets the chance to receive a new identity enabling him to find ways to change society and create a place for Shadow Children just as Jen wanted. 

One of the strengths of the book is its exploration of government regulations and their impact on society. This raises important questions about government control and the value of individuality. The author does an excellent job of showing the consequences of such regulations and the impact they have on people's lives. Another strength of the book is its portrayal of family relationships. Luke's relationship with his family is central to the story, and the book explores the importance of family in a society that seeks to control and limit it. Haddix shows how Luke's family is willing to risk everything to protect and support him, despite the dangers they face. 

The conveyed feeling the story is not far in the future and many plots and twists make it even more interesting and give the reader new appreciation for his own world after ‚visiting‘ Luke‘s.

Overall, the book is a great choice for those who enjoy dystopian fiction and are interested in a sustainable world.

The book is definitely worth reading and I recommend it for all ages.

LG

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Hi, ich habe einen text in englisch geschrieben ohne Hilfe. Ich wollte von euch aus wissen ob ihr es versteht?

I work for ....... in ........, there works are 500 people in the manufactury company. The company produce plastics and production the bearing.

Max ..... is the founder company in since ...... in germany /willich, that is why “.......” in the company name. The headquarters is in France. We are producing bearings and tolerance rings for different application. The consumer can`t see the products, although we are use it every day. They are used facilitate various rotational, linear and high fregrency-oscillatory for different types of movement.

Sample: the cars no matter what movement, the window, the door, tires, wheel and the seat that is was are used and adjusted.

In the company starting from the production of block made PTFE to shipping. I work for the department that’s mechanical zinc, by internal finishing. The department is galvanic chemistry.

The prepared bearings, that come to us in internal finishing. Firstly, the products are get washed because the oil off them bearings. Secondly 10.000 parts come in to the OTEC-System, in the OTEC galvanized with 15 liters of porcelain polishing bodies (that is the white pens), water and chemical receipt (activator, promotor and zinc).

Finally, the corrosion production, to protect the metal which often comes into contact with water from rust.

P.S. ich dürfte nicht viel preis geben von der Firma aus.

wie würdet ihr das bewerten?

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Englisch Arbeit Text über Globale Erwärmung?

Hallo

ich Bin in der 9. klasse und gehe auf eine real Schule

ich schreibe morgen eine englisch Arbeit, und muss wahrscheinlich auch ein Text über globale Erwärmung schreiben

wie ist dieser Text?

Was würdet ihr ändern? Ist er in Ordnung?

,,Global warming is the average temperature increasing all over the world over an extended period of time. But it doesn't mean it's happening equally all over the world.

The burning of fossil fuels, deforestation and animal husbandry are increasingly affecting the Earth's climate and temperature.

The amount of naturally occurring greenhouse gases in the atmosphere increases enormously, which intensifies the greenhouse effect and global warming.

You can also do something about global warming if you use bicycles and public transport instead of driving your own car or if you can choose to use electric cars because they have a better climate footprint.

You can also pay attention to which country your fruit and vegetables come from next time you go to the supermarket. It is best to try to buy fruit or vegetables that are locally sourced, as this way you can reduce the distance that the food needs to get to you.

Polar bears are also dying due to global warming as they have less and less habitat because the ice is melting.

Glaciers have been melting for more than 20 years. In addition, sea levels are rising, resulting in flooding.

In countries where it is very hot, forest fires occur, such as in Turkey.

Because of climate change, around 40% of all insects may become extinct.“

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Englisch Artikel bitte korrigieren oder umschreiben?

Hallo Leute, könnt ihr eventuell diesen Artikel lesen und wenn da Fehler sind, es zu korrigieren oder umzuschreiben? Wäre super nett von euch, meine Hausübung wird nämlich benotet und schreibt noch euren Feedback rein, ich danke euch :)

Los Angeles has seen the evil

A recent school shooting in Los Angeles has brought the issue of school safety in the bad light. So, people became aware of these happening. On 30th April 2023, two 17-year-old students have armed their high school with two guns which left 11 people dead and 5 injured. This incident has left people worried about the safety of students and staff at schools.

Gun violence, especially in schools, is still a national crisis in the United States and migrants are still allowed to carry a gun because of the “national firearms agreement”. Due to the licenses of weapons, such acts are occurring more and more frequently. In order to protect students and school staff, most schools have security guards. There are also usually controls at the entrances. As a way to prevent non-schoolers from entering the school, they have their own school cards, which clearly show the identifies of the students. In addition, the police have increased their presence at schools.

Students, who have witnessed such incident, are usually traumatised and can hardly cope without psychological help. Many students and parents report terrible feelings and perceptions. “I was so scared when I heard gunshots. I ran and hid under a desk until the police came. Now I’m afraid to come back to school,” says a victim who survived this cruelty. Parents were calling desperately for their children, they even got more scared when they didn’t respond. These are just a few. As a result, the police has to deal with such incidents more and more often. “It is nothing scary anymore, we are already used to it”, claims a policeman. “We are already best prepared for such acts”, adds another officer. They have certain educations and trainings for these hardships.

Due to the school shooting on April 30th, this issue is more present than ever. Many students and parents are extremely frightened that they can also be victims. This clearly shows that much more could be done preventively.

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