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Hausaufgabe ist es in Englisch ein summary zum Thema "growing up" zu schreiben. Im Unterricht haben wir vereinzelt schon darüber gesprochen, aber mir fallen keine Punkte zum Punkt conflicts with parents ein. Darauf will unserer Lehrer weitestgehend hinaus. Bitte um ein paar Vorschläge. Danke im Voraus :)

Könnt ihr mir auch sagen , was man bei einem Summary , also winee Zusammenfassung beachten muss.

In den englischsprachigen sozialen Medien kommt öfter der Ausdruck "good dick" vor. Da kommen dann so Sätze vor wie beispielsweise "I had sex with him and it was really great, he had a really good dick"

Worauf bezieht sich das? Auf die Länge, oder was?

Heyyy,

ich schreibe gerade meine eigenen Bücher und wollte nach eurer Meinung fragen, was ihr denken würdet wenn ihr diese Titel in einer Buchreihe seht und wie sie euch einfach gefallen würden.

1. The Whispers of Life

2. The Whispers of Truth (and Power)

3. Echoes of the Fallen

4. The Whispers of War

5. The Whispers of Freedom (and Hope)

PS.: der 3 Titel ist anders, weil es sich um einen Wendepunkt in der Handlung handelt, einige der Charaktere erhalten Kräfte und ein toter Charakter (bzw. ein Paar) wird wieder lebendig, deshalb heißt es „Echoes of the Fallen“.

Ich habe auch einen Klappentext, leider nur auf English, aber hoffe das geht auch.

𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐖𝐡𝐢𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐨𝐟 𝐋𝐢𝐟𝐞 (1. book in a series)

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Akira wakes up in a room. No memories, no light, no 𝐋𝐢𝐟𝐞.

She must adapt to her "new" 𝐋𝐢𝐟𝐞 and find out where she is and why she got abducted.

When she finally gets to inspect the place she is in, she is met with a dark reality of the so called 𝕰𝖑𝖊𝖌𝖆𝖓𝖙𝖘 and 𝕀𝕟𝕟𝕠𝕔𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕚𝕒𝕖𝕤, girls "saved" by the regime of the 𝐔𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐬, only to be reshaped into ideals of obedience and grace, stripped of their pasts, their names, and eventually, their will.

But Akira isn’t who she, we all think, she is.

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Centuries after the war, humanity survives in wastelands, calling everything they find their home.

Above them drift the 𝐈𝐛𝐚𝐫𝐮𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬—floating islands ruled by the 𝐔𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐬, inspired by the legend of Icarus. Beautiful, unreachable, and doomed to fall, drifting endlessly across the sky... until they fly too far.

Only 𝐅𝐮𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐚 stands in resistance: a city open to all, even to those, overshadowed by the 𝐈𝐛𝐚𝐫𝐮𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬.

Its mission?

To abolish the inequality the 𝐔𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐬 built.

For that they build a resistance.

A tale of fight, battle and love.

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Die Genres sind Dystopie, Fantasy, Action, Sci-Fi und Romance

Danke für alle Antworten :)

Lg

Mia

Stimmt das?

Ich schreibe am Freitag eine Englischarbeit über das Buch Jolt von Bernard Beckett. Wir müssen eine Summary über eine Textstelle schreiben, eine Analyse und Creative writing ( change the narrator). Die Arbeit geht über eine Textstelle des Buches und ich will wissen was es für wichtige Textstellen im Buch gibt. Wir haben das englische Buch Jolt vom Klettverlag.

Was für wichtige Stellen gibt es im Buch um darüber eine Arbeit zu schreiben?

Kann man das so schicken? (Englisch LK 11/2)

Title: “Happier than Ever“

I grew up watching the world from the sidelines. I learned when I was young that the world is just like a big cafeteria table I was not welcome at. I was an odd child- to say the least. Making up my own stupid little songs. Cutting myself bangs with the scissors I found in Mom’s drawer. Walking up to people when they’re sad and hugging them silently. An odd child- to say the least. It didn’t get me many friends. Obviously. The one friend I had was just as pathetic. So embarrassing. Honestly. I’m glad we grew apart. She’s still walking around with stupid sunflower clips in her hair. She’s still humming that little song we made up as kids. She’s annoying. Honestly. She thinks people like her for “who she is.” She has like 2 friends. Who would listen to her? She said I changed. She said that “I’m not being myself anymore“. But I know better. I didn’t change, I adapted. And that way I will be more successful and happy than her. 

