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Könnte man sagen: In todays episode we will talk about my internship at the „…“ and the experiences that i had, the good ones as well as the bad ones. And there were a lot of bad ones, you can trust me on that.

Was heisst "Auf hoher See" in Englisch. Im Deepl steht "On the high seas". Stimmt das so?

Hallo, könnte sich jemand bitte meinen Text anschauen (vor allem Grammatik). Vorab will ich sagen, dass es um einen Tag in einem Bildungszentrum geht.

When we arrived there on the second day, we had to go to our maintenance groups immediately. On that day, there was another specialist, so we had to introduce ourselves to her. After introducing, we got two sheets of paper. On the first one, there was only an eye and on the second one, there was a whole face. She said we had to paint makeup on both the eye and the face. In my opinion, my pictures were very ugly and it was very difficult for me because I can‘t draw well and I have never worn makeup before. After that, we grabbed our hairdressing heads which still had curlers in their hair and we had to remove them. They needed to be left in their hair overnight so that a volume winding would form. Luckily, it worked! Then we had to create our own hairstyle on our hairdressing head. The specialist said my hairstyle was pretty good. Then we could style and wash each other‘s hair again and X wanted to try  volume winding again as it didn‘t work on the previous day. On that day, it definitely worked better but she had to dry her hair with a hair dryer for about one hour because her hair was still too wet to remove the curlers from her hair. I was so sorry for her. Finally, she did it after one hour and her hair looked gorgeous, so in my opinion it was worth it. In the last 50 minutes, we could wear makeup but of course I didn‘t want, so I observed my classmates again. On the one hand, I think I could work as a hairdresser in future because it‘s interesting what customers tell you while I‘m styling their hair and it‘s also interesting to try out different hairstyles but on the other hand, this job doesn‘t match to me  because I‘m scared of doing mistakes because for example I could cut off a customer‘s hair and I don‘t want to touch stranger‘s hair. 

,,Das Fest ist an dem 25. Juli”

,,The festival is on the 25th July” ,

,,The festival is on 25 th July ”

mit ,,the” , Oder nicht ?

Geht beides?

Kling das okay:?

"I would like to refrain from my social life and focus on school." (Vom sozialen Leben distanzieren)

Alternativ würde ich auch "withdraw" schreiben

Hallo 💕 👋🏻,

Modalverben haben ja so Ersatzformen zb .can=be able to

Wann verwende ich can und wann be able to ?Könnt ihr mir dies auch noch für andere wichtige Modalverben sagen

Dankee an alle die mir helfen

Hey, muss ich sagen ,,This Book was published in the year 1945‘‘ Oder ,,this book was published on the year 1945‘‘

Hallo, ich muss einen Kommentar auf Englisch mit pro und contra Argumente nach diesem Hourglassprinzip verfassen. Wann muss ich die Gegenargumente entkräften? Also vom Aufbau her

why do they have to shove it in my face?

i Liked it better when you were invisible & i could pretend you didn't exist.

Übersetzung:

Warum müssen sie es mir unter die Nase halten?

Mir gefiel es besser, als ihr unsichtbar wart und ich so tun konnte, als ob ihr nicht existiert habt.

Danke

Was ist in diesem Satz am "understanding" falsch?

Wie würde er richtig heißen

Math is actually such an underrated subject and understanding it can be fun...

ist das so richtig kann mir einer den Text sonst überarbeiten wie es richtig klingen würde ??

Hey there,

I‘m Amelie from Hamburg Germany.

I‘d love to offer you à collaboration. I saw your Hotel on Instagram and Fell in love I curently have 250k on Instagram and would post pictures & stories of your hôtel & à roomtour for my followers in exchange for 3 free Nights.

I Hope we can work together & create some photos for more marketing exposer of the Hotel & my audience 

Best regards,

Amélie 

“What did the name mean?” Neil asked. “Did you only read dead poets?” “All poetry was acceptable, Mr. Perry. The name simply referred to the fact that, to join the organization, you had to be dead.” “What?” the boys said in chorus. “The living were simply pledges. Full membership required a lifetime of apprenticeship. Alas, even I’m still a lowly initiate,” he explained. - in dieser Szene wird es erklärt ,aber ich verstehe es nicht ganz. Kann es jmd vllt erläutern?

Danke.

Mfg

Heyho,

ich schreibe morgen eine Klassenarbeit in Englisch, in dieser werden wir eine Bewerbung schreiben müssen. Ich habe mal zur Vorbereitung etwas geschrieben, hättet ihr Feedback?

Lg

Dear director of Nature Camp,

My name is max Mustermann and I saw your Job application.

Let me introduce myself:

My name is Max Mustermann and I’m currently living with two roommates in Lexington. Until now I worked as a personal coach and in a Kindergarten, but I wanted to do something new.

Because I am living with two roommates, I am able to share living space and to express myself. Because I have beeen a personal coach, I have physical fitness and self discipline.

I think that I would fit perfectly at Nature Camp.

I am looking forward to a reply.

Kind regards

Max Mustermann

P.s.

Ist für ein Gymnasium, Klassenstufe 8

Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

You have found the following advert for an au pair job in Stockholm, Sweden and decide to apply for it.

Write about 150 words.

We are looking for an au pair that would enjoy spending time with our 

kids (boy and girl, aged 5 and 7), doing activities with them, speaking 

to them in English and fits in with the family.

Ich glaube "Dear Sir or Madam" passt nicht und "To whom may concern" ist nicht so höflich (?) Also welche sollte ich benutzen?

Danke im Voraus

Ich habe in einer Englischarbeit geschrieben: ,,He told them to dont look away.“ Meine Englisch Lehrerin hat mir dafür einen Fehler angestrichen.Ich habe mal gegoogelt, aber es gibt keine Ergebnisse.Kann mir jemand helfen?

• Zum Beispiel eine Entscheidung oder Handlung auszuführen.

Meine Übersetzung:

• 1) For example to carry out a decision or an action
• 2) oder For example, to carry out a decision or action.

Wisst ihr wie eine outline aufgebaut ist weil ich sehe einmal eine outline mit introduction und main part und einmal im internet sehe ich eine outline mit so einer groben Gliederung.Und manche sagen im internet es kommt nur ein schluss dazu.Jetzt schreibe ich morgen die klausur und bin verwirrt.Die themen sind Outline , Cartoon , und Comment.

Not taking a risk is a real risk. Was möchte man damit sagen?

health: a condition when a body is free from disease/illness

wellness: the state of being healthy;especially when you're actively trying to achieve it .

Frage gilt auch für Deutsch, denn: Bis auf die Betonung eigener Initiative sehe ich keinen Unterschied. Ihr etwa? Wenn ja, belehrt mich gerne. Danke.