Grammatik – die besten Beiträge

Dear Mr. Hackman,

Since you know that I have trouble and I am not comfortable with face-to-face consultations to talk more about my social anxiety, I am writing you this letter for understanding me better:

Social anxiety was always one of my biggest problems. In public places, I always feel that people are watching me, judging me based on my looks, dressing sense and behaviour and I really suffer from this experience every single day. I also prefer to live alone, avoid conversations with guests and relatives, don’t go outside without a reason and I am also not interested in parties, family gatherings, etc. So, I have a big issue concerned with meeting a crowd of people. Most people especially my parents cannot understand my condition. That’s why silence and solitude are my comfort zone.

I don’t even know how I got social anxiety. As far as I can remember I always had it. I remember in preschool, I wanted my mom and would cry the whole time I was there until she came back to pick me up hours later. I went to my general practitioner and I was prescribed medicine for my anxiety but I never wanted to take it because I felt it would change me. So instead I did other things such as learning to be confident, being more kind to myself for making mistakes and challenging negative thoughts but all of this didn’t work.

How can I get rid of this social anxiety? I really tried everything I could but I am still struggling. I hope you can give me some advice.

Yours sincerely,

Amici templum deorum viderant et dona in templum celeriter portaverant, itaque patres pueros laudaverunt.

Die Freunde hatten den Tempel der Götter gesehen und hatten schnell Geschenke in den Tempel getragen, deshalb lobten die Väter die Jungen.

Rechtlich gesehen beruht die Abfalltrennung auf der/die Gewerbeabfallverordnung (§ 3 Abs.1 GewAbfV) 

"Non, je n´aime pas du tout les animaux".

Müsste es nicht heißen:

"Non, je n´aime pas du toutes les animeaux"

Weil "les animeaux" ist ja im Plural.

Hey, kann man eigentlich aussuchen, wann vor ,,und“ ein Komma kommt?

BEISPIEL

Ich kaufe Brot und Käse.

Ich kaufe Brot mit meinem besten Freund, und später werde ich in die Schule fahren.

Die Frage ist oben gestellt und ich habe an mit Sternchen markiert, muss eigentlich nicht statt an, am kommen?

Während die Fahrgäste der Tram unverletzt blieben, erlitten die Honda-Fahrerin und ihr 78-jähriger Beifahrer einen Schock sowie Verletzungen *an*Oberkörper und Kopf.

Ich würde gerne wissen, in wie weit ich die Begriffe synonym & in Kombination verwenden kann, oder ob sich etwas an der Bedeutung ändert.

1. She acted as if she were the most important person in the room

2. She behaved as if she were the most important person in the room

3. She acted as though she were the most important person in the room

4. She behaved as though she were the most important person in the room

Prinzipiell bedeuten diese 4 Sätze doch das gleiche, oder?

Für welchen Satz würdet ihr euch entscheiden und warum?

Danke :)

Hallo

Welcher Satz ist hier besser zu verwenden? mit Erklärung

"Dieser Beweis wurde durch die Vernunft bewiesen"

"Dieser Beweis ist mit der Vernunft bewiesen"

Danke

Welche Begriff nutzt du?

Hallo, wenn man beispielsweise sagt ,,Du hast im doch geholfen(,) oder nicht?“ setzt man dann vor das ,,oder nicht“ ein Komma oder nicht? Oder kann man eins setzten?

Hallo , :)

Ich schreibe in weniger als einen Monat meine Klausur in Englisch Lk (Abi). Da gehen im ersten Prüfungsteil tatsächlich nur 42 P. auf den Inhalt und 63 P. alleine auf die Sprache. Kann mir bitte jmd. daher diesen Text korrigieren. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar. <3

 1.) Describe Job´s living conditions in London/England

The text excerpt ,,Hearts and Minds“ by Amanda Craig gives us a glimpse of Jobs life and feelings as an illegal immigrant from Zimbabwe in London. In it Job leads a small talk with Polly Noble, a human rights lawyer who helps illegal immigrants to try to get a residence permit, and the mother of Robbie, whom Job drives to and from school to earn some extra money next to working as a mini-cab driver in London . But more so the excerpt describes Jobs living conditions, which I will describe in the following.

The excerpt starts off by telling us that Job is in a better financial situation as before, since he has been driving Robbie to school and picking him up later on. Job lives without his wife, who is left in Zimbabwe and whom he misses. Job lives in better materialistic condition then he did in Zimbabwe. So we can derive from the excerpt as he is surprised to see how much people in Britain own in a materialistic sense as he sees them throwing out a TV just because it is not new enough. This is how he got to own his TV anyway. Job is also surprised when he comes across free things like museums or the ability to access books for very cheap through charity shops or second hand books. In the last quarter of the excerpt we get to know of Jobs disappointment as his image of London was different then what he saw upon actually living there. He imagined London to be full of kindness and courage like he had thought it to be through Charles Dickens narrations. Unfortunately the violence he read about was something that he did come across in the area he lives in. The last two sentences start off by describing what home now means to Job. A small room with only a sink to drink and even wash from. Hearing Police sirens and traffic noise. As well as humidity in the place that reeks of urine, beer, sour milk and cinders. The excerpt finishes off by saying that immigrants don´t need a reminder of what they have lost.  

