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It’s 3 am, I’m running through the park 

The vodka bottle is empty 

I think I’ll lose my spark 

Yes I know i shouldn’t drink 

but I was already drunk, before I could even think 

I went into the disco 

The people staring at me 

I’m starting feeling dizzy 

I’m falling on my knee 

The alcohol is taking Control

Over me,over me 

Where’s the Exit from this Club 

I couldn’t see, I couldn’t see 

Oh, I shouldn’t drink with my medication 

But this night was the perfect occasion 

And then came this girl 

She helped me to stand up 

She ordered another drink 

And I emptied the cup 

She was drunk ,I was too 

She said I want to kiss you 

And damn I  wanted it to 

We kissed it was so cute 

I shoot my shot,I shoot 

The alcohol is taking Control

Over me,over me 

Where’s the Exit from this Club 

I couldn’t see, I couldn’t see 

Oh, I shouldn’t drink with my medication 

But this night was the perfect occasion 

But suddenly, I woke up on the wet floor

I saw Jesus Christ opens me a door 

He said “this is the door to death,You died from an alcohol poisoning”

“Yeah, I’m finally dead” I sing

My life has an end because of my medicaments and the alcohol is taking control

The alcohol is taking Control

Over me,over me 

Where’s the Exit from this Club 

I couldn’t see, I couldn’t see 

Oh, I shouldn’t drink with my medication 

But this night was the perfect occasion 

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Hi, also im Folgenden seht ihr einen Text in Englisch. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr ihn korrigieren würdet. Es kann sein, dass ihr viel korrigieren müsst, das tut mir dann sehr leid.

Every day many students drive to school by bus. One ticket almost costs two euros. And when you have to take the bus both rides that are almost four euros. Every day! That's why I would like to comment on if school busses should be free? In my opinion they should be free but let me show you my point of view so that you understand my opinion.

On the one hand busses are already overcrowded and when bus rides become free, probably more kids drive with them instead of getting brought by their parents. And then maybe not everyone fits in the bus. That's another point which should be changed. There should be more busses for students. But that is to big to also talk about now. Possibly when school busses become free more kids drive with them instead of driving bike and then they get un- athletic. But it's very important that children be athletic for stay healthy. On the other hand when no one is brought specially it's ecofriendly and that's a big point why school busses should be free. A disadvantage of driving with the bus is that the school busses often are too late so students come too late to school and that's why some students get brought because they don't want to come too late. This argument speaks against that more children drive with bus, but it is possible to change that. Also it should be considered that students have to come to school independent of money. Some families don't have the money to pay the bus, but their children have to come to school anyway. And when they are dependent to the busses because they can't come to school otherwise, but there isn't enough money for the bus, they have a problem and that's another reason why I have the view that school busses should be free. Also for families who can pay the bus tickets, it's inadmissible to pay because there is compulsory schooling.

To sum it all up I think that school busses should be free because of all the arguments that have been counted. Of course the busses, the bus drivers and the gas have to been payed but the government could pay that. When the cost is too high, the tickets could be cheaper at least. But the existing prizes are too high to pay every day.

Danke für eure Hilfe!

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The advantages and disadvantages in an exhibition as a company for aircraft manufacturers

Einleitung: In this comment, I will discuss the pros and cons of presenting one’s own company at an exhibition.

 

Hauptteil:

+ In the first line, its good for the company, that they can quickly make contacts fastly, for example by exchanging the data when talking to customers.

- Possible drawbacks include that after a customer conversation everything must be keep up to date so that the customer does not disappear quickly. And for that you also need time.

+ Technically speaking, the team is better able to present they product. An example is, that they can show the Engines at the same time and Place.

– When planning to appear at such events, companies should not forget the heavy things, which needs to transported. All this will cost many energy and time. Such as all the engines are lightweigt for an airplane, but not for the employer. 

+ Its an easy way for the company, to make advertisment. For example telling them the benefits from the company, such as lightweight, sustainable etc. 

– At the same time, there is great competition and leads to competitive pressure, as most similar companies are also at such an event.

Schluss: In my opinion it doesn't really worth it to be at an exhibition, all the nerves, losses time and the pressure etc. I would think about that two times. Maybe only if I have enough time and the desire to do that.

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