Hallo Leute,

Und zwar hab ich zu dem Text Mr. Mumsford eine Summary geschrieben und wollte euch fragen ob ihr irgendwelche inhaltlichen oder rechtschreiblichen Fehler etc. Erkennen könnt. Habt ihr Tipps wie man die summary besser machen kann? Wenn ja dann lasst es mich gerne wissen! Danke im vorhinaus :)

Hallo,

ich schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit und das Thema sind Zusammenfassungen.

Könntet ihr mir sagen, was ich an meiner Summary verbessern könnte? Ich bin mir nämlich nicht sicher, ob sie so gut ist.

Seid bitte ehrlich, wenn sie grottenschlecht ist, dann sagt mir das bitte!

Ich bin in der 8. Klasse. Meine Summary ist zum Song „I hate California“

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Bezogen auf diesen Text

"What do you think of the author's opinion how consumers (should) behave?Give reasons for your opinion."

Wir sollen die Textstelle „get across the point to firms in a transparent way…” im folgenden Abschnitt eines Textes die gleiche Bedeutung finden (im Englischunterricht):

The changes they made meant two fewer cars on the roads, a reduction in plastic and paper packaging and a positive impact on the environment from all the energy saved. If everyone followed a similar plan, the results would be impressive. But even if you can't manage a full year without going shopping, you can participate in the anti-consumerist movement by refusing to buy things you don't need. Buy Nothing groups send a clear message to companies that people are no longer willing to accept the environmental and human cost of overconsumption.

Quelle: https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/skills/reading/b2-reading/buy-nothing-movement

Hey,

ich schreibe morgen eine englisch Klausur. Wenn diese eine 3 oder besser ist bekomme ich 500 Euro für meinen Führerschein. Die Aufgaben werden ungefähr so sein:

1. Summarize
2. analyzing
3. comment oder kreative Aufgabe

Außerdem wird es eine Mediation sein. Deutscher Text! Das Problem ist ich bin ein kompletter Anfänger in Englisch. Hat jemand Tipps wie ich morgen ne 3 raushaue :(?

Wir dürfen zwar ein Wörterbuch verwenden was aber nicht sehr viel hilft.

Ja also ich schreibe eine Summary und habe mich gerade gefragt ob ich da sagen kann: Die Person macht zum Beispiel das und das.

Also auf English natürlich.

Hallo, das war die Angabe (Nummer 11):

Könnt ihr bitte meinen Blog comment korrigieren, umschreiben, alles was geht, damit es ein guter text wird? ich würde mich echt freuen, es wird sogar benotet, bitte hilft mir dabei:

Hi Artsy Tiger,

there is a difference between spray painting and vandalism. If your friend use to paint an wall, which is not someone’s property, then it is not viewed as vandalism. However, if he painted for example a school or a market wall, can be considered as a crime and it may also carry consequences because of damaging the property belonging to others without permission. It is important to respect other people’s property and seek permission before making any changes on it, like spray painting. 

So, as already mentioned and also according to the law, spray painters painting on public property without permission is considered illegal and can result in serious consequences for the artist. I guess, your friend was not properly informed about this and didn’t do it on purpose, maybe for fun. I mean, spray painting is also a form of art, just not the typical type of art. I can imagine that they are doing it from their heart, let their voices hear and from the experience of something that really impacts them like your friend, who painted his “world” on the wall.

By the way, there are many crimes in general considered worse than spray painting, such as violent offenses like assault or murder, which can cause physical harm or death to others.

I don’t know if it was fair though but I hope that your friend gets released as soon as possible!

Den Text habe ich selber geschrieben mit einem Text den wir bekommen haben.

Ich bin LKler, jedoch die schlechteste im Kurs :(....kann jemand mich korrigieren?

Many Americans are divided because they do not know whether the widening inequalitiy is a problem and they do not know the right solution for this problem.

The social immobility of America is doubtful and America should take more effort to ensure that the poor people who nevertheless work hard, get a chance to develop and to chance their lives and lead a better life.

America is compared to other countries on of the lowest countries with regard social mobility.

Children in the USA have a low chance of moving up into the top quintile.

The gap between rich and poor is growing.

To close this widening the politicans do not know how to deal with it.

Guten Tag,

Ich wäre wirklich dankbar wenn Sie mir bei dieser Frage helfen könnten. Also ich muss ein Essay auf Englisch schreiben mit Hilfe von 3 Punkten und die sind:

1. The importance of tourism for Austria.

2. Negative side effects of tourism.

3. How tourism needs to adapt in the future?

Die Problem ist, dass ich bei der Frage 3 keine Idee habe. Was meint diese Frage genau? Kann bitte jemand von euch mir ein paar Ideen geben. Und danke sehrrrr :-)

Liebe Grüße

Ranii*

Schreibe bald eine Englischarbeit, inder wir auch eine Summary schreiben sollen. Wenn ich im Hauptteil kurz den Inhalt zusammenfasse sollen meine Sätze dann eher wie Vision 1 oder 2 starten:

Vision 1: The author wants to explain... ; In the beginning of the article... ,The text says...

