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Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob mal jemand über meinen Text drüber schauen könnte. Wäre echt sehr lieb, danke!

,,My parents come from Kazakhstan and my mother came to Germany when she was 12 years old. My father came to Germany when he was 15 years old. They were forced to leave their home country by their parents because they wanted to start a new life and they were only teenagers, so they weren‘t allowed to decide whether they would stay in Kazakhstan or go to Germany. I was born in Germany and I can‘t speak Russian. I really like Germany because of the people but if I had to leave Germany, I would definitely go to Spain since it is a very interesting, warm and gorgeous country. I can‘t stand cold days, so it would be a perfect country for me. There are several beaches and unique sights such as the castle in Madrid. But nevertheless, a war or bad government would have to happen so that I would leave Germany because then it would be really bad to live in Germany as you wouldn‘t be treated well. But if I really had enough money, I would try to immigrate to Spain. I would hope that the people would be friendly to me and understand that I wouldn‘t be able to speak their language at first but I even think that I wouldn‘t be able to speak Spanish fluently even if I learned it for several years because it is a difficult language. I would also hope that the life would be great there and I would make new friends. I think I would also have a lot of problems for example missing my family and my friends and I would have problems with speaking their language. I would be afraid of talking to them since perhaps they would make fun of me or would talk to me in an unfriendly way. It would be a complete change for me and I would have to get used to new habits for example going to another school. On the other hand, it would be great to experience new adventures and explore new locations. You could go to a beach every day! So, on the one hand, I would really like to go to Spain but on the other hand, I would be really afraid of leaving my home country because of the problems that could "destroy“ my life. I am not sure whether I stay here in Germany or go to an other country.“

Könnte jemand eventuell bitte über meinen Text über Deutschland drüber schauen? Danke!

,,Germany is the most populated country in Europe. The population is about 84 million and it is in Central Europe. The capital of Germany is Berlin. Germany is a popular and interesting country because of its history. The second world war was begun by Germany by fighting with Poland. Adolf Hitler was like a president and he thought that Germany would be the best country ever. He killed a lot of people who lived in Germany but actually were from an other country. But suddenly on 30th of April 1945, he killed himself in Berlin. On 9th of May the war was finished and Europe was called "the United States of Europe". That is the reason why Europe has become peaceful. In 1961 a wall which was called Berlin wall was built to separate East and West Germany because the East Germans weren‘t allowed to flee into West Germany. But in 1990, the wall was destroyed and Germany has become a united nation since then. As you can see, the history of Germany was very interesting. German is also known for its special "meals“ such as beer, "Bretzel“, sauerkraut, and ,,Currywurst“ which is a special type of a sausage. Germany has the advantage that people come to Germany from all over the world and they are treated well. Most people come from Turkey, Russia, Kazakhstan and Poland. There are a lot of sights in Germany since Germany consists of 16 federal states. German corner is in Koblenz and there‘s a statue of William, the first German emperor, and it is very gorgeous there. You can explore the natural location there and just relax. Another famous sight is the Cologne cathedral which is a gorgeous catholic church. In my opinion some people could be much friendlier as they sometimes stare at you or talk to you in an unfriendly way. But of course there are also very kind people."

Könnte mal jemand eventuell bitte über meine Zusammenfassung über die Geschichte von Annie Moore drüber schauen? Danke!
,,The story is about Annie Moore who was the First immigrant on Ellis Island. Annie and her two younger brothers are in Ireland in 1891 and they want to board a ship which brings them to New York since their parents and their older brother are there. Annie is very sad because she thinks that she won‘t ever see the beautiful things such as the Emerald Isle again but on the other hand she is happy to see her family again. Her parents had to emigrate because of the potato famine in Ireland in 1845. It is very hard to live on the ship as it is crowd, cold and the food is poor but on January 1st, 1892 the ship reaches New York and Annie is the first person who leaves the ship and arrives on Ellis Island. She even gets $10 as a reward to be the first person on Ellis Island and she had never got so much money before. That‘s the reason why she is so happy. Now, there‘s a statue of Annie on Ellis Island.“

Wenn man eine Zusammenfassung schreiben soll und da dann in der Geschichte im Past Perfect etwas erzählt wird, wie sollte ich es dann im Simple Present schreiben?
Beispiel: ,,They had gone to America two years earlier with her brothers and that‘s why she was very sad“

Wann nutze ich was?

