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Ich bin wirklich grauenhaft in englisch. Könnte jemand da nochmal überschauen und ggf. korrigieren. Ich bekomme hier die Krise.
Die Aufgabe war einen 4 tägigen trip zu erstellen.
Danke :)
Day one:
The trip begins at the south entrance of the New York central park.
There are many Squirrels you can try too feed.
In the middle of the park is a sea with ducks that you are not allowed to feed.
The next target is the Central Park Zoo, you can find the right route by looking at the sings.
A tour through the zoo without attraction lasts approximately one hour.
You can see your next destination from the Park.
Next we go to the Empire state building.
This is the highes building of America with 381m.
The entry kost 55 Dollar.
After that you go to the times square.
It’s the most beautiful in the evening, because the lights are very bright then.
The times square is the fullest at new years eve.
There is the beautifulest firework you will ever seen.
Day two:
The day begins at the „Rockefeller Center“.
There you can iceskating in the cold month or rollerskating in the warm month.
The next stop is the Edge.
On the roof of this building, you have a beautiful view above the whole city.
If you like Museum, you can visit the Intrepid Sea-Air-Space Museum.
There you can see some aircraft and submarine.
At next you visit the Riverside Park. You can find there the Hamilton Fountain and the Eleanor Roosevelt Memorial.
If you walk across the park you come to the George Washington bridge.
Day three:
Your third day starts at the coney island park.
There is a big aquarium with a tunnel where the fish swim above you.
Last but noch least, you go in the Mermaid spa to relax well.
Day four:
Your last day begins in the Whole Foods marked in Brooklyn.
There you can see lots of food culture of America.
After that much food, you go to the Brooklyn bridge park for the perfect view of the Brooklyn bride.
Your last highlight of this trip is the Manhattan mall.
This is the perfect spot to go shopping.
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Day one:
The trip begins at the south entrance of the New York Central Park.
There are many squirrels you can try too feed.
In the middle of the park is a lake with ducks that you are not allowed to feed.
The next stop is the Central Park Zoo, you can find the right route by looking at the sings.
A tour through the zoo without attraction lasts approximately one hour. (ich weiß nicht, was du hier meinst)
You can see your next destination from the park.
Next we go to the Empire State Building.
This is the highest building of America with 381m. (ist es nicht mehr, das ist jetzt das One World Trade Center)
The entry costs 55 Dollar.
After that you go to the Times Square.
It’s the most beautiful in the evening, because the lights are very bright then.
The Times Square is the fullest at New Years Eve.
There is the most beautiful firework you will ever see.
Day two:
The day begins at the „Rockefeller Center“.
There you can go iceskating in the cold months or rollerskating in the warm months.
The next stop is The Edge.
On the roof of this building you have a beautiful view above the whole city.
If you like museums, you can visit the Intrepid Sea-Air-Space Museum.
There you can see some aircrafts and submarines.
Next you visit the Riverside Park. There you can find the Hamilton Fountain and the Eleanor Roosevelt Memorial.
If you walk through the park you come to the George Washington Bridge.
Day three:
Your third day starts at the Coney Island Park.
There is a big aquarium with a tunnel where the fish swim above you.
Last but not least, you go in the Mermaid Spa to relax well.
Day four:
Your last day begins in the Whole Foods market in Brooklyn.
There you can see lots of food cultures of America.
After that much food, you go to the Brooklyn Bridge Park for the perfect view of the Brooklyn Bridge.
Your last highlight of this trip is the Manhattan Mall.
This is the perfect spot to go shopping.
***Achte vor allem darauf Eigennamen von Gebäuden, Parks, etc. immer groß zu schreiben und die Pluralendungen nicht zu vergessen. Ansonsten kann man das schon so lassen. Muss ja bestimmt nicht perfekt sein***
Die Grammatik an sich stimmt ja. Es gibt vielleicht die ein oder anderen Sachen, die ich persönlich umformulieren würde, aber dann wäre es ja nicht mehr deine Eigenleistung ^^
Alles gut. Tippfehler und so passieren ja schon mal sehr schnell.
Danke. Ich bin eben auch nochmal drüber gegangen und einige Sachen sind mir ein bisschen peinlich hahahah