'Summary' von 'Snakeman von Paul Davenport'
Ich muss morgen eine Klausur über dieses Buch schreiben. Ich will euch eine Summary über das Buch schreiben
In this book Cathy, the new pupil at Portland High is threaten by the Snakeman and his gang.
Cathy, who comes from New York, is new at Portland High. First, she meets Jamie and he interwiews her, because Jamie is in the newspaper-team. Later she knows Gorden Baker, but she calls him Snakeman, because he is big and slim. The Snakeman and his gang threaten Cathy, they extort money from her and want to hurt her and her brother Mike. Mike is jounger than Cathy. She tries the non- resistance tactic, but it does not work. Later, Cathy tells her problem to Jamie and her mother, Eileen. Jamie asks Cathy to be in the newspaper-team and she says ok. They want to go to police, but they haven't any proof. Then they want to publish an article about the Snakeman and his gang, but Ms. Southerland, the boss of the newspaper-team rejects it! Later they publish the article without the permission from Ms. Souterland and they must to go to Dr. Callahan, the principal. The mayor(Bürgermeister) comes to Dr. Callahan and says that he likes the newspaper. They have a press conference. They make Quotes with the other victims of Snakeman.
Finally, they get a massage that the Snakeman is died. bewerten bitte
Du hast nicht geschrieben, dass Cathy zuerst zum Schuldirektor geht, um ihn um Hilfe zu bitten. Außerdem kommt in deinem Summary nicht vor, dass der councelor Mr Black ihr nicht hilft. Jamie ist zuerst ja auch sehr ängstlich und will ihr nicht helfen, In deiner Zusammenfassung kommt nicht so rüber, dass Cathy es sehr schwer hat.
Cathy nennt Snakeman so, weil er sehr lang ist, schlangenartige fast unbewegliiche Augen hat, sein Gesicht insgesammt wie das einer Schlange aussieht. Außerdem zischt Snakeman all seinen Sätze und seine Zunge zischelt zwischen seinen Zähnen hin und her.
Geht ne, fehlt viel z.b. das die kajak fahen waren und sich da geküsst haben, oder das sie eine special ausgabe von der beacon gemacht haben....aber eig. sonst gut ;)
Kann jemand meinen kurzen Englisch Text überfliegen und nach Fehlern suchen?
The main character of the short story „The swim team“ written by Miranda July in 2007, is named Maria, is 22 years old and lives alone in Belvedere, a small city, which is free from swimming pools. There is only a gas station and a market in Belvedere.
She would like to move, but she don’t have enough money (she don’t have a car or phone as well) and she don’t like to ask his parents, although she write every week to them. Her life is very boring (line 9-11), because she have nothing to do and no friends until she listens to a talk of three 80-years-old-persons, called Elizabeth, Kelda and Jack Jack, who can’t swim but they want to. So she suggests to teach them in swimming, because she learned in High School, and later she gives „swimming lessons“ to them twice a week in her living room with bowls of water and a kitchen floor. At the beginning of the story Maria is a little bit shy, she don’t like to speak with other people and starts tob e exited. (line 35-37) But at the end of the story Maria is a strong and purposeful coach, who dares to talk and to say what to do. (line 97-98) These swim lessons gives Maria something to do and she miss the lessons later.