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Englisch text?

Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

 

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

 

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

 

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Summary?

Wäre eventuell jemand so lieb und könnte sich jemand meine Zusammenfassung anschauen über die USA beziehungsweise deren Einwohner besonders wegen der Grammatik, also den Tenses und der Word order? Das wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Hier ist der Text dazu:

Meine Zusammenfassung:

The text is about the US and its immigration history. Today it is called a nation of immigrants. But thousands of years ago, only Native Americans lived there. The famous railroad that we know today was built by immigrants from Japan and China who came in the middle of the 19th century. A lot of German people came to the US but some of them left because they were discriminated. When some of them stayed, they started a new life mainly in Pennsylvania but later they decided to start a new life in Wisconsin, Michigan, Minnesota, North and South Dakota, Nebraska and Iowa. Ellis Island is known as a museum in New York today but in the past it was called "The Isle of Tears" because when immigrants wanted to go through, they had to prove their good health and they had to be able to write and read. When they could neither read nor write and didn‘t have a good health, they were sent back home. The people who wanted to immigrate into the US had a lot of problems since, in 1924, the US government passed "The Immigration Act“ and people from poorer countries weren‘t allowed to go to the US. Today, if people want to live in the US, they need a greencard which allows them to live and work in the US. People are given 50000 greencards all around the world each year, so there‘s a chance for everyone to immigrate to the US. 

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Englisch?

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob jemand wieder bitte über meinen Text drüber schauen könne. Wäre sehr lieb, danke!

,,I have been living in the US since Monday because I wanted to start a new life. I had really wanted to go to the US before I really arrived here. It‘s very fantastic here and the people are very friendly although I‘ve only been here for one week. When I arrived at the airport in Boston on the first day, I thought that I could never live in such a crowded and large nation. But then I met a woman and she cared for me. She has become my friend. She showed me the airport and different cities. At first, we went to California where I explored different cities, such as Los Angeles and San Francisco. I went to Disneyland there and it was so much fun. I also saw the Golden Gate Bridge with its fantastic view. I even saw real Native Americans on their reservations! They looked very friendly at me but I am also sorry for them that they have to live outside. I am very happy that I‘ve immigrated to the US. After exploring California, I went to New York where I have been living now since Wednesday. It‘s so cool here because when I came to New York, it was already late in the evening and because of the darkness, I went to Times Square since it is known for its bright lights. I went to a restaurant there where I ate the popular pizza slices and they tasted very delicious. After I had eaten, I was exploring Times Square while it was pretty dark and because of the bright lights of the advertisements, it was so gorgeous and I felt like it would be my home town so that I‘ve decided to stay here in New York forever. I live in an apartment in New York with my new friends as long as I don‘t have enough money to buy my own house. I work in the Empire State Building where I work as an official and I really like living here!“

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Englisch?

Könnte jemand mal über meinen Text vor allem wegen der Informationen und der Grammatik drüber schauen? Danke, wäre sehr lieb!

,,Lakota is a Native American tribe and they lived in America at first. Now they live in South and North Dakota. Lakota people are nomadic hunters and gatherers and they kill buffaloes to stay alive. The food is poor, so they need to kill buffaloes. They are strongly connected with the nature. They are a part of larger Sioux Nation which consists of Lakota, Dakota and Nakota. They wear headdresses with feathers and they have been a part of North American history for over 500 years. They have their own language and traditions such as Sun Dance. Sun Dance is a tradition that includes fasting, praying, and dancing to honor the sun. Another famous tradition is Vision Quest where people go on a journey in nature to seek personal revelation and spiritual growth. But they also have a strong tradition of storytelling, telling legends, and teaching from one generation to the next. Lakota is also very known for its history because in the 19th century, an argument between European settlers, the U.S. government and their tribe broke out and their tribe fought against them. Sitting Bull and Crazy Horse were the chiefs of their tribe and they protected them. They also fought against the U.S. government because they wanted to keep their land. They also did it but more arguments broke out after they had done it for the first time, so, after all, they lost their land nevertheless. Today they live on reservations.“

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wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Informationen zu ergänzen habt, dann gerne her damit! :)

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