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Ich hab ein One-Way Ticket gebucht, aber da ist ein Rückflugdatum mit dabei.

Ich werde natürlich an dem Tag nicht zurück fliegen. Muss ich dann Strafe bezahlen?

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Was bedeutet das?

Gibt es eigentlich ein Synonym dafür? Ich finde there are /is klingt voll langweilig . Geht there occur vllt.? Oder welche könnt ihr vorschlagen?

Würdet ihr was an meinem Text verbessern?

Aufgabe: Describe the diagram on page 53.

Das Diagramm + Hilfen:

Meine Beschreibung: The following chart is a line graph and was published by the "California Department of Finance, U.S. Census Burreau". The line graph is about the population of California and shows in percent the future population/cultural shift in the years 2010 to 2060 with the four groups: Latino, White, Asian and Black.

Most people are white, 40 percent in 2010, but the number of whites drops steadily. 33 percent in 2030 and 29.7 percent in 2060. The next largest group, with slightly fewer people, are Latinos, 38 percent in 2010, but the number of Latinos goes up steadily. 44 percent in 2030 and 48 percent in 2060. A minority of the population is Asian in 2010 at 12 percent, but the number will doesnt change at around 13.4 percent until 2060. The biggest minority of the population is Black in 2010 at 3 percent, but the number will doesnt change at around 4,3 percent until 2060.

Hello everyone!

A short while ago I found a letter in a library book. The letter is about the immigration of Albrecht and his brother Heinrich. They had to leave their country because there wasnt enough work. Their journey to Le Harve was horrible because there were lots of people on the ship and it took two weeks. Abrecht packed a lot of food with because he was warned. During the voyage on the ship, Heinrich became ill and he had to take care of him for two weeks. When they arrived, Albrecht got ill too and had to stay in the hospital on Ellis Island.

After he got better, he went to Heinrich , who has already found a room ,and lived with him. They both were happy to be in New York. Albrecht found a work in a hotel and Heinrich wanted to work on a building site

Hier der Original Text

MfG

Hallo,

es ist wirklich keine Hausaufgabe. Ich will nur sehen wie so ne Mediation ist und aussieht.

MfG

Use linking words to connect your sentences within each paragraph.

In the text below, linking words are missing. Fill in the blanks with appropriate linkers from the box.

all in all • but • first of all • for example • for one thing • perhaps • possibly

Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone. …, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, …, you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door. …, outside the house it was even worse. …, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. … there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. …, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. …, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

Ich habe das so gemacht, aber bin mir da nicht so sicher:

Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone.  First of all, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, possibly , you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door.  But outside the house it was even worse. For example, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. Perhaps, there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. For one thing, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. All in all, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

1. She asked what their main food in winter was

Oder

2. She asked what their main food was in winter

Ich schreibe morgen eine Englischklausur mit den Themen Summary und Comment, da ich in letzter Zeit aufgrund von Krankheit sehr oft im Unterricht gefehlt habe, habe ich daher nicht so viel Lernstoff mitbekommen. Ich habe mich gerade eben an einen Text ran gemacht und eine Summary dazu geschrieben. Ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn jemand kurz drüber gucken könnte, um mir Feedback zu geben (einen Comment schreibe ich gleich noch, den werde ich nachher höchstwahrscheinlich ebenefalls hochladen).

Der original Text:

Meine Summary:

The article "The Dark Solitude of a Lockdown", published on September 10,2020 from Jenny Stevens deals with the reasons why the author moves into an own apartment but notice during the Lockdown, that she want to live in a flat.

In the beginning of the article, the author weites about that she lived for the past eight months at her friends apartment but decides to move into her own because of mental health. At first she enjoys the time and the place for her own, even when there are some quiet and boring days. During the Lockdown her mind changes although she stays in contact with her friends, but after some time she feeled lonely and getting jealous of her friends who are in a flat together. At this Point she decides, that she wants to live in a flat in the future. In the end of the text a friend ask her to move into his flat.

In a nutshell, she ist going to move into the flat with her friend and some others.

(175 Wörter)

Vielen Dank an jeden !!

Ich glaube meins wäre ''the dildo of consequences often arrives unlubed''

Wie findet ihr diesen Argumentative Essay, ich hab heute die Klassenarbeit zurückbekommen und hab eine 4 bekommen. (9.Klasse)

Die Aufgabe war folgende: Schreibe einen Argumentative Essay über das Thema: "Doing an exchange year in Australia is a great idea". Wir mussten mindestens 3 Argumente dafür, und 3 dagegen finden.

Australia, the continent where the most dangerous animals are living, is very interesting for students who want to do an exchange year in a country where people speak English. The following essay will show argument sfor, and against doing an exchange year in Australia.

At the beginning, we will look at the arguments against the exchange year.

First, in Australia there are lots of dangerous animals, for example snakes, spiders, and others, they can kill you with just a bite, and it could be hard to get the medicin for that.

