Comment – die neusten Beiträge

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Ich versuche mich gerade an meinen Englischhausaufgaben - einen Comment über das Thema "criminal responsibility at the age of 10".

Dies ist mein Comment:

Write a comment - Criminal responsibility at the age of 10?

Nowadays many people think that the criminal responsibility should be set to the age of 10 in Germany. Is that right?

On one hand are children at the age of 10 too young for prison. They don’t know the consequences of what they are doing. Or did you know at this age which punishment you get for e.g. for shoplifting? But on the other hand it’s unfair that younger people have no criminal responsibility. I am convinced that we must set an example. The problem is that a lot of children are criminal because they know they can’t get punished. So I think they have to learn to bear responsibility earlier because they shouldn’t get into trouble. The next point I want to mention is if they know what is allowed to do and which punishment they will get for which kind of crime, they will be scared off. So the risk that they will get criminal in the future could be minimised. But what is also to do? In my point of view punishment by oneself can’t help alone. The children have to be taught this in school and by their parents.

I come to the conclusion that this law would help but we have to do more than just changing a law. Also I think that the age of criminal responsibility should be set to the age of 12 because in my opinion the age of 10 is too young.

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Englisch, comment

Comment über Video games, bitte Kontrolle!

Hallo Leute, das Niveau ist 10. Klasse Gym. Ist für eine Schulaufgabe.

Die Frage: Write a comment in 150 words. Should video games be forbidden?

Hier mein comment:

It has often been said that video games have bad influence on people who play them. For example, it has often been argued, that Kids in school are less concentrated if they are playing computer games. In the following I would like to point out, should video games be forbidden?

In my opinion video games shouldn´t be forbidden. This is simply, because video games are not the source of these problems. It´s true, that if you let your child play video games the whole day, it has huge negative effects on it, for example lacks in social connections. But this is the fault of the parents. Kids shouldnt be allowed to play the whole day, this completely seperates them from the reality, but it´s ok if they play here and then.

Another reason why video games should be allowed, because it´s fun playing them. If you play a video game, you can do things that you won´t ever be able to do in real, for example flying around without nothing but your body. Every game is a different adventure, that you can share with friends. Every different person can find something that he likes, no one comes short, even business-man can find games that fit for them.

So to sum up, video games are a nice experience. The key is not overdoing it. Or you will end up living in a virtual world.

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Wie findet ihr es? Bitte alles verbessern was geht :). Danke.

Videospiele, Englisch, Gymnasium, Kontrolle, comment, Schulaufgabe

Ein Comment auf Englisch schreiben

Hallo, ich soll in Englisch mein erstes Comment schreiben. Es wäre supernett, wenn ihr euch es mal durchlesen könntet. Über Verbesserungsvorschläge( also Formulierung oder Rechtschreibung oder auch noch einen Pro/contra Punkt den ihr wichtig findet oder etwas anderes) würde ich mich sehr freuen ;) Das Thema das wir vorgeschrieben bekommen haben war: Rules in our everyday life

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Rules are a very important thing in our life. I believe it´s very important to discuss this topic. For everything in our life we have rules, for example speed limits or curfews. But, are we too obsessed with safety in our everyday life? Or have we got too few rules?

Rules for speed limits for instance are very important. If there are not rules for that, life will change. Everything will be very dangerous. Everybody would drive as fast as they want and there would be more accidents.
Another pro is, that without rules you will early be dead, there will be too much risk in our everyday life.
But there does not only exists pros, on the other hand there are also cons. Without the rules we will have more freedom. We would have much more fun with fever rules.
Secondly there are too much rules for teenager. It is tempting to break them and the teenager can not have so much fun as without rules, because they are not allowed to stay all the night long at partys or to go late in the cinema.

To my mind, most of the rules are very important in our everyday life and we have not got too few rules and are not obsessed with safety.

Englisch, regeln, Erörterung, comment

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