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Hallo könnt ihr mal schauen ob Fehler enthalten sind. Hat wer verbessungsideen?

welche Note würdet ihr geben (Gymnasium 11 Klasse)

In the following text, I give you an insight into myself and my free time activities: 

First, I want to introduce myself. My name is __ I’m currently eighteen years old. I was born on March 16, 2004, in the hospital of __. Since my birth, I live in a small district of ___, called __. I live there with my fatherand my sister, who is one year younger than me. She looks like me and we have an excellent relationship. Furthermore, I have an older brother who lives in __ with her wife and my niece. Before I went to ___ school, I was at the secondary school in ___ and completed my secondary school certificate there. Now I tell you more about my character. I am a friendly person who can empathize well with others. Additionally, my family and friends particularly appreciate my sense of responsibility because they can always rely on me. On the top of  that, I am also an organizational talent. My daily routine, for example, is very structured because I write to-do lists in order to keep an overview of everything. Last but not least, my creative side is one of my greatest strengths, which reflects who I am. This is a good point to redirect to my hobbies, because being creative takes up a lot of my free time, especially drawing and designing. This hobby relaxes me and makes me fun at the same time. Moreover, I love shopping, particularly in online shops. I spend a lot of time on the internet to buy clothes, which I like, but it makes me a little poor too. Another free time activity of me is reading books. My favourite genre of books is thrillers. I like this genre, because the tension doesn't get lost and such the interest in reading keeps maintained until the end. At the moment I read the book Layla from Colleen Hover and so far, I like it. 

In short, I am a responsible and efficient person with a variety of interests and creative talents. 

Meine Mutter guckt eine Serie namens: Craction.

Zur Werbezeit wird : Das Beste Action&Crime. Angezeigt.Aber das ist doch grammatikalisch Falsch oder nicht da sowohl Action als auch Crime Feminin sind oder gibt es da extra regeln?

Hey,

kann mir wer helfen und evt. Korrektur machen. Und findet ihr der Text ist gut für 11. Klasse Gynasium (bitte ehrlich sein, wäre das eine 1 wert?) vorallem kommasetzung bin ich mir unsicher und fällt vllt jemand noch ein schlusssatz ein?

danke

In the following essay I should give you an insight of me and my free time activities: First I want to introduce myself and my personality. My name is…. and I‘m currently seventeen years old. I was born on 9th may of 2006 in the hospital in…. . Since my birth I live in a small city part of…., called…. . I live there with my father and my two years younger sister. She looks like the same as me und we have a really good relationship. Furthermore I have an another sibling, namely an older sister. She lives in …. with her husband und my niece. Before I went to …. , I was on the … school in … and completed my secondary school certificate there. Now I will tell you a little bit more about my charakter. I am a friendly person who can empathize well with others. Additionally, my family and friends particularly appreciate my sense of responsibility because they can always rely on me. On the top of that I am also an organizational talent. My daily routine, for example, is very structured because I write to-do lists in order to keep an overview of everything. Last but not least my creative side is one of my greatest strengts, which reflects who I am as a person. So and thats a good point to redirect to my hobbies. Because being creative also makes up a lot of my free time. Therefore I especially to drawing and designing. This hobby relaxes me and relieves stress at the same time. Moreover I love shopping particularly in online shops. I spend a much of time on internet sides to buy clothes which I like but it makes me a little bit poor too. An another hobby from me is reading books. My favourite genre of books are thrillers. I like this genre because entire tension of content is maintained until the end and the interest in reading is not lost. At the moment I read the book Layla from Colleen Hover and so far I like it. Also I‘m interested in do ventures with my family and friends.

Ich mein z. B. wenn man so was sagt wie:

"In many other languages, you use the verb ..."

"In lots of other languages, you use the verb ..."

Oder sind die Synonyme?

(1) He's as old as you

oder

(2) he's about your age

Hallo könnt ihr hier mal überschauen und evtl die Sätze korrigieren?

liebe Grüße

If you had lived at that time you wouldn’t kneew (not, to know) how to drive a car.

