Wie findet ihr die Einleitung ( Summary )?
The Story "Bend it like Beckham" was written bei "Autor" in "Jahr".The Story is about a india girl by the name of Jess who plays football against the will of her parents.Bend it like beckham Illustrates the difficult life of girls who grow up in a conservative parents house.
Das ist meine Einleitung, wie findet ihr sie ?
Danke für jede Unterstützung.
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The story "Bend it like Beckham" written by "Autor" in "Jahr" deals with an indian girl named Jess who plays football against the will of her parents.Bend it like Beckham shows the difficult life of a girl who grows up in a conservative family.
So würde ich das jetzt schreiben :)
-Indian
-Der eingeschobene Teil nach "Beckham" muss durch Kommata abgetrennt werden.
-Der Buchtitel sollte durch Anführungszeichen gekennzeichnet werden.
The Story "Bend it like Beckham" was written by "Autor" in "Jahr".The Story is about an indian girl called Jess, who plays football against the will of her parents.Bend it like beckham Illustrates the difficult life of girls who grow up in a conservative parents house.
-story
-Indian
-"Bend It Like Beckham" illustrates the difficult life of a girl who grows up with conservative parents (bei dir müsste nach "parents" ein Apostroph stehen).
The Story "Bend it like Beckham" was written by "Autor" in "Jahr".The Story is about a india girl by the name of Jess who plays football against the will of her parents.Bend it like beckham Illustrates the (difficult life )of girls who grow up in a conservative parents house.
kleine fehler noch gefunden, sonst gut
-story
-an Indian girl
-"Bend It Like Beckham" illustrates
-parents' (mit Apostroph)
Achja und an india girl. Ist das aus dem camden town buch ?:D
Indian girl!