Eure Meinung?

Verse 1:

I'm breaking down, can't find my way,

It seems easier to fade away

My head's a mess, thoughts are haunting me so much more

The weight of life feels to heavy

The thought of happiness, I don't believe in anymore

Chorus:

I'm lost and alone, in the dark of night

I'm searching for a light, to guide me trough the fight.

I'm trying to be strong, but it's hard to pretend

That everything's okay, when it's far from the end

I need someone to help me find my way ( need someone)

I'm tired and alone, every single day

Vers 2:

It seems easier to go, but doubts remain

I'm stuck, there are people who count on me in vain

I'm fighting on, all alone

In the hope of freeing myself from all pain.

Chorus:

I'm lost and alone, in the dark of night

I'm searching for a light, to guide me trough the fight.

I'm trying to be strong, but it's hard to pretend

That everything's okay, when it's far from the end

I need someone to help me find my way ( need someone)

I'm tired and alone, every single day

Vers 3:

Running trough the nights, trying to survive

Don't want to give up my life

Racing trough the streets in the dark, no plan, just feeling the rain

Bridge:

I need someone to bring me back home

I feel so lost and alone

Mama, Papa, I'm sorry to say

I'm fighting against the pain, but it's hard to stay

Chorus:

I'm lost and alone, in the dark of night

I'm searching for a light, to guide me trough the fight.

I'm trying to be strong, but it's hard to pretend

That everything's okay, when it's far from the end

I need someone to help me find my way ( need someone)

I'm tired and alone, every single day

Outro:

The pain is strong, the darkness is true

I'm at the end, don't know what to do

I'm alone, I'm lost, I don't know how to find

Myself, my heart and my mind.

Answer 1

[AstridDerPu]

Hallo,

bitte korrigiere:

• to heavy
• trough the fight (2 x)
• trough the nights (2 x)
• Racing trough the streets

Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen. Es gibt noch die ein oder andere Stelle, die m. E. nicht ganz astrein ist, aber als künstlerische Freiheit durchgeht.

AstridDerPu

Comments

[AstridDerPu]

Vielen Dank für das Sternchen.☺️

[Pineapple3456]

Vielen Dank!

[AstridDerPu]

@Pineapple3456

Gern geschehen.☺️