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The non fictional text “The science of climate change” by Terrence Wood is about the greenhouse effect and the human activities which produce greenhouse gases. It is divided in two sections. The first section explains, what the greenhouse effect is and its formation. It sais, that the greenhouse effect isn’t bad and that it is a natural phenomenon which existed a long time before humans existed. Furthermore it describes that humans emit nearly all of the gases that lead to the effect, moreover it mentions that it doesn’t only depend on the amount of the specific greenhouse gas but on the extinct to which the gas can absorb radiation und the period of time that it’s molecules stay in the atmosphere. The second part tells us, that carbon dioxide is the most emitted gas (of all greenhouse gases) and the most important source of it, is burning fossil fuels or deforestation.

Sind da viele Fehler drin? Und wie kann man das kursiv Geschriebene anders formulieren? (das soll ein summary sein und der Teil steht genau so im Text, aber ich weiß nicht, wie ich ihn umformulieren soll) Falls jemand den Text kennt, aus context starter 21 (der Titel steht ja oben^^) Wenn den jemand kennt und schon mal ein summary dazu geschrieben hat, würde ich mich freuen, wenn er es mit mir teilen würde ;) Ich hoffe, der Text geht so einigermaßen. hatte diesmal nicht sonderlich viel Zeit :/

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Englisch - Summary: Laura, written by Robert O'Neill, Tipps?

Ich musste eine Summary zu der Kurzgeschichte 'Laura', geschrieben von Robert O'Neill schreiben und ich bin mir nichts ganz sicher, ob das was da jetzt rausgekommen ist, auch richtig ist. Ich merke mit der Zeit (Weil es ja eine Summary sein soll) könnte tatschlich etwas falsch sein, aber ich wüsste nicht, wie ich es sonst schreiben könnte. Es wäre schön, wenn sich das jemand durchlesen und einaar Tipps geben könnte.

Everybody in the crowded restaurant stared when the young woman suddenly threw a glass of wine in the face of the older man sitting opposite her at a table near the window. The young woman was attractive and well dressed. The man was at least twenty years older than she was. He looked shocked. The young woman suddenly stood up and ran towards the door. ”Laura, come back, please,” the older man shouted. But she had already reached the door. The man ran after her. It had started to rain outside. She ran out into the middle of the street. ”For God's sake, give me a chance to explain,” the man shouted. She turned around and stared at him. A car had just turned the corner and was coming towards her very fast. The driver had not turned his windscreen wipers on, and he was talking to someone on his 10 mobile. Then - suddenly - he saw her -directly in front of him, so close that he could see her eyes when she turned her head and looked at him.

Meine Summary dazu: The short story 'Laura', written by Robert O'Neill tells us the conflict between a couple. They're sitting in a café but the woman, well dressed, stood up and ran away - Away from the man, who wanted to explain the situation. He was left alone and the woman ran into the middle of the street The driver in a car, which turned into this street was talking to someone, was distracted so he could'nt see her directly additional of the rainy wheater - And so she standed so close and turned her head to him.

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