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Hallo , :)

Ich schreibe in weniger als einen Monat meine Klausur in Englisch Lk (Abi). Da gehen im ersten Prüfungsteil tatsächlich nur 42 P. auf den Inhalt und 63 P. alleine auf die Sprache. Kann mir bitte jmd. daher diesen Text korrigieren. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar. <3

 1.) Describe Job´s living conditions in London/England

The text excerpt ,,Hearts and Minds“ by Amanda Craig gives us a glimpse of Jobs life and feelings as an illegal immigrant from Zimbabwe in London. In it Job leads a small talk with Polly Noble, a human rights lawyer who helps illegal immigrants to try to get a residence permit, and the mother of Robbie, whom Job drives to and from school to earn some extra money next to working as a mini-cab driver in London . But more so the excerpt describes Jobs living conditions, which I will describe in the following.

The excerpt starts off by telling us that Job is in a better financial situation as before, since he has been driving Robbie to school and picking him up later on. Job lives without his wife, who is left in Zimbabwe and whom he misses. Job lives in better materialistic condition then he did in Zimbabwe. So we can derive from the excerpt as he is surprised to see how much people in Britain own in a materialistic sense as he sees them throwing out a TV just because it is not new enough. This is how he got to own his TV anyway. Job is also surprised when he comes across free things like museums or the ability to access books for very cheap through charity shops or second hand books. In the last quarter of the excerpt we get to know of Jobs disappointment as his image of London was different then what he saw upon actually living there. He imagined London to be full of kindness and courage like he had thought it to be through Charles Dickens narrations. Unfortunately the violence he read about was something that he did come across in the area he lives in. The last two sentences start off by describing what home now means to Job. A small room with only a sink to drink and even wash from. Hearing Police sirens and traffic noise. As well as humidity in the place that reeks of urine, beer, sour milk and cinders. The excerpt finishes off by saying that immigrants don´t need a reminder of what they have lost.  

Liebe Grüße <3

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Habe ich meine Englisch Aufgaben richtig bearbeitet?

Hey Leute, ich würde mich echt freuen, wenn mal jemand raufschauen könnte😊!

Material:

Aufgaben:

1. Make a table with the statistics and pledges for the four countries.

Meine Lösung:

 2. State in a short text, what the oaths and pledges have in common and how they differ.

Lösung: The differences between the two ideologies is striking. If one swears an oath to the Constitution, it implies limited government by definition. It also implies that individual rights are paramount in the American system of governance. But when one swears to support the government instead of the Constitution, those principles disappear. An oath is self-pledging by which a subject or citizen acknowledges a duty of allegiance and swears loyalty to the monarch or country. In republics, modern oaths are sworn to the country in general or to the country's constitution.                                                                                                                   Also, this is a formal and serious promise to tell the truth or do something an offensive or rude word used to express anger, frustration, surprise, etc. Oath, as mentioned above, can mean either a formal promise or an insulting word. Additionally, an oath is more often used when the person making the promise calls God as a witness to the event, such as in the Boy Scout Promise. This often comes with a price if not kept; this can be death. In my personal opinion, an oath is presented as the most "serious" of the three words. In contrast to Oath, Pledge is a serious promise or agreement a promise to give money and something you leave to another person to show that you will keep your promise.                   Pledge is much less formal. Similarly, the Pledge of Allegiance is a promise of loyalty to one's country. Often, the pledge refers to an amount of money that someone is willing to give to another person.

3. Which of the countries’ oath is the most agreeable to you? Explain why.     The United States of America: Oath of Allegiance is the most agreeable oath to me because this serves to remind us that the United States is a constitutional republic with a federal system. The Oath also reminds us that the Constitution is the cornerstone of the American system. The government is supposed to be bound by the Constitution. As such, the government is not omnipotent, but strictly limited to the functions and purposes enumerated in the Constitution. Legislation, no matter how popular, is to be consistent with it, and any laws that conflict with it are invalid. 

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Hiii, bitte kontrolliert mein Text, bitte Korrigiert die Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler bittee dirngendd:???

Welcome to my presentation. Today I'm talking about the self-employed entrepreneur.

I would like to be a self-employed entrepreneur because self-employment ends unemployment, it achieved a higher income. You can make time independent and you get the previous social environment can leave.

The independent entrepreneur makes his own business decisions. He is responsible for everything in the company. He bears the financial risk.

 I am well suited for this job because I am a team player, creative, flexible and responsible.

 I am motivated to become an independent entrepreneur because I want to be my own boss and develop and implement my own ideas and concepts.

 To start my own I would see what kind of “company” it is, then I would find the right legal form. I would go further, find a suitable company name. Then I would look how much money I have and create a business plan.

 My future hopes when I have my own company are that my company will be known worldwide, that I have a lot of employees, that I have a turnover of 5 million euros and that I can sell many products. My fears are that I will go broke and that I will not be known.

I'm also afraid that I don't produce a lot of products and that I don't have nice employees.

 The qualifications are ambition, willingness to work, willingness to take risks, Resilience, Creativity, Sense of responsibility, required.

 The advantages of being independent are that you can determine yourself, you can realize yourself, you have more freedom, you have no conflicts with superiors. Furthermore, you have higher work motivation because you work for yourself. The chance to live out your own calling. The chance to make more money than an employee.

 The disadvantage of independent is that You work an above-average amount of work. If the order situation is bad, there is no regular salary. You take a higher financial risk, depending on the type of business.

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