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show me what your seeking

kann ich auch das r weg nemen dass es so heisst: show me what you seeking.

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt (reported speech)
,,She asked me if I liked it and said that the teachers had told her that I was doing an amazing job“

Ist der Satz grammatikalisch korrekt? ,,It depends on how the weather will be.“

Als ihr in der Schule wart und vielleicht mal Hausaufgaben vergessen habt, ihr es verheimlicht habt , aber trotzdem dran kamt vom Lehrer. Habt ihr dann in Deutsch zb. einfach paar Zeilen improvisiert??😂😂

Als wir im Unterricht anfangen durften mit den Hausaufgaben , es dann Zuhause fertig machen sollten, habe ich es manchmal vergessen/ nicht gemacht und dann eben etwas improvisiert. Zum Glück erfolgreich😅

Habt ihr das im der Schulzeit auch einige Male gemacht und wart ihr erfolgreich oder seid ihr aufgeflogen?

Könnt gerne auch lustige Erfahrungen mitteilen.

Auf die Frage "How are you" antwortet man ja üblicherweise mit "I'm fine, thanks" aber es geht ja auch mit I'm well/good aber was von beidem wäre denn grammatikalisch korrekt?

Guten Tag,

ich habe vor ein work and holiday jahr in Japan zu verbringen,
Dafür benötige ich allerdings eine motivation Letter, welche auf Englisch geschrieben werden soll.

Da mein Englisch jetzt nicht wirklich das beste ist wollte ich einfach mal fragen ob ihr denkt, das mein Text aktzeptabel ist oder ich ihn doch lieber neu schreiben sollte.

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am Max Mustermann, and I just graduated from high school.

In the following, im going to describe how and why the idea of applying for a working holiday visa in Japan came to mind.

The first bond with Japan was tied way back when I was a little boy who enjoyed watching Dragonball on the TV. Since then, a lot has changed, but my fascination for the country has stayed the same.

I started dreaming about going on vacation there, which sadly couldt be fulfilled, due to several reasons. Now that my schooldays have come to an end, I started questioning what to do after. Soon the idea of traveling to Japan consolidated, and I wanted to absolve a year of work and travel.

After learning more about the traditions, gods, and spirits that can be found throughout the whole country my interest was caught. I want to experience first hand what its like to go to a shrine or learning from monks and priests, what inner peace realy means.

Of course, I also heard about Japan’s hospitality, kindness, and patience. It astonishes me that a whole country can have a reputation that good, so much that I want to spend the whole next year there.

I plan to explore a lot of different sides of Japan. A few destinations are for example, Tokyo, Kyoto, Nara, Uji and Shimoda.

Furthermore, it is about being interested in Japans daily life, work, food, history, and what similarities and differences there are compared to Germany and the whole country itself.

I hope to improve my Japanese and learn a lot of interesting things in/about Japan.

Thanks for taking your time.

Kind regards,

MAx Mustermann

Ich muss über die Ferien noch einen Aufsatz für schwimmen schreiben. Wir sollen Argumente für und gegen den schwimm Unterricht in der 8. Klasse finden und darüber eine DIN A4 Seite schreiben. Mir fehlt noch ca 1/4 bis ich fertig bin und mir fällt nichts mehr ein hab nur so : gutes Training, blöd wegen Periode, in badekleidung fühlen sich manche unwohl usw. Habt ihr noch andere Ideen?

Hallo!
Wann benutzt man would, abgesehen vom Konjunktiv? Zum Beispiel im Satz: For each album, he would write several songs.

Also would in der Vergangenheit.

Danke :-)

Yabetta, mate! Grab a snag and a bevvy, just a standard for ya and all profits go to charity, for the kids and their footy, gotcha?!

Was heißt in diesem Kontext "Yabetta"? Hab das noch nie gehört. Wenn das mein English-Professor sähe, der kriegt nen Herzstillstand.. 😂

Take:-

SB/STH for granted

my arms around her

my advice

offence

ages

part

place

no notice

a risk

Put:-

somebody in charge of

pressure on sb

criticism

a plan into practice

his work first 

Hallo, könnte sich jemand bitte meinen Text anschauen (vor allem Grammatik). Vorab will ich sagen, dass es um einen Tag in einem Bildungszentrum geht.

When we arrived there on the second day, we had to go to our maintenance groups immediately. On that day, there was another specialist, so we had to introduce ourselves to her. After introducing, we got two sheets of paper. On the first one, there was only an eye and on the second one, there was a whole face. She said we had to paint makeup on both the eye and the face. In my opinion, my pictures were very ugly and it was very difficult for me because I can‘t draw well and I have never worn makeup before. After that, we grabbed our hairdressing heads which still had curlers in their hair and we had to remove them. They needed to be left in their hair overnight so that a volume winding would form. Luckily, it worked! Then we had to create our own hairstyle on our hairdressing head. The specialist said my hairstyle was pretty good. Then we could style and wash each other‘s hair again and X wanted to try  volume winding again as it didn‘t work on the previous day. On that day, it definitely worked better but she had to dry her hair with a hair dryer for about one hour because her hair was still too wet to remove the curlers from her hair. I was so sorry for her. Finally, she did it after one hour and her hair looked gorgeous, so in my opinion it was worth it. In the last 50 minutes, we could wear makeup but of course I didn‘t want, so I observed my classmates again. On the one hand, I think I could work as a hairdresser in future because it‘s interesting what customers tell you while I‘m styling their hair and it‘s also interesting to try out different hairstyles but on the other hand, this job doesn‘t match to me  because I‘m scared of doing mistakes because for example I could cut off a customer‘s hair and I don‘t want to touch stranger‘s hair. 

wie könnte man diesen Satz " the Vikings, known for their seafaring and raiding skills" auch anders schreiben?

Hallo,

welcher von den beiden folgenden Sätzen zur Analyse eines Zeitungsartikels wäre korrekt:

1. The author makes use of framing here.
2. The author frames his article through…

Lg

Ich muss für die Schule einen Aufsatz in Englisch schreiben. Man soll über das Leben in Kalifornien und eine abenteuerliche Urlaubsreise nach Kalifornien berichten. Ich habe keine Ahnung was ich schreiben soll, kann mir bitte jemand helfen? Danke im Voraus!💕

I don't think people understand how observant I am, like I'm really not dumb, I see everything.

Übersetzt: Ich glaube nicht, dass die Leute verstehen, wie aufmerksam ich bin, als wäre ich wirklich nicht dumm, ich sehe alles.

Was heißt "The situation surpasses me."?

Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