Könnt ihr mir bitte bei der Summary zu "The lost girl" helfen?(dringend)
Also dies was jetzt folgt ist eine eher schlechte Summary wie ich finde aber zu meiner Verteidigung hatte auch nicht sehr viel zeit Wäre schön wenn ihr mir schnellstmöglichst(da ich es morgen abgeben muss) mit Verbesserungsvorschlägen helfen könntet
The lost girl
The folk tale 'The lost girl' is about a family on a north Island with a daughter, who disappeared.One day the father and his sons come to a beautiful house on an island. A man, who lives in the house and invite them, introduce them his wife, who is the lost girl. They was very happy to see her again! After the man ask the father, if he has cows to sell, but he must tell him the way to get here. The man says, that he will come and get a cow. As exchange the father can choose anything, that he would like. Then they go home and the cow was dead!
Das geht auf keine Kuhhaut!
Es ist nach Mitternacht und du hattest bis jetzt keine Zeit, deine Hausaufgaben zu machen?
Wer glaubst du macht sie dir um diese Uhrzeit und was lernst du dabei?
So wirst du es weit bringen!
- he/she/it das s muss mit
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invites, They were very happy, asks.
After the man ask the father, if he has cows to sell, but he must tell him the way to get here. (Der Satz macht keinen sinn??? After (what) der man fragt den Vater ob er Kuehe zu verkaufen hat aber er muss ihm den weg erklaeren????)
Und warum ist die Kuh tot, als sie nach Hause kommen?
Binde mal paar Connectors ein. Further, Additionally, However, etc.
Was könnte ich bei diesen summary über den text "paranoid park" im green line besser machen?
Es wäre nett, wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet und mich auf Fehler hinweist und mir vielleicht Verbesserungstipps zur gebt.
The book 'Paranoid Park' was written by Blake Nelson, which was published in year 2006 in Portland, Oregon. The text deals with a young skater names Alex, who is doing illegal things, and who kills a security guard in self defense.
The young skater is the main character of the story. He is 16 years old. And is at his uncle Tommy's beach house.
One evening he decides to go there with his best friend Jared, but Jared wants to see his girlfriend and so he doesn't go with Alex to Paranoid Park.
Alex decides to go alone to Paranoid Park and when he is there, he sits on his skateboard and watches the skaters and girls there.
A streeter called Scratch comes along with his friends and after a short talk Scratch asks Alex whether he wants to hop a train.
Fascinated by the idea of hopping train Alex agrees and they leave Paranoid Park.
While riding the train, they are seen by a security guard who immediately chases them and starts to hit Scratch with his nightstick.
After Alex sees that he hits the security guard with his skateboard.
The man stumbles and falls forward on the gravel beside the train.
The coming train pulls him along and he is twisted into an awkward position under the train.
After the train has passed, the security guard has been cut in half.
After this horrible accident Alex is totally in panic and he doesn't know what he should do in a situation like that.
He is totally confused, because he wants to tell the police but he is too afraid of the consequences and he decides to keep first that accident to himself.
Totally confused the main character starts to run....
Summary + Characterisation, korrektur, dringend?
Summery's: The shortstory ‚Patricia’ written by Fraser Sutherland deals with two friends, where the boy has a crush on the girl, but never told it, until a spring dance in their school comes. He forces himself to ask her, to go with her to the dance and does it, but she declines his question and at the end, both go not to the dance and go different ways too.
The shortstory ‘Patricia’ written by Fraser Sutherland deals with two friends, where the boy has a crush on the girl, but never told it. In their school there goes a spring dance and the boy forces himself to ask her, to go with her to the dance, does it, but she just diclines his question and at the end, both of them, go not to the dance and go different ways too
was wirkt besser und richtiger, zumindest einigermaßen?
Characterisation The following text is a characterisation of the boy, one of the two main characters in the story ‘Patricia’.
The boy is a student around 16 or 17 years, how it could be assumed, because he is close to his final exams (l. 55) and his voice breaks and so ‘He [is] changing’(fg.l. 19). Furthermore the character seems to be very sporty and active, just look at the scene, where he stands in front of the mirror and ‘[looks] at himself’ and his muscles (fg.l.5) - what means, that he must be ambious too, because he worked hard, to get them. The boy could be characterized as really attentive, how the behavior shows it, related to Patricia (fg. l.7-19). ‘He [spend] an hour talking with her’ and ‘[think] a lot about asking her to go [with him]’, but he have not the guts to say directly, that he wants to go with her to the spring dance, what makes him not self-confident.
To sum it up, the boy is ambious as related to Particia, but calm, without selfconfidence, but (Mir fällt nicht ein, wie es genau zusammenfassen könnte :x)
Ist meine Englisch Kapitelzusammenfassung The Pigman in Ordnung?
Summary: The Pigman Chapter 7
John relates that he and Lorraine ran into Dennis and Norton on their way to Mr. Pignati's after school, and that, to avoid telling Dennis and Norton where they were going, they ended up drinking beer with them at Masterson's tomb, a secluded part of the local cemetery. At dinner, John argues with his father about his career goal of becoming an actor. John's father calls him a "jackass," and repeatedly tells John that he should work with him. John's father "has a seat on the Coffee Exchange," which means that he has a stressful job buying and selling large amounts of coffee on the world market. John and his father have an argument about John's desire to "be individualistic," and his lack of interest in a business career. When John and Lorraine finally get to Mr. Pignati's, it is evening, and John is struck by how happy he is to see them. John's parents, he reflects, have never been glad to see him. Mr. Pignati invites them to explore the house and make themselves at home. Lorraine finds a picture of a young girl in a confirmation dress, and Mr. Pignati tells them that it's a picture of his wife, Conchetta. Later, John finds a bill for Conchetta Pignati's funeral.
Wie schreibe ich eine gute summary?
Großes Dankeschön im Voraus.
Kann mir jemand dieses summary von "A message from the Pig-man" korrigieren?
habe eine summary zum text a message from the pig-man von john wain geschrieben, wäre nett wenn ihr eure meinung dazu äußern würdet und ggf fehler verbessern könntet oder zumindest sagen, wo sie sind :)
The story „A Message from the Pig-man“, written by John Wain, is about a 6-year old boy named Eric, which has many questions he would like to ask but is afraid to do so.
Eric is the son of newly divorced parents. He has no siblings and his mum has a new boyfriend named Donald. He has difficulty with the new circumstances and does not understand why his father had to leave just because Donald moved in. He also does‘nt mind sharing his room in order for his dad to have the spare room. He is afraid of the pig-man and avoids him. He imagines the pig-man as a man who looks like a pig. One day, his mother asks him to catch the pig-man to bring him the scarps. First he was afraid, but when he sees the pig-man he realizes that the pig-man is a normal person and finally understands that the people call him pig-man, because he has some pigs that he looks after. Eric is no longer afraid of asking questions. When he comes home, he asks his mother why his father can‘t stay with them but his mother does‘nt answer him. Now he thinks that grown-ups are very silly and he hates them all.