Liebe Grüße <3

Hey Leute, sind die Sätze richtig gebildet😅?

Falls ihr wissen wollt um was es geht😊

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sQuM5e0QGLg

LG

Hiii, bitte kontrolliert mein Text, bitte Korrigiert die Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler bittee dirngendd:???

Welcome to my presentation. Today I'm talking about the self-employed entrepreneur.

I would like to be a self-employed entrepreneur because self-employment ends unemployment, it achieved a higher income. You can make time independent and you get the previous social environment can leave.

The independent entrepreneur makes his own business decisions. He is responsible for everything in the company. He bears the financial risk.

 I am well suited for this job because I am a team player, creative, flexible and responsible.

 I am motivated to become an independent entrepreneur because I want to be my own boss and develop and implement my own ideas and concepts.

 To start my own I would see what kind of “company” it is, then I would find the right legal form. I would go further, find a suitable company name. Then I would look how much money I have and create a business plan.

 My future hopes when I have my own company are that my company will be known worldwide, that I have a lot of employees, that I have a turnover of 5 million euros and that I can sell many products. My fears are that I will go broke and that I will not be known.

I'm also afraid that I don't produce a lot of products and that I don't have nice employees.

 The qualifications are ambition, willingness to work, willingness to take risks, Resilience, Creativity, Sense of responsibility, required.

 The advantages of being independent are that you can determine yourself, you can realize yourself, you have more freedom, you have no conflicts with superiors. Furthermore, you have higher work motivation because you work for yourself. The chance to live out your own calling. The chance to make more money than an employee.

 The disadvantage of independent is that You work an above-average amount of work. If the order situation is bad, there is no regular salary. You take a higher financial risk, depending on the type of business.

Bitte hilft mir Leute dringendd??

Hallo!

Wenn man ... verwendet als Pause zum Sprechen in einem Text, wie wird dann das Leerzeichen gesetzt?

Ich war…nicht schnell genug.

oder

Ich war … nicht schnell genug.

Bin unschlüssig, als was das gilt, schließlich lasse ich weder ganze Wörter weg, unterbreche den Satz, aber ich lass auch keine Buchstaben weg, unterbreche ein Wort.

Grüße

Das Buch „ Der Kameramörder „ wurde von Thomas Glavinic geschrieben und ist im Jahr 2001 erschienen. Die Geschichte handelt von einem Paar, die  ihre Freunde in den Osterferien  in der Weststeiermark besucht.  In den Medien wird über einen Doppelmord an zwei Kinder berichtet, den der Mörder mit einer Kamera aufgenommen  und Sie dazu genötigt hat sich selbst umzubringen. Während die „ Paare sich unterhalten wird in ihrer Nähe nach dem Mörder gefahndet und zum Schluss kommt die Polizei der Spur näher und es stellt sich heraus, dass es der Ich Erzähler ist, der die Kinder ermordet hat. 

Hey,

Ich hab mal eine Frage und zwar welcher Satz wäre grammatikalisch (Mit eux oder leur) gesehen richtiger:

1. Puis, on doit s‘occuper des malades et donner les médicaments à eux.
2. Puis, on doit s‘occuper des malades et leur donner les médicaments.

Würde überhaupt einer davon stimmen oder sind beide falsch? Ich will halt sagen dass man sich um Kranke kümmern und ihnen Medikamente geben muss.

In the poem ‚,The Schoolboy‘‘ by William Blake, you get a clear message that the schoolboy doesn’t enjoy the school and its system at all, so the question that arises is ,,What could school do, to be more enjoyable for the schoolboy and students like me?‘‘

First of all many students have to wake up early in the morning, which isn’t a perfect start into the day. Furthermore they mostly can’t enjoy the morning even if they like to stand up early, because they must get finished quickly for school. To counteract this problem, it would be a good start to begin with school less early and to approach the day more calmly. So to remove the effect of a prison it’s important to produce a more peaceful environment for everyone, to make the classrooms more comfortable and even integrate some outdoors schoollessons in spring and summer, so that the pupils have more joy in learning and are able to concentrate more because of the fresh air and the nature. Last but not least we schoolboys anf schoolgirls should be allowed to have more own thoughts and to be able to control them and not just being forced to memorize things, which won’t be even important for our adulthood. 

I also think that the last point which is beinh made here, is a fact which the author want to draw attention to, because it’s a mostly international problem that should has to change as we are not robots.

(Also mit dem letzten Teil bin ich eher unzufrieden weil so oft which drankommt)

Satz von mir: The Hallmark Channel pivoted on their stance, regarding the lesbians' kiss, in the advert.

Kontext: Aktuelle Presse, in den USA.

Weiss gar nicht, ob es Hallmark Channel in Deutschland gibt. Tippe auf: Ja.

Versuch: Hat einen Rückzieher gemacht?

Hallo, woher kommt bei Verben wie z.B "desierunt" dass "i" her, dies ist ja nicht im Stamm, und auch bei "fugiebamus" ist es auch so. Was muss ich dazu wissen?