Vision 2: Direkt mit dem Inhalt einsteigen: By unsing social Media and the Internet to find new friends... ; All in all the meaning of...

Danke für eure Antworten im Vorraus

Willy Wonka is the owner of the chocolate factory. He announces that somebody have the chance to win five golden tickets. One of the winners is Charlie Bucket. Charlie learn everything about the inventions, how the factory looks like and the special workers that nobody knows about them. At the end there is a big decision that no one suspected.

Hallo, Ich möchte gerne fragen ob mein summary Text gut geworden ist? Ihr könnt mir gerne bzw. Ich bitte drum mir paar Tipps zu geben um sie zu verbessern oder auch wenn ihr möchtet mein Text ganz zu verbessern (Wäre sehr dankbar dafür) Ich mache solche Aufgabe das erste mal also bitte ich euch nicht so gemein zu sein.

Summary:

The Text „History of New Zealand“ Deals With important and intersesting informations and facts about the History of New Zealand.

The First Text is about the Arrival of Maori. The informations are about that the first inhabitants in New Zealand were Maori, and that New Zealand is Valley Aotearora. Next informations are about the First Explorer to reach New Zealand and that he travelled in his waka Hourua (big canoe) from his Polynesian homeland, Hawaiki. In the third part they write about where is Hawaiki? They Write that hawaiki cannot be found on map. In the next part the writer writes about what maori eat? It says that maori eat Fish, hunted native birds, vegetables and also native food like berries.

The writer writes in the next Text about that In 1840 the treaty of waitangi was signed by maori and British reprensentatives and that in 1872 the wars over land had ended, moreover he also write in the next topic about maori culture it says that most maori lived in rural communities ,  in the 1970s the maori language became more important and that  the first Officially bilingual school opened in 1978. All in all is the history of New Zealand very fascinating.

English: Hello guys, can somone help me? I have to write a summary about the book "Born a Crime" by Trevor Noah but im not really good at summarys. Does anyone have some advice for me?

P.S. The summary must have 250 words.

Deutsch: Hey Leute, kann mir jemand helfen? Ich muss eine Zusammenfassung des Buches "Born a Crime" von Trevor Noah schreiben, aber ich habe Schwierigkeiten wenn es ums zusammenfassen geht. Hat jemand ein paar Tipps für mich, wie ich gut schreiben könnte?

P.S. Die Zusammenfassung muss 250 Wörter haben.

1. Comment on the pressure the British feel to maintain the myth of their identity. How should other nations deal with them ?

was würdet ihr dazu sagen ?

Comment on the Quote: "We're colossal, hit-it-out-of-the-park cultural over-achievers" (I1. 44-45) and explain what attitude the author is criticising.

kann mir jemand dabei helfen ?
was meine er damit ?

Der Text

Essay: Pet and Teenagers

Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Having a pet at a early age helps teenagers learn about responsibility and taking care of others. At the same time, it can help them learn to take care of themselves. Some teenagers though, should never have pets of their own if they can’t control themselves and have difficulty with empathy. Therefore: Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Teenagers mature at different rates. Some can handle the responsibility of caring for a pet already and others not. That’s why the age is for the parent to decide. If teenagers are animal-friendly, then cats make excellent pets. They can be playful and entertaining, especially if people adopt a kitten. They are also relatively easy to take care for: good quality food, clean water, a clean litter box, toys and interaction with their owners for affection.

As mentioned, owning a pet helps in the development of a teenager for example learning to take responsibility for another life and experience what it means if someone depends on them. A pet also helps teenagers learning to give attention even if they are not in the mood for it.

Despite of that, how can teenagers even cover the costs of keeping a pet? Well, pets are expensive but if teenagers have a pet, they can buy cheap food or cheap toys, if they want to cover their costs. Teenagers can also spend their pocket money more for their pet or can earn some money in holidays.

To conclude, I would say teenagers should keep a pet, if they are ready to take care of it. If they care for their pet, they return the love. A pet doesn't question what kind of job the kid’s parents have or how much money they make, etc. They would love their owners if they show affection to it.

"The Universe is Regular,stable and uniform to the extent that human life or any life exist within it." Also keine wortwörtliche übersetzung sondern was damit gemeint ist und ob es richtig ist

Hallo, ich muss in Englisch ein formaler Brief bzw E-Mail schreiben wobei ich die Vorteile von Austauschschüler benenne. Der Anfang meines Hauptteil lautet:

Firstly through the student exchange many students lear their personality better and develop it further.A student exchange often gives them the opportunity to start from scratch. They try new things and learn how to deal with conflicts and problems independently.

Kann jemand mir bitte es für mich korrigieren?

Danke

Hallo, wird in der Summary bei Englisch Klausuren nur das Simple Present verwendet oder darf man bei der Reproduktion von narrativen Texten auch auf das Present Progressive zurückgreifen?