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Bitte um Korrektur text about myself

Im folgendem text sind sicherlich grammatikalische fehler. Ihr würdet mir sehr helfen wenn ihr mir helft. danke im vorraus :)

Let me just briefly introduce myself before I start to tell you about my life and my future plans. My name is .... . The letters of my name describe me best: self-confident, easygoing, loyal, independent, natural and ambitious. Currently I live in Cottbus and attend the 11 th grade at the Humboldt-Grammar-School. I am 16 years old and have the best family. I love my grandmothe, grandfather, mum, dad and my one year younger brother. I don’t remember when we have argued the last time. In my freetime I love to talk with my friends about all unimportant topics and go to parties but to be active is also very important to me. That’s why I try to go jogging regulary. In former times I was a member of different sports clubs, e.g. gymnastics or athletics. If I have nothing to do, this means no homework, nothing to learn or other aktivities I love to relax if I watch TV. My strength are in team skills, reliability and self-reliance. In addition I’m very sociable and cooperative. Some of my less great properties are listlessness and reticence. Furthermore you can describe me as reserved, because to entrust myself to someone is difficult for me. Hitherto school wasn’t a big problem for me. My strengths are in scientific subjects, this includes mathematics or chemistry. Difficult for me ist German because there is another weakness of me: spelling and grammar. Therefore English and Polish isn’t easy to me, too. Occupations like journalist or copyreader are out of the question very early.

Englisch, Text, Personen, Eigenschaften, Grammatik, Korrektur, Rechtschreibung

Talking about charts - Diagramme beschreiben - Text korrigieren?!

Hallöchen Leute! Wir sollten am Montag eine Survey (Umfrage) vorberiten und diese sollen wir am Freitag präsentieren, nur bin ich nicht soooo gut in Englisch und weiß nun nicht ob mein Text richtig ist, oder ob ich noch irgendwas ergänzen oder verbessern könnte/ müsste/ sollte... Es wäre also echt total lieb von euch, wenn ihr mir dabei helfen könntet und ich wäre euch auch zutiefst dankbar dafür!!! Also schon mal ein Dankeschön im vorraus. Lg Cersia <3


Bewerten sie die Qualität unseres Bildungssystems von sehr schlecht (1) bis perfekt (10). - Assessment of (the quality of) our educational system, 1 means very bad and 10 means perfect.

Diagramm 1: The bar chart depicts ten options, which the students, on the invitation: “Assessment of (the quality of) our educational system?” could tick, where 1 means very bad and 10 means perfect. The options scale is on the horizontal axis and the percentage terms scale runs vertically. Only slightly more than 45% of the sample had answered that they guessed our educational system is a little more than the average, but it is not perfect. As opposed to this only a small fraction of the adolescences answered that our educational system is very bad.

Wie bewerten sie die Stellung der Jugendlichen in der Gesellschaft im Vergleich zu anderen Ländern? (1- besser als in anderen Ländern, 10- wir haben es am schlechtesten) - How would you assess the role of teenagers in our society when you compare it with other countries?

Diagramm 2: The diagram represents, whether the students assess the role of teenagers in our society, therefore shows that the majority of questioned adolescence be of the same opinion that the role of teenager in Germany are better than other countries. Significantly fewer students answered that the role of young people in Germany are not as good as in other countries.

Was ist für sie der negativste Aspekt am Teenager-Leben in Deutschland?- What is the most negative aspect of a teenager life in Germany?

Diagramm 3: The pie chart illustrates in percentage terms, what youngsters think is the most negative aspect of a teenager life in Germany. The pie chart depicts, that the section “few restrictions” had exactly the same percentage as the section “none”. The stages “few comities”, “few restrictions” and “education” combined are more than half. The answer “few self-determination” makes up for 20 %. This is in sharp contrast to the answer “stress” or “to divide into groups”, only 3 students had answered that one of this section is the most negative aspect of a teenager life in Germany.

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