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Hey!

Vielleicht kann sich jemand von den Englisch Profis mal meine Übung zum Partizip ansehen & nachgucken, ob alles richtig ist.

People watching (People who are watching) a demonstration often do not realize what it takes to organize such an event.
I talked to Kyle T., an animal rights activist. Because regularly organising (Because he regularly organises) demos against factory farming, ...
After having planned (After you have planned) your demo, the next thing is to tell the local police.
When having been informed (When they have been informed), they can plan how they are going to deal with it.
You should also give clear instructions to all the people attending (people who are attending).
For example, people demonstrating (people who are demonstrating) for the rights of farm animals shouldn't carry posters against child labour.
However, the most important thing is that everybody involved (everybody who is involved) should act peacefully.
If feeling (If they feel) positive about the demonstrators, people are more likely to support the case!

Not taking a risk is a real risk. Was möchte man damit sagen?

Hallo ich habe einen essay geschrieben über compulsory first aid courses for fourteen year olds und das ist ein maturabeispiel gewesen und ich wollte fragen, ob jemand das durchlesen könnte und es bewerten könnte, welche note das wäre, vor allem mit den fehlern und so. Ich habe den Text komplett alleine geschrieben und das in 20 Minuten, weil bei der Matura haben wir sehr wenig Zeit für zwei Texte also nur eine Stunde. Ich würde mich echt freuen. :)

Nowadays young people has access to more goods like education. In our modernity, they can extend their knowledge pretty easily as technology, for instance, is spread all over the world and as they can attain school which offers a ton of diverse subjects. However, people still argue that many of these don’t teach valuable lessons about the real life. Instead, young people already want to accomplish experiences that educate them for certain situations, perhaps helping someone out in hazardous situations. In result of these arguably issues, people suggest signing 14-year olds up for compulsory first aid courses.

Compulsory first aid courses can be ideal and influential for young people collecting more real life based experiences. Moreover, they can even give them an insight on how a situation can alter in only one instant and how people can put themselves in danger, precisely fighting against death. Teaching sessions about helping someone, in terms of surviving, can reflect young people’s interests. Some students already complain on having deplorable teaching sessions at school, regardless of their subject area. Maths, science, biology,  physics might enforce their intellectual thoughts but what about focusing on their mind set. Are they even that mentally stable to handle emergency situations? Would they even risk themselves to help someone out after they crashed their car into a tree? Are they even willing to sacrifice themselves and is it even worth?

At this point, students would take school more seriously as compulsory first aid courses influence students mental mind set. In this case, the integration of first aid courses into school is essential for young people. 14 year olds must bear the importance of life teaching sessions. So, the government need to go after their obligations to pay these courses. After all, education should be free and accessible to everyone. School subjects should not only consist of languages or natural sciences, but the government also have to consider the fact that students have to train their cognitive skills as well.

Moreover, the government can also detect people’s reactions would shape in a deferential way if the education system would be more comprehensive and creative. I mean, how can someone not find it intriguing that the education system develops more on its way to be immaculate. It would pique everybody’s curiosity how young people desirably helps out to change the world into a better place. Knowledge has the power for it.

In conclusion, it can be said that if someone comes up with compulsory first aid courses, it should be already associated in the school’s education system. Fourteen year old should be, at this degree, handle emergency situations and activate their human instincts to sacrifice themselves. 

hallo,

ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit und muss eine Summary schreiben, meine Frage ist, wie ich den Einleitungssatz schreiben könnte. Ich habe hier eine Vorlage, ich verstehe sie aber nicht ganz. Dort drin steht, „the extract…taken from the novel…was written by…“

und habt ihr ein Text den ich zum Üben nutzen könnte?

Heeeey, ich schriebe morgen ein Englischarbeit und wir sollen dann über einen Film einen Essay schreiben, ich habe heute mal geübt über den Film ,,die Eiskönigin" und och wollte mal nachfragen, ob das so okay ist, also ist das gut so?

(Bitte ignoriert einfach Rechtschreibfehler)

THE FROZEN SUMMER

The Film “Frozen” is an animated Disney Film released in 2013. The story revolves around sisters Elsa and Anna and Elsa was born with magical ice powers. She runs away and Anna wants to find her. The film is a very good film for the whole family because it has a lot of emotions and it wouldn’t be boring.

The Film is about two sisters Anna and Elsa and Elsa was born with magical powers, but she cant control them. So she runs away to the mountains to live alone, because she turns Arendell to an very long winter. Anna go together with Olaf the Snowman, Kristoff and his reindeer Sven to bring back the Summer. Bacause of Elsa Annas hair turns white and Sven brings her back to the castel to Prince Hans, because only true love can save her life. Olaf cames and do a fire, but Anna leave the castel to seek Kristoff. At the same Time Hans wanted to kill Elsa,because he want the castle for himself. But then Anna turns Into Ice and Elsa was very sad, so she hugs her sister Anna and then Anna returns to normal and Elsa can Controll her ice Powers.