Was nutze ich zum Beispiel bei diesen Sätzen?:

There´s a new skate park in town and I ……… (practise) some cool tricks.

In the first week of the holidays my cousin from Wellington ……… (stay) with me.

..the police told him that he had found his bicycle while he was looking/had been looking for it.. Kommt da nicht eigentlich had been looking hin, da das Past Progressive ins Past Perfect Progressive umgewandelt wird oder irre ich mich da?

in den Lösungen steht ,,She was golfing in southern France a few weeks ago“. Wieso? Ich würde eher sagen Simple Past, weil es bereits abgeschlossen ist

Ist es schlimm in einer englisch charakterisierung bei den gründen im simple past zu schreiben? Ich habe nicht überall im simple past geschrieben. Nur nach because

Kann mir jemand bitte erklären was damit gemeint ist und was aus diesem Wasserhahn rauskommt?:

,,I had missed the bus, so I came by car.“

oder

,,I missed the bus, so I came by car“?

Ich würde eher sagen Past Perfect, oder? Es ist ja davor passiert.

,,Where had you been when your teacher got killed“? Warum soll da das Past Perfect hin, wenn es sich um Gleichzeitigkeit handelt?

Was ist der Unterschied zwischen ,,I will never fly again“ und ,,I am never going to fly again“?

,,She always goes out. Now, why hadn‘t he thought/didn’t he think of that before?“ Ich würde das Past Perfect nehmen. Was meint ihr?

Ich mah gerade eine Übersicht über verschiene Zeitformen im Englischen und da wollte ich jetzt den Satz:

The past perfect tense(Subjekt) have(have/has) finished(past participle).

schreiben. ChatGPT sagt allerding das es

The past perfect tense had finished.

heißt. Sagt aber auch das es mit have/has und so gebildet wird ich blicke nicht merh durch habe ich jetzt recht oder ChatGPT, da ChatGPT ja auch zum Beispiel sagt:

I have visited Paris.

Und hier ist es ja auch mit have/has und dann erst das past participle.

DANKE für schnelle Antwort. <3

Bei dem Satz: ,,Während er den Zettel anstarrte, überlegte der Fremde, wie er aus der Bar fliehen könnte.“ Wäre dann ,,While he was staring at the piece of paper, the stranger was thinking how he could escape the bar" richtig oder müsste man das ,,was thinking“ zu ,,thought“ machen? Bitte mit Begründung.

Habe grade ,,for he who has understood“ gelesen, also als ,,für denjenigen“. Kann man das so übersetzen und wann benutzt man es?

ist das umgangssprachlich?

Love ist ja ein Stative verb. Wenn der Satz heißen soll ,,Ich liebe Puzzle nicht" und man müsste es in der Present Progressive Form machen, dann würde es doch trotzdem heißen ,,I don‘t love jigsaws" oder irre ich mich da?

Bei dem Satz ,,After we had met, we ate ice cream“ wäre die Verneinung dann ,,After we had met, we didn‘t eat ice cream“ oder gäbe es noch andere Möglichkeiten?

ist die Summary gut?

Und ich hätte noch eine frage, Wie schreibe ich die Analyse? ich verstehe es nicht

It’s lucky our village is so close to the fence. if it _____(be) further away, we _______(not be able to) find our way back

Hallo kann mir bitte jemand erklären woran ich das erkenne und wie ich das bilde ? Am besten heute , schreibe morgen englisch . Danke im vorraus