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Hallo Leute,

wäre nett wenn einer mir meinem Text korrigieren könnte!🙃

Hi folks,

I went on a camping holiday in Bavaria with my family. As you probably know from my other posts, I don't really like going camping. But I had no choice but to go with my family! To be honest, I enjoyed it a bit! I'm sure you're wondering now, but seriously, it wasn't as bad as the last few times. I mean, of course the weather was mostly bad but otherwise I had a good time. And this time I wasn't alone - I met other teenagers and spent a lot of time with them! We talked about a lot of topics such as celebrities, football and au pairs. And my blog post today will mainly be about au pairs. To be more specific about male au pairs ... you heard it right! Most of you would surely say that there are only female au pairs! Because the teenagers I met on vacation didn't want to believe me either! But no, there really are male au pairs! Maybe not too many like female au pairs but there are some! The main purpose of this post is to make it clear to all of you that no profession has a label. It means that everyone can do anything, no matter if you are a male or a female! And another reason is because I want to draw attention to male au pairs! I want to encourage many guys among you to do something like this too.Last week I read a testimonial from a German boy named Timo. He had written about his time as an au pair in New Zealand. After graduating from high school, he decided to go to a distant country as an au pair. He too was initially unsure whether he would even have a chance as a boy. Nevertheless, he did not give up his hope and after a month a host family contacted him. He lived in Waikato with his host parents and host brother. His main job was to take care of their 4 year old son. In addition, he was also responsible for the household. He had to look after the pets and clean the whole house one day a week. All in all, he felt very much at home in New Zealand, his host brother became like his own brother and he had a lot of fun going to play parks with him, building caves, jumping on trampolines and teaching him to write and play the piano. He enjoyed this trip so much that he would be willing to do it all over again! So don't wait boys and girls! If you have such an opportunity I would definitely use it to have an unforgettable experience! Please let me know your opinion on this au pair topic! Thanks for reading and see you on another post! Good night:)

Englisch, Schule, Sprache, Grammatik

Gastfamilien Brief, ich mache 22/23 ein Auslandsjahr in den USA und würde gerne wissen ob ich Fehler in meinem Brief habe oder irgendwas neu schreiben sollte?

Dear future host family. First of all, I would like to thank you for reading my letter and giving me the opportunity to live in the USA for ten months and being part of your Family.

Now I would like to introduce myself. My name is xxx, xxx for short, and I am xx years old (turning xx in February)

I am living in xxx with my Family which consists of my mum, my sister, my brother and our dog Cooper. I love animals but unfortunately, I am allergic to cats and can’t live with them.

My parents are divorced. My dad lives about 15 minutes away from me with the car, and I also have a big sister, but she is old enough to live on her own. I have a really good relationship to my family, and we all get along pretty well. We try to spend as much time as possibly together, at Holidays, the weekends or on a walk with our dog.

I found some new friends in my new school, and I really like them, they are all extremely different with their personality and looks but at the end they are the kindest people that I have met so far, and I am so grateful for having them. I am already sad thinking about leaving them here in my home country, but they know that it’s my dream to live in the USA for 10 months and they are also excited for me.

I am attending the ninth schoolyear (Highschool). The focus of the school is technology and architecture. I need to take the train to get to the school and also the bus. My grades are good and its easy for me to learn new things, but I am also really clumsy, and I talk a lot and fast, but when I meet someone for the first time, I am really shy but as soon as they get to know me, I talk more.

I am spending my free time at the lake or going on bike rides. I am not doing any sports, but I would love to try something new in the USA, like Track & Field or Cheerleading. Some of my hobbies are swimming, biking, traveling and reading. I love to read. I try to read as many books as I can but it’s difficult because of all the schoolwork. I also love to bake and cook.

My Family and I are often in Italy especially in the summer holidays, my aunt loves to go there and most of the time we are going with her, we are all really close and help each other if we need anything.

I am helping my mum to keep the House clean. I am doing chores like vacuuming, doing the dishes or taking out the trash. We don’t have a chores plan (e.g., who does this chore on this day...) but if my mum asks me to do anything I will do it for her.

My dream is to become an Interior designer and work abroad, and after my graduation I would like to travel the world or be an Au pair in the USA, Australia or Canada.

I am hoping that I can bring you my culture, language and my Country closer by cooking you my favorite dish and teaching you some words in my mother tongue.

The reason why I want to go to the USA is not just to improve my English but to get to know the culture and eating habits and just to see if it really is like in the Movies.

der Rest ist in den Kommentaren.

Englisch, Brief, Sprache, USA, Ausland, Auslandsjahr, Gastfamilie, Grammatik

Liebe Leute, könnt ihr bitte meinen Text korrigieren?

Sehr geehrte liebe Helfer, könnt ihr bitte mein Text korrigieren bitte ?.

Bitte korrigiert die Rechtschreibung und Grammatik bitteee

Mein Text:

Textintepretation

Das Gedicht „Es ist an der Zeit“, das im Jahr 1978 erschienen ist von Hannes Wader und handelt von einem tief bewegenden Besuch eines Soldatenfriedhofs. Die Zielgruppe sind Erwachsene.

Die erste Strophe des Gedichts handelt von einer Champagne, in dem zwischen den Grabkreuzen Mohnblumen blühen und auf einem Kreuz eines Soldaten kein Name draufsteht, sondern nur sein Todesjahr. Weiterhin steht auf dem Kreuz sein Alter 19 drauf. In den mittleren Strophen geht es darum, dass dieser Soldat stellvertretend für alle Soldaten steht und sein Leben für andere geopfert hat. Weiterhin sagt der er, dass er kein Mädchen lieben konnte und er zu jung fürs Sterben war.

 Im Schluss des Textes wird erzählt, dass er bis zum Schluss nicht sein Feind erkennen konnte und er sein Leben, Kraft und Leben für den Krieg gegeben hat.

Der Text ist in Hochsprache geschrieben und es enthält komplizierte Sätze. Weiterhin verwendet er wenige Adjektive aber viele Verben, die den Text sehr anschaulich und dynamisch machen. Die Handlung setzt mit einer kurzen Einführung in die Situation ein. Er benutzt Verben wie blühen, malen und streichen und Adjektive wie verzweifelt, verbittert und verroht. Die Adverbien und Adjektive machen das Geschehen und die behandelte Figur lebendig. Die Handlung sieht auf den ersten Blick sehr kompliziert aus. Die

Geschichte wird aus der Perspektive des Dichters berichtet. Im Gedicht wird

Reimschema verwendet. Das Hauptmotiv des Gedichts wiederholt sich in folgenden

Zeilen 11 und 22. Das Besondere am Inhalt des Gedichts zeigt es sich darin,

dass es sich unten wiederholt.

Die Gefühle und Handlungswesen der Hauptfigur können von der Leserin / dem Leser gut nachvollgezogen werden, da in der Kriegszeit sehr viele junge Soldaten ihr Leben für andere geopfert haben.

Bitte korrigiert es bitte es ist sehr wichtig, danke im Voraus liebe Helfer.......

Deutsch, Schreiben, Hilfestellung, Text, Grammatik, Rechtschreibung, Textinterpretation

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