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Übersetzung "De Bello Gallico" Korrektur?

Guten Mittag,
ich habe ein Teil des Textes aus Caesars "De Bello Gallico" Buch IV 23 übersetzt und habe es mit anderen Übersetzungen aus dem Internet verglichen. Dabei waren jedoch so viele Unterschiede zwischen meiner Übersetzung und den Ergebnissen, sodass ich mich wundere was ich denn alles nicht beachtet habe. Ich würde mich über Hilfe sehr freuen.

Text:
His constitutis rebus nactus idoneam ad navigandum tempestatem tertia fere vigilia naves solvit equitesque in ulteriorem portum progredi et naves conscendere et se sequi iussit. 
a quibus cum paulo tardius esset administratum, ipse hora diei circiter quarta cum primis navibus Britanniam attigit atque ibi in omnibus collibus expositas hostium copias armatas conspexit.
cuius loci haec erat natura atque ita montibus angustis mare continebatur, uti ex locis superioribus in litus telum adigi posset. 
hunc ad egrediendum nequaquam idoneum locum arbitratus, dum reliquae naves eo convenirent, ad horam nonam in ancoris exspectavit.

Übersetzung:
Nachdem diese Angelegenheiten beschlossen worden waren, segelte er die Schiffe ab, um zu einem geeigneten Zeitpunkt durchzufahren und den dritten Wachposten fast zu erreichen, und er befahl, dass die Reiter im entfernteren Hafen vorrückten, die Schiffe befuhren und ihn folgten.
Als er von denen ein weniger langsamer geleitet wurde, erreichte er selbst mit den ersten Schiffen ungefähr an der vierten Stunde des Tages Britannien und erblickte dort bei allen Hügeln die bewaffnet aufgestellten Truppen der Feinde.
Dessen Ort befindet sich bei dieser Natur und auch das Meer grenzt die engen Berge so ein, dass aus weiter oberen Gegenden die Waffe zu der Küste hineingetrieben werden konnte.
Um zu diesen vorzurücken hielt er den Ort keineswegs für geeignet und bis die übrigen Schiffe dort zusammenkommen, wartete er an der neunten Stunde bei den Ankern.

Vielen Dank im Voraus
LG

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Englisch?

Könnte jemand bitte über meinen Text drüber schauen? Danke!

,,I have been living in xy with my family, so my mother, my father, my sister, and two pets since 2015. On the one hand, I like living here since it is a quiet place but on the other hand, I don‘t like living here because of the people. Some of them are just mean. Above all, it‘s sometimes hard to get to school because I go to school by taking two buses. The first one arrives here at 6:40 a.m, so I need to leave the house at 6:28 a.m. That means I have to get up at 5:40 a.m. to brush my teeth and change clothes. The second one arrives in x at 6:55 a.m. If the first bus doesn‘t arrive punctually, I miss the other bus and that means I would have to wait in x until someone of my family would pick me up. That happened one day. I was very stressed. I had been waiting for about 30 minutes until my father picked me up. He arrived after 30 minutes because he had been at his job before, so it was a stressful day for everyone. I normally arrive at school at 7:15 a.m. and as soon as I arrive there, I either talk to Jana and Melinda or if we write a class test on that day, I repeat the stuff that I studied the day before. I always try to do my best. After school, I always have lunch with my family. I always talk a lot and tell my parents about everything. After eating, I always study for tests and class tests which we are going to write soon or I simply prepare something for school like today. At 5:30 p.m. I always have a bath and after bathing, I go on with studying until 9 or 10 p.m. I really want to have a job which I really like. I still don‘t know what I want to work as in future. Some people say that I would be a very good teacher, scientist, lawyer or a doctor. At the weekend, I occasionally sleep until 11 a.m and then I eat "breakfast“. When there‘s nothing to do, we go to z to go for a walk along the xy. We have been going for a walk there for four years yet it is still not boring! Apart from that, I just relax. As you can see, my life isn‘t very unique right now but I like it! Before I came to this school, I had been at school in y. I came here in the middle of 6th grade. I always had to stay here until 3:30 p.m. because I was in class b (Also Klasse 6b). I hated going to school there because of the students and teachers. Most of them were extremely mean. That‘s the reason why I came to this school in 2022. In the Corona lockdown, so when I was in fifth grade I didn‘t really care about school and I played Roblox, an online game. I made a lot of online friends, so I played with them every time when I was able to. At the beginning of 6th grade, I started caring about school and I only had to stay at school until 1 p.m. because I was allowed to leave school earlier because of the circumstances. I also talked a lot back then but I didn‘t really study because I was interested in playing Roblox. So, my life hasn‘t really changed except my school life but I think it will change in the coming years. Next year I will be in xth grade and I still can‘t believe it because time flies so fast and I think my daily routine will change completely since we will have to go to an internship every Thursday and we will have to stay longer at school on Tuesdays, so it is going to be very stressful.

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