Stimmen diese drei Sätze auf Englisch?
The (available) cartoon [„title“] by [cartoonist] was published in/on [website/newspaper] on [date] and shows/deals with/focuses on [topic].
The task is to analyze and descibe it, as well as to draw parallels to the book „Refugee“ by Alan Gratz. „ Refugee“ follows the stories of three different children and their families, each attempting to flee their violent homelands, in different regions of the world and during different decades. Josef and his family escape Nazi Germany in 1938; Isabel and her family seek refuge from Cuba in 1994; and Mahmoud and his family flee Syria in 2015.
Danke für Korrekturen!
Ich würde mich auch über noch bessere, bildungssprachliche und Eindruck machende Formulierungen freuen, ich werde so ähnlich in der KA schreiben müssen.
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Was hältst du hiervon?
The cartoon [„title“] by [cartoonist] was published in/on [website/newspaper] on [date] and portrays/addresses/focuses on [topic].
The task is to analyze and describe it, as well as draw parallels to the book "Refugee" by Alan Gratz. "Refugee" chronicles the journeys of three distinct children and their families as they attempt to escape their war-torn homelands in various parts of the world, during different time periods. Josef and his family flee Nazi Germany in 1938, Isabel and her family seek refuge from Cuba in 1994, and Mahmoud and his family escape Syria in 2015.
Ich bin zwar kein Muttersprachler, aber beherrsche Englisch sehr gut.
"The fact that escape is dangerous is also evident in the novel." Kann man das sagen?
Danke. Stimmt das zu 100%, also bist du Muttersprachler?