könnt ihr mein Comment in english bewerten?
wir sollten ein comment über dieses vid https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fiu9GSOmt8E schreiben aber ich bin mir nicht wirklich sicher was ich noch dazu schreiben soll
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Plastics
In the video Plastics: Last Week Tonight with John Oliver (HBO) John Oliver explains how plastics are harming the planet, why recycling isn’t the solution, and why fixing the problem will be up to not just consumers, but corporations and policymakers.
Only less than nine percent of plastic that is being made gets recycled. That isn’t the because people don’t recycle its just that most things we think are recyclable aren’t That means the plastic ends up as landfill, gets burned or ends up in the ocean. Even worse is that companies that sell these plastics are making adds that push this idea that we (The Consumers) are to blame.
I agree with everything John Oliver has said. I think that the root of the problem are really the corporations because for them maximizing profit is everything. They know what they are doing is harming many people but still they procced to do it. In any case, I think the solution is to strictly ban single-use plastic packaging and introduce EPR laws to every country, but this sadly seems unrealistic. Even if we had the ban we still have to deal with the already existing plastic waste
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Ich finds gut. Du kannst das that manchmal ersetzen und an einigen Stellen smoothere Übergänge machen
That isn’t the because people don’t recycle its just that most things we think are recyclable aren’t That means the plastic ends up as landfill, gets burned or ends up in the ocean
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Contrary to the popular belief, most of our wast-products can't be decomposed, which leads to a critical plastic pollution in our environment and threatenes other animals. Besides the environmental damages, the burning of plastic has a huge impact on the climate change.
I agree with everything John Oliver has said. I think that the root of the problem are really the corporations because for them maximizing profit is everything.
Ich würde statt the root of the Problem the cause of the Problem und dann etwas eleganter "The main cause of the plastic pollution is our capitalistic System, which is based on profit and greed.
but this sadly seems unrealistic. Even
Du kannst da noch hinzufügen "since an alternative hasn't been found yet."
Even if we had the ban we still have to deal with the already existing plastic waste
We would have to deal
Mir ist grade noch ein schlusszitat eingefallen:
In times like these, plastic dominates the world market and we have to take measurements against it to protect ourselves and our planet.
Hehe ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen :) ich wünsche dir noch einen schönen Abend
