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Verse 1:

I'm breaking down, can't find my way,

It seems easier to fade away

My head's a mess, thoughts are haunting me so much more

The weight of life feels to heavy

The thought of happiness, I don't believe in anymore

Chorus:

I'm lost and alone, in the dark of night

I'm searching for a light, to guide me trough the fight.

I'm trying to be strong, but it's hard to pretend

That everything's okay, when it's far from the end

I need someone to help me find my way ( need someone)

I'm tired and alone, every single day

Vers 2:

It seems easier to go, but doubts remain

I'm stuck, there are people who count on me in vain

I'm fighting on, all alone

In the hope of freeing myself from all pain.

Chorus:

I'm lost and alone, in the dark of night

I'm searching for a light, to guide me trough the fight.

I'm trying to be strong, but it's hard to pretend

That everything's okay, when it's far from the end

I need someone to help me find my way ( need someone)

I'm tired and alone, every single day

Vers 3:

Running trough the nights, trying to survive

Don't want to give up my life

Racing trough the streets in the dark, no plan, just feeling the rain

Bridge:

I need someone to bring me back home

I feel so lost and alone

Mama, Papa, I'm sorry to say

I'm fighting against the pain, but it's hard to stay

Chorus:

I'm lost and alone, in the dark of night

I'm searching for a light, to guide me trough the fight.

I'm trying to be strong, but it's hard to pretend

That everything's okay, when it's far from the end

I need someone to help me find my way ( need someone)

I'm tired and alone, every single day

Outro:

The pain is strong, the darkness is true

I'm at the end, don't know what to do

I'm alone, I'm lost, I don't know how to find

Myself, my heart and my mind.

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Deutung und Bewertung dieser Parabel?

ich habe in deutsch selber eine parabel geschrieben. ich würde gerne wissen ob verständlich ist bzw was ihr denkt, welche gleichnishafte bedeutung diese hat und wie ihr sie findet:

Vier große Füße

Ein Elefant macht mit vier großen Füßen 70. 000 schwere Schritte am Tag. Ein Storch macht mit zwei kleinen Füßen 1000 leichte Schritte am Tag. Durch immer mehr Schritte sterben immer mehr kleine Tiere, werden immer mehr Pflanzen zertrampelt und immer mehr Schaden dem Boden zugefügt. Da trifft ein Elefant auf einen Storch und sagt: "Jeden Tag machst du immer mehr kaputt, du bist schuld, das unser Lebensraum kaputt geht. Du tötest jeden Tag Tiere und probierst nichts zu ändern. Du bist verantwortlich für den Schaden. Änder was, bevor alles kaputt ist. Der Storch geht zu den anderen Störchen und erklärt ihnen, was der Elefant gesagt hat. Während die Elefanten jeden Tag nun 100. 000 schwere Schritte gehen, gehen die Storche von nun an 800 leichte Schritte. Einen Monat später kommen mehreren Elefanten zu den Störchen. "Schaut euch um: Es hat sich nichts verändert, im Gegenteil. Alles um uns rum geht immer mehr kaputt. Ihr seid verantwortlich: Reduziert eure Schritte, tut etwas, sonst seid ihr Schuld wenn bald Alles platt ist." Die Elefanten gehen von nun an ihre 120. 000 schweren Schritte und die Störche 500 leichte. Da fragen sich die Störche: Warum ändert sich denn nichts! Wir geben doch unser Bestes!

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HALLO LEUTE HILFE DRINGEND SCHREIBE IN 8 Stunden Klausr....?

Das ist ein Text was ich so geschrieben hab.. Chat Gpt meinte, dass die Struktur sprunghaft ist und das Ausdruck sehr schlecht ist. Das sagt auch meine Lehrerin zu mir.. also wie kann ich genau meine Texte verbessern?

Hier ist ein Text von mir:

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The text, "Data for people: How to make our post-privacy economy work for us" written by Andreas Weigend talks about the role of technology in a typical day in the author's life. The author uses a lot of techniques like tone, mood and style to help convey his neutral attitude towards technology as well as help keep his audience engaged.

The author’s tone helps convey the authors neutral attitude towards technology. The clear lack of variety in how he describes his routine and how the digital systems help complete his daily tasks hint a neutral attitude. He doesn't necessarily use direct adjectives that might connote a liking towards technology or adjectives with negative connotations. However, there are exceptions for example in line 21 he seems quite annoyed with the traffic system. The phrase, "again and again" shows his annoyance and his feelings of being irritated. Similarly phrases like in an instant" in line 31 show his satisfaction with technology and digital systems. At times the author gives reference to his criticism on technology discretely, for example the last line " Welcome to the digital revolution" sounds ironic. The tone also affects the mood evoked.

 The mood evoked by the text is also neutral. The author doesn’t necessarily refer to obvious wins that were possible through technology. However we  we read his experience with technology, we do get the feeling that technology can impact life positively when used in the right way. This is particularly evoked by words like "in an instant" in line 31 which also highlights how advanced technology has become. The phrase "eager to start the day" particularly gives the effect of technology easing one's duties which in turn results in the raising of one's spirits. Phrases like "again and again" highlights the drawback of technology and makes some digital systems seem like a discomfort. Such references make allows room for the assumption, that the author might share a positive attitude in technology. While the mood was mainly affected by the tone of the text, the style of the author helped keep the audience hooked to the text.

The author's style also helps keep the reader engaged and helps convey the author's attitude towards technology effectively. The author's use of hyphens helps contrast the general opinion from the author's experience. This gives the test clarity and helps the attitude understandable for the reader.

The author's structure also helps convey the overall attitude. The logical division of paragraphs in time-stamps helps the reader get a better understanding of the author’s neutral mindset and stay intact. While the structure played a massive role in engaging the reader, the informal register also helps alleviate the significance of the author’s stance.

 The register is informal, since the author mainly uses the personal pronoun, ,,I" which also helps with the message coming across, etc. Furthermore, the author also uses contractions like, "I'm" in line 20 and "Ill" in line 38. All this makes text feel like a conversation between the author and the reader, ultimately making it engaging.

All in all the author's neutral tone and the hopeful mood evoked by the text made technology feel promising when used effectively, etc.  The lack of variation in word choice made the text seem a bit blunt, but the unique structure and the hyphens etc. made the text attractive and clearer.

 

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