Furthermore, you could argue you cant visit your family very often, the distance between Australia and Germany is really big, and the tickets for planes are really expensive.

The last argument against the exchange year, is that it might be hard for you to understand the Australian people talking, because of their hard accent.

Lets move on to the arguments for doing an exchange year in Australia.

Firstly, Australia offers a lot when it comes to nature, on the one day you could see a shark swimming in the sea, and on the other, you could be in the desert.

Another argument for doing the exchange year is, that you can learn a lot about other cultures, for example the Aboriginals. You could learn how they lived in the Outback, or about the stolen generations.

Last but not least, you could argue that you would learn the language, if you are doing an exchange year in Australia, because you would speak English all day long.

In my opinion, an exchange year to Australia is a great way to learn English, and a lot about the aboriginals and how the lived there

Guten Mittag,

Wir schreiben in ungefähr 1 Woche in Englisch eine Arbeit. Nun ist das Problem, dass mein Englisch sehr schlecht ist und diese Arbeit ein Listening und ein Text mit Gapped summary beinhaltet.

Hat jemand Gute Ratschläge wie ich das Listening üben könnte und kennt Websiten dafür? (Text hören und danach z.B. einen Lückentext ausfüllen : Niveau: Klasse 12)

Mein Wortschatz und mein Leseverständnis sind ebenso schlecht, bei einem Gapped Summary hatte ich bis jetzt immer maximal 2 Lücken richtig. Wie übe ich das am besten in unter 7 Tagen?

(Websiten und generell Tipps wären großartig)

viel Dank im Voraus

Guten Tag, wollte nur einmal nachfragen, ob ich da an der Summary noch was verbessern könnte. Vielen Dank im Voraus

Hier ist der Text:

Das ist die Summary:

The extract from the book „The Epic City“ written by Kushanava Chaudhury published in 2017 is about the authors childhood in New Jersey and his family. 

The parents of Chaudhury already moved twice to America and moved twice back to India. They are both scientists, who cannot decide, between their hometown and career opportunities abroad. 

As his father is forty years old, he quits his job at a government research institute in Calcutta for better career opportunities in Highland Park, New Jersey. However the job opportunities, turn out to be weaker, so Choudhury‘s father has to take on work in fields, which he hates. 

Although they do not see themselves as immigrants and prepare sometimes to go somewhere else, they stay in New Jersey and Chaudhurry has a great childhood in New Jersey. After Choudhurry‘s senior year he is accepted at the Princeton University. As a result, his parents are really excited, because it is one of the best universities in the USA and the university determines a lot in life. Although Chaudhurry acknowledges, that it is one of the greatest universities, its difficult for him to decide. He is unsure, whether he should go to Princeton or to visit his home town for a year. Chaudhurry decides to visit his hometown, but his parents do not allow him to take a year off, because it is well know university and a great opportunity for Chaudhury. As a result, he studys at Princeton and then goes to Calcutta. 

Hallo,

sollte ich bei einer Summary im Englischen lieber schreiben:

"The three just stare at each other.„ / "The three of them just stare at each other. "

Es handelt sich ja schließlich um Personen…

Danke!

Robert: I watched a good film yesterday.

Heißt es dann nicht "Robert said that he has watched a good film the day before"?

"Trust the overthinker who tells you they love you. They have, most assuredly, thought of every reason not to."

Bitte keine pure Übersetzung. Englisch kann ich selbst.

Eure Interpretation bitte.

Habe leider nicht die Zeit es auszutippen.

LG

Soweit ich weiß 300 Wörter,bin mir aber nicht sicher

LG

Bitte was formales, was man in einer Summary benutzen könnte.

LG

Hallo könnt ihr hier mal überschauen und evtl die Sätze korrigieren?

liebe Grüße

If you had lived at that time you wouldn’t kneew (not, to know) how to drive a car.

If you had lived in those days you wouldn’t heard (not, to hear) television.

If you had lived in this country at that time then you will spoke (to speak) what we would now call old-fashioned English.

If you had lived in the south of the country you would been (to be) either very rich or very poor.

If you had lived in the north of the country you would disagreed (to disagree) with one important aspect of southern life.

If you had lived at that time then you would had decided (to have to decide) whether to support the men in blue or the men in grey.

If you had lived in the north of this country you would prepared (to be prepared) to die for man's freedom.

If you had lived in that century you would saw (to see) battles.

Hey, könnt ihr die Sätze kontrollieren und ggf korrigieren? Wäre echt nett:)

liebe Grüße

If he had known his enemies were plotting to kill him he wouldn’t goes to Dallas. (not go to Dallas

If he had known his marriage to Diana would be an unhappy one he wouldn’t married her. (not marry her)

If he had known an armed man was waiting for him he wouldn’t leaved the hotel.(not leave the hotel)

If the people of Ireland had known the potato crop was going to fail in 1845 they sowed other crops.(sow other crops)