If you had lived in those days you wouldn’t heard (not, to hear) television.

If you had lived in this country at that time then you will spoke (to speak) what we would now call old-fashioned English.

If you had lived in the south of the country you would been (to be) either very rich or very poor.

If you had lived in the north of the country you would disagreed (to disagree) with one important aspect of southern life.

If you had lived at that time then you would had decided (to have to decide) whether to support the men in blue or the men in grey.

If you had lived in the north of this country you would prepared (to be prepared) to die for man's freedom.

If you had lived in that century you would saw (to see) battles.

Hey, könnt ihr die Sätze kontrollieren und ggf korrigieren? Wäre echt nett:)

liebe Grüße

If he had known his enemies were plotting to kill him he wouldn’t goes to Dallas. (not go to Dallas

If he had known his marriage to Diana would be an unhappy one he wouldn’t married her. (not marry her)

If he had known an armed man was waiting for him he wouldn’t leaved the hotel.(not leave the hotel)

If the people of Ireland had known the potato crop was going to fail in 1845 they sowed other crops.(sow other crops)

Ein infinitiv mit to folgt doch immer auf would oder? Ich hab von meinem lehrer so aufgaben bekommen umd in den lösungen steht aber was anderes. Da steht:" I wouldn't mind earning lots of money" aber das müsste doch heißen "I wouldn't mind to earn." Und"I'd probably miss seeing my friends". I'd bedeutet doch I would deswegen müsste das doch "I'd probably miss to see my friends."

Hallo,

da es mein erstes Mal ist das ich überhaupt eine song Analyse schreibe wollte ich fragen, ob es in Ordnung ist, wenn meine Interpretation falsch ist.Ich meine bei einer song Analyse muss man viel interpretieren, ist es schlimm wenn man es anders interpretiert??

Hallo, könnt ihr die Sätze kontrollieren und ggf. korrigieren? Wäre sehr nett:)

Liebe Grüße

If the patient has a pain in her tummy I will ask about her diet.

If the patient has a pain in her tummy I would ask about her diet.

If the patient had a pain in her tummy I would have ask about her diet.

Heyy ich muss für die Schule einen inneren Monolog zum Thema „wer bin ich und wer will ich sein“ schreiben.Nur leider fehlt mir aktuell die Kreativität und Ideen dazu was ich schreiben könnte.

Hätte jemand Ideen oder Anregungen für mich ?

lg RedRose114

Ich hab diese Mediation geschrieben und wollte fragen, wie ich den verbessern könnte oder ob das so passt:

Hello Stefan,

since you've told me you're looking for a holiday job in London, I've been searching for different work options and came across a quite popular restaurant called "Herman ze German". Firsty, you need to know what the owner's idea of opening this restaurant was and how it came to this restaurant.

As the owners, Falak Shahi and Florian, are of the opinion that German sausages aren't comparable to English ones, their friends have taken the intiative to bring them original sausages made in German. So the couple decided to sell their sausages in local pups so called "sausageweeks". As an upgrade they started to sell their sausages on a music festival which has contributed to high success. In 2010 they opened their first restaurant located in London. Maybe you're wondering why this restaurant did blow up and has attracted so much attention.This is because Germany is very popular in UK and Berlin is seen as a trendy city. But what also plays a big role is German and English people raising awarness of how close we actually are and not as different as they thought to be. Falakshahi and Florian are also playing with cliches and have decorated their restaurants full of cliches. That seems to many clients pretty hilarious and cool. The last thing I want to address is their future objectives. They are dreaming that two or three new restaurants will open within a year and sausages will be offered with their own logo in English grocery stores. I hope this text could inspire you a little on your job search and was interesting to read.

Take care!

Also letztes Jahr musste ich mal in Englisch einen Aufsatz schreiben und als ich ihn dann abgeben wollte hat unser Lehrer ihn nicht akzeptiert, weil er auf dem AB, den mir in der vorherigen Stunde der Praktikant gegeben hat war und ich chemische Strukturformeln und was er als "upside down pyramid" bezeichnet hat draufgezeichnet habe. Der Aufsatz selber war noch gut lesbar.