It is the night before the new school year starts, so I lie down in bed, close my eyes and let the thoughts flow.

You must make friends. Do whatever it takes. It doesn’t matter if you’re not being yourself. It doesn’t matter if you’re uncomfortable. Do you seriously want to spend your school years all alone? Is that really what you want to happen? Wake up to a million spam emails yet not a single message from a friend? Not a single missed call? Not a single message asking “Are you coming today?” Is that seriously what you will let happen? No. Pull yourself together and fit in. You must fit in. If you don’t you’ll be an outcast again. No one will sit next to you in class. You will spend your breaks alone waiting for them to end while the others wish they’d never do. You will watch everybody laugh. Watch everybody hang out. Everybody be happy.

You must fit in. It doesn’t matter what it takes. Remember 7th grade? I’m sure you do. Do you want to repeat that cycle? Is your life just one long pitiful cycle? A cycle of being excluded, tolerated, yet not wanted. Accepted, yet not wished for. It’s pathetic how hard you’re trying. How hard you’re trying to be someone else, yet still manage to fail. But this time will be different because you realized something. Nobody is being themselves. Nobody. Then why should you be? It’s embarrassing to think anybody cares about your true self. Honestly. All those TV shows are making you delusional. Stop believing in that stupid fairytale where anybody cares about who you actually are. You are just a character to be played. Don’t play it the right way and you will end up alone. Do you want that to happen? No. Think about how much better everything will be. You will be happy. You will never be lonely again. Never again. People will look up to you. Admire you. Maybe even envy you. Every single day will not feel like a burden. You will not feel like a burden. You will stop being a burden. People will love you for who you are. Even if it isn’t the real you. The real you was always cut out to be a loser anyway. To be an outcast and alone. To be a pathetic nothing who no one likes. If you don’t want to be that person anymore then read your stupid books in private. Watch that stupid show in secret. No one cares about it anyway. Stop talking so much about things no one cares about. Do you seriously think the world revolves around yourself? Are you seriously that pathetic? You narcissist. It’s funny, hide that. Now think. What do they want to hear? What do they expect from you? Is it coolness? Nonchalance? Funniness? Whatever it is, you must be it. Don’t show yourself. You must fit in. People will expect different things from you. You must be versatile. Be whatever they want you to be. Be yourself in secret.

“Have a nice day too.” I smile back softly to my dear friend as I go home and lie down in bed. I look at my phone. 2 missed calls, 12 new messages. Perfect. A hard day of fitting in. Totally worth it though. I have friends. I’m fitting in. I’m amazing. Happier than ever. I finally feel… empty? Whatever. Now I can be myself. 

But when I look into the mirror I don’t recognize my self. Was she right? 

And now the lights are off, the chairs are empty and I’m all alone. No one is watching, yet why do I keep acting?

„you have to hear behind blue eyes“

1. I wish spoke English

2. I did understand, if you didn't speak very fast

3. I wish I weren't only child

4. If we only did have enough money for a holiday

5. If I didn't have to go to work, I wouldn't have to get up at six o'clock every morning.

6. If had learnt to ski before I was forty, I were a very good.

7. My 13 year old sister wish she were older

8. I would rather my best friend didn't borrow my things without asking

9. If I knew anything about computers, I could help you

10. It's time we would have a break 

A single chance is a galaxy of hope.

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Die die nichts von beidem nehmen, müssen auch nicht abstimmen, weil es ist This or That und nicht beides oder vielleicht...

LG

Schreibt man die Aufgaben Summary, Analysis und Comment in einem Fließtext? Oder macht man die separat. Ich bitte um eine schnelle Antwort

Hey, wir lesen gerade das Buch ,,coast to coast“ und ich weiß, dass man in Zusammenfassungen im Simple Present schreiben soll. Wie sieht das allerdings bei Fragen aus, wie z.B: ,,How does Cooper feel before he encountered Bashir?“ meine Antwort war:,, he was enjoying the nature before he encountered Bashir“, aber wenn es dann ins Simple Present müsste, wäre es ja eigentlich: ,,He enjoys the nature before he encounters Bashir“. Ich finde das irgendwie komisch, was benutzt man denn jetzt hier?

