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Wie findet ihr diesen Argumentative Essay, ich hab heute die Klassenarbeit zurückbekommen und hab eine 4 bekommen. (9.Klasse)

Die Aufgabe war folgende: Schreibe einen Argumentative Essay über das Thema: "Doing an exchange year in Australia is a great idea". Wir mussten mindestens 3 Argumente dafür, und 3 dagegen finden.

Australia, the continent where the most dangerous animals are living, is very interesting for students who want to do an exchange year in a country where people speak English. The following essay will show argument sfor, and against doing an exchange year in Australia.

At the beginning, we will look at the arguments against the exchange year.

First, in Australia there are lots of dangerous animals, for example snakes, spiders, and others, they can kill you with just a bite, and it could be hard to get the medicin for that.

Furthermore, you could argue you cant visit your family very often, the distance between Australia and Germany is really big, and the tickets for planes are really expensive.

The last argument against the exchange year, is that it might be hard for you to understand the Australian people talking, because of their hard accent.

Lets move on to the arguments for doing an exchange year in Australia.

Firstly, Australia offers a lot when it comes to nature, on the one day you could see a shark swimming in the sea, and on the other, you could be in the desert.

Another argument for doing the exchange year is, that you can learn a lot about other cultures, for example the Aboriginals. You could learn how they lived in the Outback, or about the stolen generations.

Last but not least, you could argue that you would learn the language, if you are doing an exchange year in Australia, because you would speak English all day long.

In my opinion, an exchange year to Australia is a great way to learn English, and a lot about the aboriginals and how the lived there

Guten Mittag,

Wir schreiben in ungefähr 1 Woche in Englisch eine Arbeit. Nun ist das Problem, dass mein Englisch sehr schlecht ist und diese Arbeit ein Listening und ein Text mit Gapped summary beinhaltet.

Hat jemand Gute Ratschläge wie ich das Listening üben könnte und kennt Websiten dafür? (Text hören und danach z.B. einen Lückentext ausfüllen : Niveau: Klasse 12)

Mein Wortschatz und mein Leseverständnis sind ebenso schlecht, bei einem Gapped Summary hatte ich bis jetzt immer maximal 2 Lücken richtig. Wie übe ich das am besten in unter 7 Tagen?

(Websiten und generell Tipps wären großartig)

viel Dank im Voraus

Guten Tag, wollte nur einmal nachfragen, ob ich da an der Summary noch was verbessern könnte. Vielen Dank im Voraus

Hier ist der Text:

Das ist die Summary:

The extract from the book „The Epic City“ written by Kushanava Chaudhury published in 2017 is about the authors childhood in New Jersey and his family. 

The parents of Chaudhury already moved twice to America and moved twice back to India. They are both scientists, who cannot decide, between their hometown and career opportunities abroad. 

As his father is forty years old, he quits his job at a government research institute in Calcutta for better career opportunities in Highland Park, New Jersey. However the job opportunities, turn out to be weaker, so Choudhury‘s father has to take on work in fields, which he hates. 

Although they do not see themselves as immigrants and prepare sometimes to go somewhere else, they stay in New Jersey and Chaudhurry has a great childhood in New Jersey. After Choudhurry‘s senior year he is accepted at the Princeton University. As a result, his parents are really excited, because it is one of the best universities in the USA and the university determines a lot in life. Although Chaudhurry acknowledges, that it is one of the greatest universities, its difficult for him to decide. He is unsure, whether he should go to Princeton or to visit his home town for a year. Chaudhurry decides to visit his hometown, but his parents do not allow him to take a year off, because it is well know university and a great opportunity for Chaudhury. As a result, he studys at Princeton and then goes to Calcutta. 

Robert: I watched a good film yesterday.

Heißt es dann nicht "Robert said that he has watched a good film the day before"?

"Trust the overthinker who tells you they love you. They have, most assuredly, thought of every reason not to."

Bitte keine pure Übersetzung. Englisch kann ich selbst.

Eure Interpretation bitte.

Würde dieser Text in english einem Peel paragraf entsprechen ( 10 Schulstufe )

Should young people take Relationship advice from adults?

No, I stand against that, not because I think the older generation doesn’t know anything about love or Relationships but because this is a new era.

The world has changed in a lot of ways positively and negatively, teenagers now tend to start and end relationships over their phone, because its way easier.

Nowadays if someone knows your name, it only takes a couple of second to find Info’s about you. Like where you go to school or what your social media accounts are. And if teenagers find somebody attractive, they most likely ask for their snap or Insta, not their Phone number. People can also have way easier long-distance relationships over the Phone, no more weeks of waiting just to send a letter to a friend now it only takes a click.

I think in some ways the older Generation can still give tips, like on dates and things that haven’t changed but sumarised I think youre better of talking to your teenage friends : ).

Vielen Dank

Habe leider nicht die Zeit es auszutippen.

