Englisch-Deutsch – die neusten Beiträge

Englisch?

Könnte jemand mal über meinen Text vor allem wegen der Informationen und der Grammatik drüber schauen? Danke, wäre sehr lieb!

,,Lakota is a Native American tribe and they lived in America at first. Now they live in South and North Dakota. Lakota people are nomadic hunters and gatherers and they kill buffaloes to stay alive. The food is poor, so they need to kill buffaloes. They are strongly connected with the nature. They are a part of larger Sioux Nation which consists of Lakota, Dakota and Nakota. They wear headdresses with feathers and they have been a part of North American history for over 500 years. They have their own language and traditions such as Sun Dance. Sun Dance is a tradition that includes fasting, praying, and dancing to honor the sun. Another famous tradition is Vision Quest where people go on a journey in nature to seek personal revelation and spiritual growth. But they also have a strong tradition of storytelling, telling legends, and teaching from one generation to the next. Lakota is also very known for its history because in the 19th century, an argument between European settlers, the U.S. government and their tribe broke out and their tribe fought against them. Sitting Bull and Crazy Horse were the chiefs of their tribe and they protected them. They also fought against the U.S. government because they wanted to keep their land. They also did it but more arguments broke out after they had done it for the first time, so, after all, they lost their land nevertheless. Today they live on reservations.“

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wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Informationen zu ergänzen habt, dann gerne her damit! :)

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Englisch?

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob mal jemand über meinen Text drüber schauen könnte. Wäre echt sehr lieb, danke!

,,My parents come from Kazakhstan and my mother came to Germany when she was 12 years old. My father came to Germany when he was 15 years old. They were forced to leave their home country by their parents because they wanted to start a new life and they were only teenagers, so they weren‘t allowed to decide whether they would stay in Kazakhstan or go to Germany. I was born in Germany and I can‘t speak Russian. I really like Germany because of the people but if I had to leave Germany, I would definitely go to Spain since it is a very interesting, warm and gorgeous country. I can‘t stand cold days, so it would be a perfect country for me. There are several beaches and unique sights such as the castle in Madrid. But nevertheless, a war or bad government would have to happen so that I would leave Germany because then it would be really bad to live in Germany as you wouldn‘t be treated well. But if I really had enough money, I would try to immigrate to Spain. I would hope that the people would be friendly to me and understand that I wouldn‘t be able to speak their language at first but I even think that I wouldn‘t be able to speak Spanish fluently even if I learned it for several years because it is a difficult language. I would also hope that the life would be great there and I would make new friends. I think I would also have a lot of problems for example missing my family and my friends and I would have problems with speaking their language. I would be afraid of talking to them since perhaps they would make fun of me or would talk to me in an unfriendly way. It would be a complete change for me and I would have to get used to new habits for example going to another school. On the other hand, it would be great to experience new adventures and explore new locations. You could go to a beach every day! So, on the one hand, I would really like to go to Spain but on the other hand, I would be really afraid of leaving my home country because of the problems that could "destroy“ my life. I am not sure whether I stay here in Germany or go to an other country.“

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Englisch?

Hallo. Könnte mal eventuell jemand über meinen Text über die USA drüber schauen? Wäre echt lieb von euch, danke! Und wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Sachen zum Text ergänzen würdet (Themen, wie z.B. die Bevölkerung usw), dann gerne her damit!
,,The US are in North America. America is a Continental and it consists of South America, Central America and North America. The US are very popular since they created a lot of things like McDonald’s and so on. It is very cool there because of the many sights such as the Statue of Liberty which you can see in many pictures. You can see a lot of cool things of the US have become so popular. Today the population of the US are about 330 million. The capital is Washington, D.C and people come there from all over the world. People from Mexico, Central or South America are called Hispanics or Lations. Their first language is often Spanish, so the US don‘t have a national language since more than one third of the population speaks Spanish in some areas and that is why most of the signs are in Spanish and English. There are about 2,5 million Native Americans and most of them live on reservations. When white immigrants came to America in the 17th century, they fought against the Native Americans because they wanted to get their land and after they had won, most of Native Americans had to leave their land and they had to live on reservations. Today, they still live on reservations and they are very poor. They don‘t have any jobs, so they try to earn money by keeping traditions such as the powwow. It is a celebration of American Indian culture. They sing, feast and dance there. Native Americans such as the Cherokees are one of the most popular Indian tribes of the US and they live in the South of the US. Another popular tribe are the Navajos who live in the Southwestern of the US. In 1883 there were 4 million black Americans and they didn‘t have the same rights as white Americans, so people like Malcolm X fought for the rights of black people. Today about 40 million black Americans live in the US. As you can see, the US had a lot of problems in the past but it is still a very cool nation.“

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ich wäre euch echt dankbar!