Sagen wir der Fokus liegt auf der Language und Communicative Strategy, wie könnte man das im Einleitungssatz benennen? Geht

The author makes use of the language and communicative strategy of his article to emphasize …. , he therefore mainly uses ….(2 Beispiele jeweils eins pro Fokus)

kann man das noch irgendwie geschmeidiger ausdrücken, das hört sich so holprig an

they have found ….

they have found out….

oder ist eins davon sogar falsch?

Es ist leider auf english um hier ist eine kleine summary:

[Princess Celestia’s life is torn apart when a brutal fire destroys her castle and kills her parents. Left to navigate the ruins of her past and her fractured kingdom, Celestia receives a cryptic letter revealing that the person responsible for her family’s death is still alive and hunting her. Determined to uncover the truth, she embarks on a journey of self-discovery, training, and uncovering dark secrets hidden within her kingdom’s past. Along the way, she forms unexpected alliances and faces countless dangers as she seeks justice and closure.]

wie findet ihr es bis jetz so xd

Ich habe ein Satz im ein Buch gelesen "Peter Kellner presents the negativ consequences of the UK withdrawing from the EU".

Soll es nicht "the UK's withdrawing" sein? "the UK" ist ja ein Nomen und "withdrawing" ist ebenso ein Nomen und die beide können einfach so verbinden?

• Pet rabbits, tortoises and hedgehogs are allowed in the cabin or in the hold of the aircraft only from EU countries.

heisst das ich kann problemlos z. B. Mit nem Kaninchen von Helsinki nach Los Angeles fliegen oder habe ich den englischen Satz missverstanden?

Aber von London nach Los Angeles geht es nicht, richtig?

Das ist ein Text was ich so geschrieben hab.. Chat Gpt meinte, dass die Struktur sprunghaft ist und das Ausdruck sehr schlecht ist. Das sagt auch meine Lehrerin zu mir.. also wie kann ich genau meine Texte verbessern?

Hier ist ein Text von mir:

Auszug woraus ich einen Text erstellen muss

The text, "Data for people: How to make our post-privacy economy work for us" written by Andreas Weigend talks about the role of technology in a typical day in the author's life. The author uses a lot of techniques like tone, mood and style to help convey his neutral attitude towards technology as well as help keep his audience engaged.

The author’s tone helps convey the authors neutral attitude towards technology. The clear lack of variety in how he describes his routine and how the digital systems help complete his daily tasks hint a neutral attitude. He doesn't necessarily use direct adjectives that might connote a liking towards technology or adjectives with negative connotations. However, there are exceptions for example in line 21 he seems quite annoyed with the traffic system. The phrase, "again and again" shows his annoyance and his feelings of being irritated. Similarly phrases like in an instant" in line 31 show his satisfaction with technology and digital systems. At times the author gives reference to his criticism on technology discretely, for example the last line " Welcome to the digital revolution" sounds ironic. The tone also affects the mood evoked.

 The mood evoked by the text is also neutral. The author doesn’t necessarily refer to obvious wins that were possible through technology. However we  we read his experience with technology, we do get the feeling that technology can impact life positively when used in the right way. This is particularly evoked by words like "in an instant" in line 31 which also highlights how advanced technology has become. The phrase "eager to start the day" particularly gives the effect of technology easing one's duties which in turn results in the raising of one's spirits. Phrases like "again and again" highlights the drawback of technology and makes some digital systems seem like a discomfort. Such references make allows room for the assumption, that the author might share a positive attitude in technology. While the mood was mainly affected by the tone of the text, the style of the author helped keep the audience hooked to the text.

The author's style also helps keep the reader engaged and helps convey the author's attitude towards technology effectively. The author's use of hyphens helps contrast the general opinion from the author's experience. This gives the test clarity and helps the attitude understandable for the reader.

The author's structure also helps convey the overall attitude. The logical division of paragraphs in time-stamps helps the reader get a better understanding of the author’s neutral mindset and stay intact. While the structure played a massive role in engaging the reader, the informal register also helps alleviate the significance of the author’s stance.

 The register is informal, since the author mainly uses the personal pronoun, ,,I" which also helps with the message coming across, etc. Furthermore, the author also uses contractions like, "I'm" in line 20 and "Ill" in line 38. All this makes text feel like a conversation between the author and the reader, ultimately making it engaging.

All in all the author's neutral tone and the hopeful mood evoked by the text made technology feel promising when used effectively, etc.  The lack of variation in word choice made the text seem a bit blunt, but the unique structure and the hyphens etc. made the text attractive and clearer.