Kann jemand mein Charakterisierung in Englisch korrigieren?

ich brauche hilfe da ich nicht so gut in englisch bin.

In the Novel “Speak”, written by Laurie Halse Anderson in 1999, is the character “Mr. Freeman” an art teacher at Merryweather High, who already gets introduced at one of the first chapters. He is the art teacher from the main character Melinda.

Mr. Freeman is a teacher, described as ugly. Furthermore he has a “Big old grasshopper body, like a stilt-walking circus guy and an nose like a credit card …” like Melinda describes at p.14, l.9 f., . He appears very scary to other people, but he has a nice smile on his face (p. 14, l.11 & p. 14, l.21 ff.).

Another important fact is his language, he speaks really heartfelt (p.14 l.12 ff.), which makes him so interesting , so the students listen to him.

During the novel Mr. Freeman is an supporter of Melinda and they talk about Melindas problems sometimes. He sees the feelings or the art in Melindas work (p.66-67). Besides Mr. Freeman is very creative and he wants others to be creative too (p. 15 – 16). Moreover he wants to motivate the students to make something special. On p.14 l. 11 you can see that Mr. Freeman “smiles”. Their, you can conclude that he is a very friendly person

Mr. Freeman is a different person. He is not like normal teachers and he has his own vision of school, lessons and priorities (p. 14 – 15). His ideas are very scary but he has a plan for the rest of the year in school (p. 15, ll.20 ff. & p.16, ll.1 ff.) .

He has a good friendship to his students, which you can see that he is hugging students as a teacher(p.196 l.10 ff.). The last day of school Melinda stays after so she could finally put the finishing touches on her tree and she starts crying in the class with Mr.Freeman and he says "You've been through a lot haven't you?"(p.197 l.24 f.), that shows that he actually cares about Melinda and what she has been through. In other words he has a good connection to Melinda.

In conclusion Mr. Freeman is the art teacher of Melinda, who has a good connection to Melinda, he is a friendly teacher, who goes motivated on

Englisch, Schule, Charakterisierung, Englischunterricht, Korrektur, Lehrer, characterization, englischlehrer
Ist diese Charakterisierung gut (english)?

Also einmal im generellen, Sara wird gleich charakterisiert und sie ist die Freundin von Chip. Miles ist Chips Zimmergenosse.

So in der Szene die ich analysieren soll, ging es darum, dass Chip und Sara zusammen mit den Eltern von Sara in die Oper gehen wollen, allerdings gab es dann ein paar Streitigkeiten zwischen Sara und Chip.

Hier die Charakterisierung:

In the following I want to characterise Sarah, the girlfriend from Chip, who is one of the protagonists from the novel “Looking for Alaska” by John Green.

Sarahs Outward appearance is described as a girl with long blonde hair, which is pulled up into a twist with a strand of hair falling down each side of her face. Miles thinks, that she looks like a movie star, a bitchy one. (L. 27) Sara seems to be Very terrified, when she perceives that Chip can’t iron. This gets distinct with the observation “Can’t you at least press your shirt?” (L.25) The statement of Chip “we don’t all have maids to do our ironing”(L.30) Sara can be described as a rich and privileged girl, who doesn’t get confrontrated with chores at home. Moreover, Sara’s parents seem to be very descent, because they want to go “in the opera”(L.33) which is an sign of noble an elegant characteristics. In the following conservation between her an Chip the atmosphere seems to be very tense. She answers very annoyed and serious “Look, we’re going or we’re not going”(L.37) after Chip tried explain to her, that her parents hate him. Then Chip says, that “he doesn’t want to go with her anywhere”(L.38), Sara shows an an angry behaviour because she “slammed the door”(L.40) and said in an ironical way “Fine. Have a great night”(L.40) The relationship between them, can be interpreted intently and negative charged. After Sara leaves the room, Miles explaines to Chip, that he finds her “nice”(L.45) Shortly afterwards, the pay phone rings outside (L.48) an it was Sara, who wants to talk with Chip again. She may feels sorry or wants to resolve the conversation they had. But after an unknown conversation they had, Chip shouts “Screw you to”, which is an evidence, that the conversation didn’t turn out well.

All in all, the relationship between Sara an Chip is not good. Sara often gets angry and annoyed in the presence of Chip. They also don’t harmonier together.

Nicht gut 43%
Gut 29%
Mittel 29%
Englisch, Deutsch, Schule, Charakterisierung

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