My favourite Character is Olaf the Snowman. I like him because he’s a bit funny and he tells jokes at a difficult Situation. And I like him because he’s friendly and ready to help.

My favourite Scene is the Scene with Olaf and Anna next to the Fire. The Scene when Olaf was very happy because he saw Kristoff and Sven coming back to the Castle. I like it, because Olaf try to help Anna and he say she has to stay next to the fire to keep warm. And I like it, because Olaf is very happy when he saw Kristoff and Sven come back to the Castle.

My favourite Quote is ‘‘some People are worth melting for‘‘ from Olaf. I like it, because it‘s from Olaf and it shows that you like someone very much, if you would do this for someone. So it shows that you are ready to do something like that for someone.

The first lesson you can learn from the film is, that you shouldn’t trust anyone you’ve only know for one day, because it can be very dangerouse and you really don’t know the person very well. The second lesson is, you don’t have to give up, when you try something. When you really want to do something, then you dont have to give up very early.

The Film Frozen is a very good disney film for everyonen. It is very adenturous and also a bit sad. The film is definitely a film you should watch.

Könnte ich das in der Englischarbeit ungefähr auch so machen?

Ich hoffe jemand kann mir helfen, danke schonmal

:)

Hallo, wir sollen für den Englischunterricht ein comment schreiben über teenagerleben auf folgenden Satz bezogen:

You do not have to see the whole staircase just take the first step.

Ich möchte natürlich jetzt keine Lösung. Aber ich weiß nicht wie ich den Satz auf die Teenagerzeit beziehen soll. Also so mit Argumenten.

Hat jemand vielleicht ein Tipp?

Z.b.das:Born on June 24, 1987, Lionel Messi is a football star for FC Barcelona and also a

great guy. He's won the FIFA Ballon d'Or multiple times. Off the field, he started the

"Foundation Leo Messi" in 2007. This foundation helps kids with education and

healthcare around the world. Messi donates to causes like cancer research and

has been a UNICEF ambassador since 2010, speaking up for children's rights and

better education

Even though Messi does good things, some say that he doesn't do anything for

society. In my opinion, Messi is not just a football icon; he's like a real-life superhero

using his fame to make the world better.

Hallo

ich Bin in der 9. klasse und gehe auf eine real Schule

ich schreibe morgen eine englisch Arbeit, und muss wahrscheinlich auch ein Text über globale Erwärmung schreiben

wie ist dieser Text?

Was würdet ihr ändern? Ist er in Ordnung?

,,Global warming is the average temperature increasing all over the world over an extended period of time. But it doesn't mean it's happening equally all over the world.

The burning of fossil fuels, deforestation and animal husbandry are increasingly affecting the Earth's climate and temperature.

The amount of naturally occurring greenhouse gases in the atmosphere increases enormously, which intensifies the greenhouse effect and global warming.

You can also do something about global warming if you use bicycles and public transport instead of driving your own car or if you can choose to use electric cars because they have a better climate footprint.

You can also pay attention to which country your fruit and vegetables come from next time you go to the supermarket. It is best to try to buy fruit or vegetables that are locally sourced, as this way you can reduce the distance that the food needs to get to you.

Polar bears are also dying due to global warming as they have less and less habitat because the ice is melting.

Glaciers have been melting for more than 20 years. In addition, sea levels are rising, resulting in flooding.

In countries where it is very hot, forest fires occur, such as in Turkey.

Because of climate change, around 40% of all insects may become extinct.“

Bezogen auf diesen Text

"What do you think of the author's opinion how consumers (should) behave?Give reasons for your opinion."

Hey,

ich schreibe morgen eine englisch Klausur. Wenn diese eine 3 oder besser ist bekomme ich 500 Euro für meinen Führerschein. Die Aufgaben werden ungefähr so sein:

1. Summarize
2. analyzing
3. comment oder kreative Aufgabe

Außerdem wird es eine Mediation sein. Deutscher Text! Das Problem ist ich bin ein kompletter Anfänger in Englisch. Hat jemand Tipps wie ich morgen ne 3 raushaue :(?

Wir dürfen zwar ein Wörterbuch verwenden was aber nicht sehr viel hilft.

Hallo, ist jemand gut in Englisch? Könnt ihr bitte mein Blog comment verbessern falls ich Fehler habe. (schreibt die Sätze auf wo ich fehler habe und korrigiert bitte die Fehlern ) Danke!

Den Text habe ich selber geschrieben mit einem Text den wir bekommen haben.

Ich bin LKler, jedoch die schlechteste im Kurs :(....kann jemand mich korrigieren?

Many Americans are divided because they do not know whether the widening inequalitiy is a problem and they do not know the right solution for this problem.

The social immobility of America is doubtful and America should take more effort to ensure that the poor people who nevertheless work hard, get a chance to develop and to chance their lives and lead a better life.

America is compared to other countries on of the lowest countries with regard social mobility.

Children in the USA have a low chance of moving up into the top quintile.

The gap between rich and poor is growing.

To close this widening the politicans do not know how to deal with it.

