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I've lost my bag. Have you seen it?

Oder

I lost my bag. Have you seen it?

Our neighbour's are going to America next year.

Oder

Our neighbour's will go to America next year.

In meinem Buch steht ein Text: ,,What has happened to her? First of all, she comes(?) into registration this morning and she has colored her hair. I also saw her leave the school with some of the sixth formers who go(?) to the alley to smoke.
Warum steht das im Simple Present und nicht im Simple Past, obwohl es eine Erzählung aus der Vergangenheit ist?

Auf englisch to seal the deal?

Hey, ich bin in der zehnten Klasse und schreib morgen in Englisch eine Klassenarbeit und muss einen Personal Comment schreiben. Ich habe jetzt einen Text geschrieben über das Thema „Should cars be banned to combat climate change and traffic accidents ?“ Meine Aufgabe dazu war für jede Seite 2 Argumente zu schreiben und circa 150-200 benutzen. Könntet ihr mir vielleicht sagen, ob ich den Text gutgeschrieben habe und ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge habt?
Dankeschön.

Everyday, eight people die in Germany because of car crashes. Nowadays, the number of sold cars has increased over the last twenty years. More people can drive today than 50 years ago. So more cars are on the streets. Also everybody knows that driving a car produces high CO2 emissions, which damage the climate. So, should cars be banned to combat climate change and traffic accidents? In the following text, I will give my opinion on this topic.

Firstly, there are alternative climate-neutral electric cars available on the market. When you buy them, manufacturers sometimes offer bonuses, making electric cars often as affordable as regular ones. Due to global research in the field of electric cars, especially from China, new technologies are constantly emerging. Surely, the production of electric cars will become more environmentally friendly in the future.

Secondly, cars provide flexibility. To work or school, you can use your own car without depending on public traffic like buses or trains. This is especially important in rural areas, where public transport options are limited. For instance, in my village, the bus to the nearest town only runs once an hour, and not after 7 pm.

On the other side, traffic accidents are a huge problem all around the world. As already said, everyday 8 people die in Germany because of traffic accidents and over 1.6 Thousand worldwide. These numbers are arlarming, we have to do something. So it would be better, if we don’t use the car always. Also older people should walk more, because they can’t recognize and react so fast in the traffic, they’re a huge risk.

Furthermore, the production of cars, especially electric ones, generates high CO2 emissions, which speed up global warming. Additionally, driving traditional cars continues to harm the environment. To produce for example a battery for an electric car, often workers get exploit in poor countries or child labour have played a role. Also the battery don’t can be used to much, because slowly the battery capacity decrease a lot, so you often have to charge.

To sum it all up, I come to the conclusion, that cars should be banned. Electric cars are a good alternative, but the fabrication produces to much CO2. But I‘m sure it will be better in near future, Walk or use the bicycle is good for your health and doesn’t damage yourself!

Ich bin in der 11 Klasse Gymnasium Leistungsfach Englisch und wir haben das Thema USA und deren Politik. Ich finde das soo langweilig aber nächste Woche müssen wir darüber einen comment schreiben, deshalb stellt sich mir die Frage wie ich mich auf sowas vorbereiten kann. Ich weiß wie man einen comment schreibt aber zu der Politik in den USA weiß ich gar nichts. Hinzu kommt eine Höraufgabe. Wie kann man sich auf sowas vorbereiten?

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt (reported speech)
,,She asked me if I liked it and said that the teachers had told her that I was doing an amazing job“

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt? ,,It depends on how the weather will be.“

Auf die Frage "How are you" antwortet man ja üblicherweise mit "I'm fine, thanks" aber es geht ja auch mit I'm well/good aber was von beidem wäre denn grammatikalisch korrekt?

• Can I have your number?

No, I do have a boyfriend.

• Okay fair enough, fair enough. You’re good.

Wie würde man im Deutschen antworten?

Yabetta, mate! Grab a snag and a bevvy, just a standard for ya and all profits go to charity, for the kids and their footy, gotcha?!

Was heißt in diesem Kontext "Yabetta"? Hab das noch nie gehört. Wenn das mein English-Professor sähe, der kriegt nen Herzstillstand.. 😂

Take:-

SB/STH for granted

my arms around her

my advice

offence

ages

part

place

no notice

a risk

Put:-

somebody in charge of

pressure on sb

criticism

a plan into practice

his work first 

Hallo, könnte sich jemand bitte meinen Text anschauen (vor allem Grammatik). Vorab will ich sagen, dass es um einen Tag in einem Bildungszentrum geht.

When we arrived there on the second day, we had to go to our maintenance groups immediately. On that day, there was another specialist, so we had to introduce ourselves to her. After introducing, we got two sheets of paper. On the first one, there was only an eye and on the second one, there was a whole face. She said we had to paint makeup on both the eye and the face. In my opinion, my pictures were very ugly and it was very difficult for me because I can‘t draw well and I have never worn makeup before. After that, we grabbed our hairdressing heads which still had curlers in their hair and we had to remove them. They needed to be left in their hair overnight so that a volume winding would form. Luckily, it worked! Then we had to create our own hairstyle on our hairdressing head. The specialist said my hairstyle was pretty good. Then we could style and wash each other‘s hair again and X wanted to try  volume winding again as it didn‘t work on the previous day. On that day, it definitely worked better but she had to dry her hair with a hair dryer for about one hour because her hair was still too wet to remove the curlers from her hair. I was so sorry for her. Finally, she did it after one hour and her hair looked gorgeous, so in my opinion it was worth it. In the last 50 minutes, we could wear makeup but of course I didn‘t want, so I observed my classmates again. On the one hand, I think I could work as a hairdresser in future because it‘s interesting what customers tell you while I‘m styling their hair and it‘s also interesting to try out different hairstyles but on the other hand, this job doesn‘t match to me  because I‘m scared of doing mistakes because for example I could cut off a customer‘s hair and I don‘t want to touch stranger‘s hair. 

ist die folgende Mediation gelungen?:

Hello,

So as we are working on a joint project on unequal distribution of income, I have come upon on an interesting article in the "Stern" magazine. The author Walter Wüllenberg states his profound opinion about the class mobility in Germany and how this has changed in the last years. In the following I will point out the main arguments and their argumentation.

Firstly, the author states, that the German inequality of class is not comparable to the American Class inequality, as the German discussion about class was about the under class and their immobility, whereas the US discussion about class was always accomplished by the prolific idea of the American Dream. This shows in the social spendings of Germany too, spending more than half of the income of the estate, incomparable to the US with only a fifth of theirs.

Henceforth, the author states that the class inequality in Germany much rather shows in the not existing middle class than in the poor estate of the under class. While economy has grown hugely in the last decades, the wages have nearly stagnated, showing that economies growth could not bared by society as a whole but only by the rich. Thus, the rich have gotten immensely richer, owning most of the capital of the country, and the rest just held their class. Yet the divide between the classes has grown and their nearly is no in between. This is worth the criticism because the growth of the economy is due to the work of the society as a whole, yet only few bear the fruits of the hard work, being quite unfair.

I hope that this has helped you and that it may have provoked some thoughts considering inequality. I would like to hear from you.

GaLIGrü, 

Also wir schreiben morgen eine Englisch Arbeit ich kann alles außer reportet speech kann mir das einer erklären und sagen wie das geht ich verstehe es nicht