Guten Abend zusammen,
ich hab gerade eine backstory zu einer Geschichte geschrieben und wollte euch daher fragen, wo es Fehler gibt.
Vielen Dank schon mal :)
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On a sunday morning Laura Miller wokes up suddenly because she got a phone call. ,,Hey Laura I‘m Michael your father“ Laura was shocked. She has never heard of her father since she was alive. Laura answered him:,, I don't believe you what do you want?“ ,,I'm so sorry for everything could we please meet in a restaurant tomorrow evening and I'll explain everything to you?“ Laura was still shocked but she agreed because she wanted to know who her father is or if it was just a joke. Next day after work she went to the restaurant and sat down at a table. Then Michael approched, he looked like in the pictures that Lauras mother had shown her. He sat down and smiled. ,,Wow what a beautiful daughter I have, let's order two glasses of wine first.“ But Laura was mad and asked:,, Why do you suddenly appear after 20 years and act like a nice father?“ ,,Laura I know you are very angry, but I had my reasons for that.“ Michael answered. The waiter came and served two glasses of wine. ,,So tell me the reasons“ Laura said. Her father took a deep breath:,, I was in jail for 20 years because i wanted to rob a bank to finance you and your mother.“