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My Christmas was very nice. I liked it so much! In the beginning, we sang all the time. My mum sings a lot when it's Christmas. My dad doesn't celebrate Christmas because he is muslim, but he comes with us to church and he's always very happy and makes presents.
It's an african church, so we must drive a very long time because I live in a small village and the church is in a big town.
We wear very beautiful clothes with many colours. In the car when we went back, we sang all the songs from the church because it's very fun. After the church, I played piano and we opened the presents.
I got 5 books, winter clothes, a Chess board, a 3D Puzzle from Disney and Disney Figures and something for my desk.
My present for my parents was a newspaper. I wrote the newspaper alone and it's about our family and our year 2021.
And I made a joke: First gave I my parents only 1€. They asked: "Why do you give us 1€?" I said nothing and then I made a little newspaper shop. I shouted: "One newspaper for 1€!" They understood and bought the newspaper from me. This was my real present (not the 1€). My parents loved the newspaper.
My brother got a game, clothes, an alarm clock that makes sunlight when you wake up and a book.
We had a lot of time to play with the new things and to read the new books. We listened to music and my mum was singing all the time.
Afterwards we ate the dinner. It was Fufu with goat. But I don't eat meat, it was only Fufu for me. It was in a peanut soup that was very spicy. It was great and I loved it.
We ate chocolate, too.
The next days, we went to the neighbours and we rang the doorbell. We had presents and food for them because they are our friends. I had a present for my cat, too. It was a toy what I made.

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Ich will das meinem Englischlehrer schicken, es ist freiwillig aber es macht mir voll Spaß solche Texte zu schreiben. Ich will nur nicht sooo viele Fehler haben deswegen frage ich hier. 😅 Dankeee wenn ihr ein paar Fehler sagt! 💙

My christmas was very good. I liked it so much! On the beginning, we sang always. My mum sings very much when it's christmas. My dad don't make christmas because he is muslim, but he comes with us to the church and he's always very happy and makes presents. It's a african church, so we must drive a very long time because I live in a small village and the church is in a big town. We wear very beautiful clothes with many colours. In the car when we went back, we sang all the songs from the church because it's very fun. After the church, I played piano and we opened the presents. I got 5 books, winter clothes, a Chess board, a 3D Puzzle from Disney and Disney Figures and something for my desk. My present for my parents was a newspaper. I wrote the newspaper alone and it's about our family and our year 2021. And I made a joke: First gave I my parents only 1€. They asked: "Why do you give us 1€?" I said nothing and then I made a little newspaper shop. I shouted: "One newspaper for 1€!" They understood and buyed the newspaper from me. This was my real present (not the 1€). My parents loved the newspaper. My brother got a game, clothes, a alarm clock what makes sunlight when you wake up and a book. We had a lot of time to play with the new things and read the new books. We listened to music and my mum was singing all the time. After, we ate the dinner. It was Fufu with goat. But I don't eat meat, it was only Fufu for me. It was in a peanut soup that was very sharp. It was great and I loved it. We ate chocolate, too. The next days, we went to the neighbars and we rang the door. We had presents and food for them because they are our friends. I had a present for my cat, too. It was a toy what I made.

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Spürt ihr noch die "Magie" an Weihnachten und/oder Silvester?

Grüß Gott liebe Community! :-)

Diese Frage klingt vielleicht etwas verwirrend, daher möchte ich auch genau erleutern, was ich meine.

Früher (= Ja, auch im Erwachsenenalter.) habe ich im Dezember immer eine sehr große Vorfreude auf die Weihnachtsfeiertage, aber auch auf das Neue Jahr verspürt. Alles wirkte tatsächlich sehr "fröhlich", als wäre ein "Zauber" in der Luft.

Das "Neujahr" war immer ein Gefühl von "Erleichterung" und man hat förmlich gespürt, wie man die Möglichkeit hat etwas besser zu machen. Mittlerweile ist dies bei mir nicht mehr der Fall. Ich empfinde überhaupt keine Freude mehr an Weihnachten oder an Silvester und es fehlt dieses Gefühl von "Besonderheit" in der Luft.

Versteht ihr was ich meine bzw. könnt ihr dies nachvollziehen?

Klar, es kann und wird selbstverständlich etwas damit zu tun haben, das man nicht mehr ist Kind oder das wir mittlerweile schon seit zwei Jahren in einer Pandemie feststecken, aber ich persönlich denke nicht das es normal ist, wenn genau die Dinge die einem immer eine Freude bereitet haben plötzlich überhaupt keinen Spaß mehr machen? Was denkt ihr?

Ich wünsche euch trotzdem allen einen Guten Rutsch ins neue Jahr! Vielleicht bringt 2022 tatsächlich etwas positives mit sich? :-)

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