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Ich will in die USA auswandern - Vorbereitung?

Hey liebe Community👋, wie ihr schon im Titel gelesen habt möchte ich in die USA auswandern. Mein großvater (Mütterlicher Seite) war US Amerikaner und ich bin somit auch zu ungefähr 20 - 30% amerikanisch. Meine Familienverhältnisse sind mäßig aber ich könnte auch gut drauf verzichten. Ich bin zurzeit 16 Jahre alt und habe vor meine Auswanderung innerhalb der nächsten 6 Jahre durchzuführen. Ich habe sprachlich sehr sehr gute Englisch Kenntnisse durch meinen Stammbaum ein wenig weil wir mit meinen Opa ausschließlich Englisch sprechen konnten bevor er verstarb 2020 und in der Schule war ich auch immer 1ser und 2er Schüler in Englisch. Organisatorisches was meiner Meinung sehr wichtig zu klären ist, ist Allerdings: Ich würde gerne irgendwo eine Art Crashkurs für eine amerikanische Arbeits- und Schulwelt machen...Ich kann zwar Englisch sprechen und alles aber Dinge wie die Fächer Chemie oder Physik auf Englisch kann ich nicht. Ich muss ja dort auch arbeiten. Ich mache zwar derzeit in Deutschland eine kfz Mechatroniker Ausbildung aber das ganze müsste dann ja auch fließend auf Englisch funktionieren. Über die amerikanische Wirtschaft bin ich schon lange aufgeklärt aber die Arbeits Kommunikation macht mir ein bisschen Sorgen. Kann man dafür in Deutschland schon lernen bei separat Englischen Ausbildungen oder so? Und könnte ich mit einer deutschen Ausbildung auch in den USA was anfangen? Würde mich echt freuen wenn mir das noch jemand sagen könnte und sonstige Tipps bevorzuge ich natürlich auch gerne. Vielen Dank für eure Antworten und noch einen schönen Tag!

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Kann jemand das für mich korrigieren? Ich soll Stative und Dynamic verben einsetzen?

JOE:

Have you read the newspaper article about Susi Shine? It says she IS EXPLOITING (exploit) Chinese labourers. Actually, that SOUND (sound) terrible.

HEATHER: | AM WORKING (work) on a class project and didn't have time to read go papers. I DOUBT (doubt) that a successful celebrity like her would do anything like that.

JOE: it is true. I PROMISE (promise). After she became famous as a singer started designing clothes and shoes. She IS MAKING (make) money with her fancy dresses and her shoes. And now she even OWN (own) a company that produces her clothes and shoes in China! Three activists investigated labour conditions at this factory that SEEM (seem) to produce shoes under terrible working conditions.

HEATHER: Oh, yes. Sure, I REMEMBER (remember) the news! The three activists ARE WORKING (work) for China Labor Watch, which is based in New York.

They ARE INVESTIGATING (investigate) this factory in China. How could I forget?

JOE:

Exactly, the activists INDENT (intend) to publish a report showing that Susi Shine BELONG (belong) to the group of business people who ARE ACCEPTINV (accept) low pay, massive overtime, crude verbal

abuse and unacceptable misuse of labour in Chinese factories to increase their profit.

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Ist das ein guter Essay (Englisch)?

Heeeey, ich schriebe morgen ein Englischarbeit und wir sollen dann über einen Film einen Essay schreiben, ich habe heute mal geübt über den Film ,,die Eiskönigin" und och wollte mal nachfragen, ob das so okay ist, also ist das gut so?

(Bitte ignoriert einfach Rechtschreibfehler)

THE FROZEN SUMMER

The Film “Frozen” is an animated Disney Film released in 2013. The story revolves around sisters Elsa and Anna and Elsa was born with magical ice powers. She runs away and Anna wants to find her. The film is a very good film for the whole family because it has a lot of emotions and it wouldn’t be boring.

The Film is about two sisters Anna and Elsa and Elsa was born with magical powers, but she cant control them. So she runs away to the mountains to live alone, because she turns Arendell to an very long winter. Anna go together with Olaf the Snowman, Kristoff and his reindeer Sven to bring back the Summer. Bacause of Elsa Annas hair turns white and Sven brings her back to the castel to Prince Hans, because only true love can save her life. Olaf cames and do a fire, but Anna leave the castel to seek Kristoff. At the same Time Hans wanted to kill Elsa,because he want the castle for himself. But then Anna turns Into Ice and Elsa was very sad, so she hugs her sister Anna and then Anna returns to normal and Elsa can Controll her ice Powers.

My favourite Character is Olaf the Snowman. I like him because he’s a bit funny and he tells jokes at a difficult Situation. And I like him because he’s friendly and ready to help.

My favourite Scene is the Scene with Olaf and Anna next to the Fire. The Scene when Olaf was very happy because he saw Kristoff and Sven coming back to the Castle. I like it, because Olaf try to help Anna and he say she has to stay next to the fire to keep warm. And I like it, because Olaf is very happy when he saw Kristoff and Sven come back to the Castle.

My favourite Quote is ‘‘some People are worth melting for‘‘ from Olaf. I like it, because it‘s from Olaf and it shows that you like someone very much, if you would do this for someone. So it shows that you are ready to do something like that for someone.

The first lesson you can learn from the film is, that you shouldn’t trust anyone you’ve only know for one day, because it can be very dangerouse and you really don’t know the person very well. The second lesson is, you don’t have to give up, when you try something. When you really want to do something, then you dont have to give up very early.

The Film Frozen is a very good disney film for everyonen. It is very adenturous and also a bit sad. The film is definitely a film you should watch.

Könnte ich das in der Englischarbeit ungefähr auch so machen?

Ich hoffe jemand kann mir helfen, danke schonmal

:)

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Ist dieser Text gut?

If you ever decide to travel to California, I promise you that you will have the adventure of a lifetime. From the iconic cities to the diverse landscape, everything I have recently witnessed firsthand was incredible.

I set off on my way to California, the Golden State, one week ago. On my last evening here, while enjoying the unique sunset on the deck of my host brother, I want to take the opportunity to report about my memorable experiences here.

My host family resides in San Francisco, consisting of two parents, my pen pal Max, and the little girl Francisca. Except for the strange little girl, the host family was very hospitable and gave me the chance to savor the beauty of California.

 My initial days in the Golden State were spent in San Francisco. My host family had a nice house with a big garden. The first few days we tried to get to know each other, they introduced me to the game of baseball, which proved to be quite enjoyable, and I have settled in very fast. 

On the third day, to bike it up across the bridge. The view was breathtaking, and the bridge was unimaginably long. I think it took us a good 45 minutes just to reach the middle, where we paused to capture the moment with some photos

However, after we finished, it was almost dusk, so we decided to visit the city center of San Francisco. The things I liked the most were these tall buildings and all the lights that came from everywhere, so I highly suggest you visit it in the evening. 

The following day we drove further afield to the Sequoia National Park, renowned due to its impressive giant sequoias, some of which are over 3,000 years old. It was fascinating, and I even saw a baby fox that seemed to  be was very scared of us. There we camped for two nights. Camping with my host family was an amazing experience! Each evening, we gathered around the campfire, sharing songs, stories, and laughter. The serene atmosphere was heightened by the gentle crackling of the flames and the occasional visit from curious animals. It was a truly magical and unforgettable time we spent in those relaxing nature retreats.  I would definitely make it to an obligation to visit this place for touristts.  

Subsequently, we made our way to Los Angeles, the glamorous Hollywood city. My host father was eager to share with me the real-life gaze of the Hollywood lettering, so on our way to there, we stopped at those letters and took a lot of photos. It wasn't any different from the photos I have seen before on the Internet, but it was still a nice experience. Our holiday flat was in the center of downtown, which was a big advantage because we were surrounded by countless sights and attractions. Not even 10 kilometers away was the famous Walk of Fame. It was quite interesting. People of all shapes and sizes were there, but regrettably no celebrities. Despite that, it was very beautiful there, and I enjoyed it. After a while, as we drove back, the family insisted on showing me the other side of California on my final days, while driving through the Skid Row. It was a neighborhood full of poverty and crime, with both drug addicts and dealers. It was wretched and sad to see how even minors have to live under such conditions. The next day we drove back to San Francisco

As I bid farewell to my host family and prepare to depart, I carry with me gratitude and the longing to return to this impressive land of sun, sights, and city streets, where every moment feels like an adventure. Until next time, your Maria!

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