LG

Soweit ich weiß 300 Wörter,bin mir aber nicht sicher

LG

Bitte was formales, was man in einer Summary benutzen könnte.

LG

Hallo könnt ihr hier mal überschauen und evtl die Sätze korrigieren?

liebe Grüße

If you had lived at that time you wouldn’t kneew (not, to know) how to drive a car.

If you had lived in those days you wouldn’t heard (not, to hear) television.

If you had lived in this country at that time then you will spoke (to speak) what we would now call old-fashioned English.

If you had lived in the south of the country you would been (to be) either very rich or very poor.

If you had lived in the north of the country you would disagreed (to disagree) with one important aspect of southern life.

If you had lived at that time then you would had decided (to have to decide) whether to support the men in blue or the men in grey.

If you had lived in the north of this country you would prepared (to be prepared) to die for man's freedom.

If you had lived in that century you would saw (to see) battles.

Hey, könnt ihr die Sätze kontrollieren und ggf korrigieren? Wäre echt nett:)

liebe Grüße

If he had known his enemies were plotting to kill him he wouldn’t goes to Dallas. (not go to Dallas

If he had known his marriage to Diana would be an unhappy one he wouldn’t married her. (not marry her)

If he had known an armed man was waiting for him he wouldn’t leaved the hotel.(not leave the hotel)

If the people of Ireland had known the potato crop was going to fail in 1845 they sowed other crops.(sow other crops)

Muss in eine Summary Schlussteil oder nicht ? Und bei einem Comment wo soll ich meinen Standpunkt nenne im Hauptteil oder Schluss

Hallo, könnt ihr die Sätze kontrollieren und ggf. korrigieren? Wäre sehr nett:)

Liebe Grüße

If the patient has a pain in her tummy I will ask about her diet.

If the patient has a pain in her tummy I would ask about her diet.

If the patient had a pain in her tummy I would have ask about her diet.

Moin,

Ich weiß ,,he/ she/ it das s muss mit“. Aber auch wenn es eventuell einfach ist kapier ich es nicht. Sagt man: the House has oder have a beautiful garden“ ? Benutzt man bei Dingen wie das Auto, der Hund und so has oder have?

Ich hab diese Mediation geschrieben und wollte fragen, wie ich den verbessern könnte oder ob das so passt:

Hello Stefan,

since you've told me you're looking for a holiday job in London, I've been searching for different work options and came across a quite popular restaurant called "Herman ze German". Firsty, you need to know what the owner's idea of opening this restaurant was and how it came to this restaurant.

As the owners, Falak Shahi and Florian, are of the opinion that German sausages aren't comparable to English ones, their friends have taken the intiative to bring them original sausages made in German. So the couple decided to sell their sausages in local pups so called "sausageweeks". As an upgrade they started to sell their sausages on a music festival which has contributed to high success. In 2010 they opened their first restaurant located in London. Maybe you're wondering why this restaurant did blow up and has attracted so much attention.This is because Germany is very popular in UK and Berlin is seen as a trendy city. But what also plays a big role is German and English people raising awarness of how close we actually are and not as different as they thought to be. Falakshahi and Florian are also playing with cliches and have decorated their restaurants full of cliches. That seems to many clients pretty hilarious and cool. The last thing I want to address is their future objectives. They are dreaming that two or three new restaurants will open within a year and sausages will be offered with their own logo in English grocery stores. I hope this text could inspire you a little on your job search and was interesting to read.

Take care!

You are absolutely shredded yet there is another competion on the horizon. […]

And so because he is in a calorie defecit, he has hardly any energy. But yet he has to train. […]

He is eating more food than last time but yet only gets 200 grams of rice.

“Yet“ höre ich bei gewissen Personen sehr häufig, bei anderen kaum.
Ist es ein (standardsprachliches) Synonym für but?
Heißt “But yet“ als Kombination dennoch und ist es umgangssprachlich?

He has done a powerlifting competition of which he won.

Warum nicht einfach „which“ und weshalb „has done“ anstatt „did“?

Beides bedeutet ja ihr beziehungsweise ihre

Jetzt wann benutzt man grammatikalisch richtig their und wann her.

ich hab Lückentext und das soll jetzt eins von beiden eingesetzt werden:

this became … habit and she began inviting friends to join.

their oder her

könnt ihr mir bitte erklären wann man was benutzt

Danke

macht man wenn man beides schreiben muss bei der analysis eine komplette Einleitung, obwohl man diese in der Summary schon gemacht hat? So mit Autor, erscheinungsdatum, Inhalt? Da wiederholt man sich doch total. Schreibe in dreißig Minuten schon Klausur Hilfe

Ich brauche im Englisch LK jedes mal eine Stunde für die Summary, da ich vieles nicht ganz verstehe oder nicht genau weiß, was in meine Summary kommt. Hat jemand Tipps für mich, damit ich nicht mehr so lange brauch?