English paragraf peel?
Würde dieser Text in english einem Peel paragraf entsprechen ( 10 Schulstufe )
Should young people take Relationship advice from adults?
No, I stand against that, not because I think the older generation doesn’t know anything about love or Relationships but because this is a new era.
The world has changed in a lot of ways positively and negatively, teenagers now tend to start and end relationships over their phone, because its way easier.
Nowadays if someone knows your name, it only takes a couple of second to find Info’s about you. Like where you go to school or what your social media accounts are. And if teenagers find somebody attractive, they most likely ask for their snap or Insta, not their Phone number. People can also have way easier long-distance relationships over the Phone, no more weeks of waiting just to send a letter to a friend now it only takes a click.
I think in some ways the older Generation can still give tips, like on dates and things that haven’t changed but sumarised I think youre better of talking to your teenage friends : ).
Vielen Dank
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Hallo,
Should young people take Relationship (RS = Rechtschreibung) advice from adults?
No, I stand against that (Gegen wen oder was?), not because I think the older generation doesn’t know anything about love or Relationships (RS) but because this is a new era.
The world has changed in a lot of (Ich ziehe many vor.) ways (Komma oder die Adverbien anders positionieren.) positively and negatively (Semikolon oder neuer Satz) teenagers now tend to start and end relationships over their phone (Ich würde hier den Plural bevorzugen.), because its (Grammtik; Wortart) way (Slang) easier.
Nowadays if someone knows your name, it only takes a couple of second (Grammatik) to find Info’s (RS; Grammatik) about you. Like (umgangssprachlich) where you go to school or what your social media accounts are. (kein vollständiger Satz) And (kein Satzanfang) if teenagers find somebody attractive, they most likely ask for their snap or Insta, not their Phone (RS) number. People can also have way (Slang; Grammatik) easier long-distance relationships over the Phone (RS) (Semikolon oder neuer Satz) no more weeks of waiting just to send a letter to a friend now (---) only takes a click.
I think in some ways the older Generation (RS) can still give tips, like (Wort) on dates and things that haven’t changed [(neuer Satz) but sumarised (RS) I think youre (RS, Grammatik) beter (RS) of (RS, Präposition) talking to your teenage friends (---).
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
:-) AstridDerPu
Ich hab gar kein google Übersetzer benutzt war der text so schlecht 🥴
Danke für die Tips habe gleich ne Schularbeit in 2 Stunden 🥴 in english