hallo, ist meine Mediation gut?

Hello everyone!

A short while ago I found a letter in a library book. The letter is about the immigration of Albrecht and his brother Heinrich. They had to leave their country because there wasnt enough work. Their journey to Le Harve was horrible because there were lots of people on the ship and it took two weeks. Abrecht packed a lot of food with because he was warned. During the voyage on the ship, Heinrich became ill and he had to take care of him for two weeks. When they arrived, Albrecht got ill too and had to stay in the hospital on Ellis Island.

After he got better, he went to Heinrich , who has already found a room ,and lived with him. They both were happy to be in New York. Albrecht found a work in a hotel and Heinrich wanted to work on a building site

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Answer 1

[AstridDerPu]

Hallo,

Hello everyone!

A short while ago I found a letter in a library book. The letter is about the immigration of Albrecht and his brother Heinrich (Immigration wohin?). They had to leave their country because there wasnt (RS= Rechtschreibung) enough work (Wo war nicht genug Arbeit?). Their journey to Le Harve (RS) was horrible because there were lots of people on the ship (Verständnisfehler! Die vielen Leute waren nicht auf der 2wöchigen Reise nach Le Havre, sondern auf der 2wöchigen Schiffsreise nach New York!) and it took two weeks. Abrecht packed a lot of food with (Ausdruck) because he was warned (Wovor wurde er gewarnt?). During the voyage on the ship, Heinrich became ill and he (Albrecht, mit he wäre nämlich der kranke Heinrich gemeint.) had to take care of him for two weeks. When they arrived (Wo kamen sie an?), Albrecht got ill too and had to stay in (---) hospital on Ellis Island.

After he got better, he went to Heinrich, who has (Grammatik) already found a room, and lived with him. They both were happy to be in New York. Albrecht found a work (Wortfehler) in a hotel and Heinrich wanted to work on a building site (Punkt)

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu