Was denkt ihr?
Hey Leute, ich habe eine kurze Geschichte geschrieben und wollte ein bisschen Feedback haben:
“Sometimes live’s hard. Sometimes you are alone and everything just feels wrong. You get up and search for the people you once cared about, but they’re gone. Because you left them. You pushed them out of your life. And they were sick of fighting for you. So, they left. And now you’re alone. So deeply and utterly alone. You go around and people avoid looking at you. Because they think you’re weird. And you can’t blame them. Because you think that too. You know they’re right because you daily have the same thoughts. Not good enough. Weirdo. Freak. And all those thoughts dig deeper into your brain until you fully believe them. Now you’re lost. Lost in your own maze of hatred and despise. You look into the mirror, and you see all your mistakes. Your eyes which are slightly too big. Your mouth, that is too wide. The circle of guilt and shame on your arms. You look away because you don’t want to see it anymore. You want to forget about all that. You want to vanish, but you don’t have that option. Live is hard but you still have to go through it. Because if you stop, you already lost. But fighting can be so exhausting especially when you don’t have that one person. That one person who picks you up and ushers you to keep walking. To not just lie down on the street and die. This person who is the star in your realm of darkness. So, you get up and you keep walking. Because you don’t want to disappoint that person. I lost that person a long time ago. And now, I’m alone. Completely and utterly alone.”
Wie findet ihrs?