Ich habe den dann schnell nochmal sauber geschrieben, aber mich interessiert trotzdem, ob er das darf. Und wenn ja, dürfte er mir, wenn ich keine Zeit mehr zum Abschreiben gehabt hätte die 6 geben?

Ich muss auf Folgende sätze eine Antwort auf Englisch geben meint Ihr die antworten sind gut und auch logisch?
What are you looking forword to? = I'm looking forward to class camp.
What do you care about? = I am care about electrical engineering.
What do you worry about? = I'm worried that my grades will drop last year
What's your ambitions ? = My abitions is to keep my grades up this year

Hallo, ich habe vor ungefähr zwei Monaten einen wissenschaftlichen Aufsatz an einen Verlag versandt, wobei mir der Eingang bestätigt wurde.
Zudem wurde ich darauf hingewiesen, dass der Aufsatz begutachtet werde. Mit einer Rückmeldung könne ich rechnen, sobald sich das Lektorat eine Meinung gebildet habe.
Nach zwei Monaten frage ich mich nun, ob ich nachfragen oder es eher als negatives Zeichen werten sollte?

"Was macht Musik mit Menschen?"

Könnt ihr mir sagen was ihr euch darunter vorstellt, ich schreibe darüber einen Aufsatz und wollte mal schauen ob jeder eine andere Vorstellung darunter hat oder ob sich das abgleicht. danke!

Wir möchten für unsere Badewanne an Stelle eines Vorhangs eine Glastrennwand montieren.

Bei der Recherche ist mir aufgefallen, dass die meisten Trennwände ca. 140cm hoch sind. Ich habe jedoch gelesen, dass man die Höhe an die Größte Person im Haushalt anpassen sollte. Man soll 8-10cm zu der Größe der Person hinzunehmen.

Bei uns kämen wir da auf ca. 155cm. Wir möchten natürlich auch nicht, dass das Wasser oben raus spritzt. Aber ohne maßanfertigung ist es eher schwierig etwas über 140cm zu finden. Nun frage ich mich, ob 140cm nicht doch ausreichen, da das ja die Standardgröße ist?

Hat sich jemand schonmal eine solche Trennwand eingebaut und könnte mir vielleicht sagen, worauf man da achten sollte?

Danke und viele Grüße

Es geht um künstliche Intelligenz,ihre Fortschritte und ihre Nachteile

Danke für alle Antworten :)

Hello people! Here is Leo and I'm 16 years old. Today's topic is my healthy life. First of all 1 my food habits I do to stay healthy will say something about and then I tell you my daily activities. My day every beginn with a large glass of water. Then I fast prepare my breakfast. I mostly eat at break- eggs, bread with cream cheese and vegetables like tomatos or Cucumber. and at dinner I At lunch 1 often eat eat for salad or example pasta whole grain per bread. For me it is very important that I eat day at least one band fruits and vegetables. This food include many vitamins and minerals, which are important for our health. Furthermore I make Sure that I eat enough protein, because I do weight training. And last but not least you should drink between 2-3 liter water and less soft drinks, because they have a lot of sugar and calories.. Another important aspect for a healthy lifestyle are daily activities. So I do every day 10.000 sleps and that should you do too. On the top of that I go three days a Heek to a and there I do sport. At the beginning gym a warm up, then I do Height training for at least one hours and finally 30 minutes cardio training. That are my sport routine. What do you do for sport ? I would be happy if you share an another entry with your healthy life tips. Now I wish all readers a sporty and healthy day and don't forget your restday.
Bye Leo

In Ordnung für 10. Klasse und bitte berichtigen bei Fehlern nur so kann ich daraus lernen.

Oben verschrieben erste und zweite Satz!

Moin!

Muss man für eine Doktorarbeit etwas Neues erfunden oder erforscht haben oder fasst man einfach nur alte Forschungen zusammen?

Danke!