Sind meine Antworten auf Englisch korrekt formuliert?

Hallo zusammen, ich bin gerade dabei englisch zu üben. Es gibt eine Aufgabenstellung, in der ich Report für meinem Chef verfassen muss. Im Report müssen die Fragen (fett markiert) beantwortet werden.
Könnt Ihr mir bitte mitteilen, ob mein Text unten grammatikalisch korrekt formuliert ist? Wichtig: Damit es einen Lerneffekt hat, wäre ich dankbar, wenn nur die Fehler kontrolliert werden. Danke.

Below you will find all the answer of your questions.

how serious is the problem?The level of the problem is low. The problem is that the integrated navigation is freezing after a while of actively using. The problem can be solved by pressing the on/off button. Already entered data don’t get lost.

How many cars have this problem?25 cars are affected with this problem.

Should we tell the customers about the problem immediately? Yes, we have to tell the customers about the problem immediately.

How should we tell customers about the problem?My suggestion would be to contact all the customers directly by phone. We could let them know about the problem and offer them to visit at any time our garage for fixing that problem for free.  The fix of the problem doesn’t take long time, we just have to install the new firmware version which takes around 5 minutes.

How can we stop this problem happening again?My suggestion is to discuss this problem with our quality manager in a meeting. We should discuss how to improve our quality check of cars, before they have been sold.

Please let me know if you need more informations. Thank you.

Englisch, Schule, Formulierung, Grammatik, Report
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