Heyy Leute ich muss eine Erörterung schreiben und wollte fragen wie ihr sie findest.

die Aufgaben es geht um new Technologie und ich muss dazu eine Erörterung also ein comment schreiben

A life only with technology. But how would life be with only technology would everything be easier or even harder and would that be easier for the world?

Technology plays a big role in our lives but we don't realize what it does to us and the world.

People could become dependent on technology, we would no longer spend time with our family or enjoy nature in general. In addition, technology can make you lose your self-confidence because you only want to be like every pretty girl on social media. In addition, the replacement of work that was previously done by humans but will be done by robots in the future can cause even more people to become unemployed. But still there are many things that speak for it. It would be an improvement of medical research through the use of new technologies. In addition, it can lead to the fact that we humans have shortened working hours because the work could be taken over by robots.

I think that the new technology would be better for the world because it takes away a lot of work and it simplifies a lot of things.

Essay: Pet and Teenagers

Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Having a pet at a early age helps teenagers learn about responsibility and taking care of others. At the same time, it can help them learn to take care of themselves. Some teenagers though, should never have pets of their own if they can’t control themselves and have difficulty with empathy. Therefore: Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Teenagers mature at different rates. Some can handle the responsibility of caring for a pet already and others not. That’s why the age is for the parent to decide. If teenagers are animal-friendly, then cats make excellent pets. They can be playful and entertaining, especially if people adopt a kitten. They are also relatively easy to take care for: good quality food, clean water, a clean litter box, toys and interaction with their owners for affection.

As mentioned, owning a pet helps in the development of a teenager for example learning to take responsibility for another life and experience what it means if someone depends on them. A pet also helps teenagers learning to give attention even if they are not in the mood for it.

Despite of that, how can teenagers even cover the costs of keeping a pet? Well, pets are expensive but if teenagers have a pet, they can buy cheap food or cheap toys, if they want to cover their costs. Teenagers can also spend their pocket money more for their pet or can earn some money in holidays.

To conclude, I would say teenagers should keep a pet, if they are ready to take care of it. If they care for their pet, they return the love. A pet doesn't question what kind of job the kid’s parents have or how much money they make, etc. They would love their owners if they show affection to it.

"The Universe is Regular,stable and uniform to the extent that human life or any life exist within it." Also keine wortwörtliche übersetzung sondern was damit gemeint ist und ob es richtig ist

Welche Verben/Verknüpfungswörter könnte man in einer Mediation von Deutsch auf Englisch verwenden?

Denke an so etwas wie:

• Since, as, because, However, whilst, Nevertheless, anyway, therefore
• Besides, Moreover, In addition, apart from that,
• For instance,
• deal with, to be explained,
• Finally, First, Mainly,

vor allen Dingen fehlen mir Verben

Hallo, könnte mir jemand Verbesserungsvorschläge für diesen Comment im Bezug auf Soziale Medien geben?

Social networks are used by many people all over the world.

They use them to stay in touch with their friends or family, get information about what`s happening in other parts of the world or just to bore something away. However there are also many negatives aspect of social media. 4 instance people treat others very condescending Lee online social network are also used to haress and envy of others. First of all I social media is a marvellous option for humans to discover new possibilities for their future. One can find new attractions and places in the world which one would never have heard of. This can be exemplified by the aspect the many people I know seek for travel inspiration online to plan and elaborate potentially taken trips. In addition social media also encompasses text-based communication devices which are great to stay in contact with acquaintances who live far away. Nonetheless I assume the text-based communication is not an appropriate way to maintain a proper communication at all. Shown by many recent studies communication inevitably lead to a lack of creativity. Furthermore I want to emphasise that our eyes also suffer from all the screens in our daily life. On top of that I assert that those harsh consequences are palpable for almost everyone. Another significant aspect which has to be mentioned and is the effect that is especially young people experience procrastination while spending time on their phone. The main reason for this phenomenon the social media has addictive characteristics. Social media help you to spend more and more time there which becomes more visible if you have a look on a teenager screen time. As far as I can see those platforms pray for pension from young people to get funded. Moreover I`m searching that social media leads to an happiness because of the fact that humans always compare their life to other people. Additionally mostly young people are not capable to realise that almost nothing in the internet is genuine or authentic. As a result of this many teenagers are doubting themelfes which probably leads to cruel and grave mental health issues. In conclusion I can express that I remain unconvinced and truly believe that social media is the potential risks for underage person. Therefore we need an impeccable education to direct children through the Cyberspace. Education is crucial for the future because of the indispensability of social media nowadays. Michael Goulding video is that social media has many benefits however the drawbacks outweigh them. So I plead or I control the use of social media to avoid they downsides of social media.Danke

habt ihr irgendwelche richtig guten Tipps aus Erfahrung für mein Comment, damit die Lehrerin Pluspunkte gibt?

Ich brauch eine Rückmeldung zum inhalt und was man besser machen könnte undwelche Note ihr geben würdet ihr müsst nivht einzelne fehler verbessern mir ist der inhalt wichtiger.

Mir fallen nicht so viele Pro/Kontra Argumente ein. Was denkt Ihr?