(Würde natürlich nur Sinn machen, das Gedicht zu bewerten, wenn man der englischen Sprache mächtig ist.)
Welche Bewertung würdet ihr untenstehendem Gedicht geben (gerne in Schulnoten)? Was löst es bei euch aus? Welche Verbesserungsvorschläge hättet ihr?
FALL
When it feels like time is slipping out of my grip
And the mornings are scaringly cold
Warming from the inside is a big sip
Of my pumpkin latte with a taste so bold
Then I know my favorite season has come
Breathing into my scarf, I walk to work
When I walk home, I know I'll see the sun
But in the evening shadows, dark creatures lurk
I can feel them close as i prepare my ofrenda
Though when dawn breaks, they become slender
Crawling back into their caves.
I spend the morning outside
Watching the leaves turn curry
My soul spreads its wings wide
As the world turns a little blurry.