Writing a Leaflet?
Hallo!
Wie findet ihr diesen Leaflet? Folgende Punkte müssen beantwortet werden:
- give information about the centre
- discuss why being there is beneficial for the refugees
- suggest events to bring the community closer together
Use your time! – Everybody is welcome! (Hauptüberschrift)
Have you ever thought about joining the local youth centre Yolo? Wouldn’t you like to make new friends and have fun while learning new skills? If yes, then we have an exciting opportunity for you.
What is the Yolo local youth centre?
Yolo is a place where young people come together to learn and build a sense of community. We provide various activities that can help you improve your German and social skills, as well as your computer skills. This can ultimately increase your chances of finding a job.
Why Yolo is the best!
Learning German is an essential skill for refugees and migrants living in Germany. Not only in your job, also when you ask for advice. Yolo provides a supportive environment for young refugees to learn and practice German, while also meeting and interacting with other young people in their community.
But guess what: That is not all. The world also gets more and more modern. You learn everything you need to know about computers nowadays at this centre.
Events to bring the community closer together!
At Yolo, we organize several social events every week to bring our community closer together. These events include cultural festivals, sports tournaments, and even swimming trips. One of our most popular events is the weekly football match on Saturdays. It's a great way to get active and have fun with other teenagers.
So what are you waiting for? Join us today by writing to youthcentreyolo@gmail.com .
And if you are feeling overwhelmed, do not hesitate to contact our support.
See you soon!
1 Antwort
Vom Fragesteller als hilfreich ausgezeichnet
Erstmal sehr gut, gibt so ziemlich garantiert ne gute Note, ich habe nur kleine Anmerkungen.
Not only in your job, also when you ask for advice.
Klingt etwas komisch. Normalerweise schriebt man "Not only" in verbindung mit ", but also", also vielleicht ein but dazu.
You learn everything you need to know about computers nowadays at this centre.
Ich finde es klingt besser wenn man "at this centre" nach vorne schiebt.