'Summary' von 'Snakeman von Paul Davenport'

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Geht ne, fehlt viel z.b. das die kajak fahen waren und sich da geküsst haben, oder das sie eine special ausgabe von der beacon gemacht haben....aber eig. sonst gut ;)

Das mit dem Beacon wurde ja geschrieben. Sonst stimmt's.

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Du hast nicht geschrieben, dass Cathy zuerst zum Schuldirektor geht, um ihn um Hilfe zu bitten. Außerdem kommt in deinem Summary nicht vor, dass der councelor Mr Black ihr nicht hilft. Jamie ist zuerst ja auch sehr ängstlich und will ihr nicht helfen, In deiner Zusammenfassung kommt nicht so rüber, dass Cathy es sehr schwer hat.

Cathy nennt Snakeman so, weil er sehr lang ist, schlangenartige fast unbewegliiche Augen hat, sein Gesicht insgesammt wie das einer Schlange aussieht. Außerdem zischt Snakeman all seinen Sätze und seine Zunge zischelt zwischen seinen Zähnen hin und her.

Kann mir vielleicht jemand die summary korrigieren?

The article “Bag lady” from the magazine mail of Sunday by Rebecca Hosking is about the environment and marine pollution Rebecca Hosking went to Hawaii for a documentary for the BBC . She is a lady which is committed to the environment. Also she wanted to watch the beauty of Hawaii. But when she was there she was shocked about the situation. Because they was a lot of dead albatross chicks and a lot of trash which came from the ocean to hawaii

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kann mir jemand sagen, ob das eine gute summary wäre?

Hallo, ich schreibe morgen meine erste eglischklausur und wollte fragen, ob mir jemand sagen kann, ob das hier eine gute Summary wäre oder was ich noch verbessern könnte.

Hier noch der Link zum Text, über den ich die summary geschrieben habe : http://www.ogtprep.com/readings/reading8.htm

Summary

The short story „Early Autumn“ by Langston Hughes (1902-1967) is about a man, called Bill and a woman named Mary. Bill and Mary were in love wehne they were young. At that time Mary left Bill for another man but now they meet again. They talk to each other and Mary narrats that she lives in New York, too. She tells about her family and her job but she seems to be frustradet and unhappy with her life. On the other hand Bill seems to be very content. He tells about his new wife and his two kids. In Bill's eyes Mary looks very old, but he does not tell her. They invite each other to visit and at the end, when Mary's bus arrives, Mary wants to say goodbye with a kiss but Bill only held his hand out. When Mary is in the bus, she remembers that they forgot to swich the addresses.

danke im vorraus

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Kann jemand meinen kurzen Englisch Text überfliegen und nach Fehlern suchen?

The main character of the short story „The swim team“ written by Miranda July in 2007, is named Maria, is 22 years old and lives alone in Belvedere, a small city, which is free from swimming pools. There is only a gas station and a market in Belvedere.
She would like to move, but she don’t have enough money (she don’t have a car or phone as well) and she don’t like to ask his parents, although she write every week to them. Her life is very boring (line 9-11), because she have nothing to do and no friends until she listens to a talk of three 80-years-old-persons, called Elizabeth, Kelda and Jack Jack, who can’t swim but they want to. So she suggests to teach them in swimming, because she learned in High School, and later she gives „swimming lessons“ to them twice a week in her living room with bowls of water and a kitchen floor. At the beginning of the story Maria is a little bit shy, she don’t like to speak with other people and starts tob e exited. (line 35-37) But at the end of the story Maria is a strong and purposeful coach, who dares to talk and to say what to do. (line 97-98) These swim lessons gives Maria something to do and she miss the lessons later.

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Brauche eure Hilfe in English? Es ist wichtig?

Könnt ihr mir meinen Text durchlesen und wenn ihr Fehler findet es ausbessern, da ich versuche mich zu verbessern. Ich würde mich für eure Hilfe sehr bedanken und bedanke mich im voraus . Vielen Dank für eure Hilfe

Today I will speak about young People. The important thing for the Teenagers is Clothes. For many Teenagers, it does not matter what the clothes look like, the price and the brand always important. Many teenagers say that they are too overpriced brands but still are almost all of their clothes from well-known brands.

The teenagers try to style themselves to either show-off or impress girls. They want to belong to a group to hang out with or they also make fun of the others who cannot afford expensive clothes or use their money sparingly.

Especially sports brands are very popular with boys and girls are more classic clothes. There are also some Youtubers who make videos about it and then they look at the kids and then they try to dress like their idols.

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Habe ich Fehler bei im Text englisch?

Ich muss als Hausaufgabe eine zusammfassung von einen Text machen und ich wollte fragen ob es so richtig ist:

The story is about the girl Nina and it’s her birthday. Her brother David and some friends planned a trip to the Kakadu National Park as a birthday surprise. The group has an argument about what to do. Nina and Mike want to go swimming in a freshwater billabong, but David disagrees. He worries about salt water crocodiles which could be there. They arrive at the park and the rest of the day went normal. At the next day the group does some rock climbing, but while they do this, Mike and Nina disappeare. David and Cathy worry and David hurt his foot. After much waiting time they come back to the other both. When Nina is alone with David, she tells him that she and Mike were at a lower pool, but than a crocodile appeared at the other side. They ran and climbed a rock, so nothing fatal happened. Nevertheless it was a big shock.

Danke!

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Summary + Characterisation, korrektur, dringend?

Summery's: The shortstory ‚Patricia’ written by Fraser Sutherland deals with two friends, where the boy has a crush on the girl, but never told it, until a spring dance in their school comes. He forces himself to ask her, to go with her to the dance and does it, but she declines his question and at the end, both go not to the dance and go different ways too.

oder ..

The shortstory ‘Patricia’ written by Fraser Sutherland deals with two friends, where the boy has a crush on the girl, but never told it. In their school there goes a spring dance and the boy forces himself to ask her, to go with her to the dance, does it, but she just diclines his question and at the end, both of them, go not to the dance and go different ways too

was wirkt besser und richtiger, zumindest einigermaßen?

Characterisation The following text is a characterisation of the boy, one of the two main characters in the story ‘Patricia’.

The boy is a student around 16 or 17 years, how it could be assumed, because he is close to his final exams (l. 55) and his voice breaks and so ‘He [is] changing’(fg.l. 19). Furthermore the character seems to be very sporty and active, just look at the scene, where he stands in front of the mirror and ‘[looks] at himself’ and his muscles (fg.l.5) - what means, that he must be ambious too, because he worked hard, to get them. The boy could be characterized as really attentive, how the behavior shows it, related to Patricia (fg. l.7-19). ‘He [spend] an hour talking with her’ and ‘[think] a lot about asking her to go [with him]’, but he have not the guts to say directly, that he wants to go with her to the spring dance, what makes him not self-confident.

To sum it up, the boy is ambious as related to Particia, but calm, without selfconfidence, but (Mir fällt nicht ein, wie es genau zusammenfassen könnte :x)

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