Ich muss schnell Kommentar in Englisch schreiben?

Wir müssen diesen Kommentar in Englisch kommentieren, aber das Problem liegt da ich verstehe nicht was da meint

"We need to find ways to make the invisible visible, to uncover and celebrate the value of unpaid work."

2 Antworten

dieLuka

21.02.2022, 19:41

Wo ist denn das Problem?

Wenn es darum geht wie man Formal einen Comment schreibt kannst du hier alles nachlesen.

https://studyflix.de/englisch/comment-schreiben-2680

Wenn es darum geht was du inhaltlich schreiben kannst oder solltest würde ich erstmal Stichpunkte machen, die dann logisch sortieren und daraus den kommentar formen.

Wenn du dich in Deutsch wohler fühlst als auf Englisch kannst du das alles auf Deutsch machen und anschließend übersetzen. Das kann, muss aber nicht, einfacher sein als alle Schritte auf Englisch zu machen.

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch lernen, Englisch, Sprache

21.02.2022, 20:12

Hallo,

davon, dass wir dir das machen, lernst du nichts. Dein Motto sollte Learning by doing sein, dann klappt's auch in der Englischarbeit, denn da hast du auch niemanden, der dir das macht.

Gib bei Google - how to write a comment oder how to write an opinion essay ein und folge den Links, z.B. diesen hier:

- schulzeug.at/englisch/sonstige/1489-how-to-write-an-opinion-essay

- https://www.abiweb.de/englisch-methoden/evaluation-comment-re-creation-of-text-creative-writing/stellungnahme-comment-schreiben.html

- writefix.com/?page_id=1524

oder auch useful phrases for a comment (discussion etc.):

- schule-sorglos.de/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/VokabellisteEnglischOberstufe.pdf

- https://www.schulhilfe.de/comment-englisch/formulierungen

- fosbosenglisch.de/new/writing/writing-zweite-unterseite/

- Schreibschule bei ego4u.de

- https://better-english-grades.com/how-to-write/comment-englisch-schreiben-kommentar/

- https://www.studienkreis.de/englisch/stellungnahme-comment-schreiben/

Comment (eigene Meinung äußern)

eigenen Standpunkt anhand von Beispielen erläutern und begründen

Behauptung – Begründung – Beispiel

Discuss (erörtern)

alle Aspekte eines Problems untersuchen (Was ist …? / Ist es okay, … zu tun?)

Für und Wider abwägen

Fasse die Schlussfolgerung aus allen aufgeführten Pros und Cons objektiv als Fazit zusammen. Führe das stärkste Argument als letztes Argument vor dem Fazit auf.

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Für Einleitungen:

https://www.prüfung-ratgeber.de/2019/01/einen-comment-in-englisch-schreiben-aufbau-und-beispiele/

Bild zum Beitrag

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Für den Schlussteil:

Bild zum Beitrag

https://www.kapiert.de/englisch/klasse-9-10/schreiben/die-eigene-meinung-ausdruecken/einen-kommentar-comment-schreiben/

http://writefix.com/?page_id=1591

https://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Discussion-Essay

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3k7WGX1dUB4

:-) AstridDerPu

Und nach einem erfolgreichem Login wieder sichtbar machen. Ich habe folgenden Code:

function getKey() {


  var visible = document.getElementById("download").style.display = "visible";
  var invisible = document.getElementById("download").style.display = "none";


  var key = "abc1";


  var keY = document.getElementById("key").value;


  if (key == keY) {
    visible;
    alert("r")


  } else {
    alert("w")
  }

Weder funktioniert er, noch wird das Element download wieder angezeigt.

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Englisch: participle clauses (when or while)?

Hey, ich lerne grade für die Englisch Klassenarbeit und bin mir hier nicht sicher. Ich habe als Satz

“They sang songlines to describe their ways, while walking across the land.” raus, in der Lösung steht aber

”While walking across the land, they sang songlines to describe their ways.”.

Ist es rein theoretisch auch so richtig wie ich es habe?

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Ist diese Vorstellung für die englisch Prüfung gut?

Hello, my name is ..., i am 17 years old. I go to the commercial school ... in munich. My Hobbys are playing football and swimming. I have an older sister, she is 25 years old and she works as a nurse. My parents works in a office. After the final exam i would like to for a year to spain.

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Englisch Text über TYCTWD?

Hey,

ich muss einen Text über „take your Child To work day“ schreiben und würde gerne wissen ob ihn jmd kontrollieren kann und sagen kann was ich besser machen könnte Dankeschön ^^

Take your Child To work day is a day in which Patents can take their children To their work so they get To know the worklife and they get Experience from work and maybe they Enjoy the Job so they think of doing ist After School.

Its on the fourth Thursday every April and every year Over 25.000.000 people take Part at the TYCTWD Even Though of Not every School and Company participate the day.

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In my opinion, the profession of an actor is a dream job because you have the possibility to embody the language, facial expressions and gestures of another Person.

If you want to work as a actor you must be a creative, confident,Imaginative, open and funny person because you have to play your role clearly.

I imagine working on the set and with other people would bevery, very exciting and varied as there is always something to laugh about when a scene does not succeed immediately.

Futhermore is glamorous movie premieres, high salaries and enormous popularity a good aspect to be a actor.

the job would be suitable for me because I am an open minded, self-confident and creative person who loves to work with other people.

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Hallo,

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My dear guest parents

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Many Greetings

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Hallo, ich muss ein Kommentar zu einer Aussage in Englisch schreiben, brauche Hilfe ?

Hallo, ich muss morgen etwas vorstellen in englisch und bin nicht so gut brauche deshalb Hilfe. Ich muss zu dieser Aussauge: „The best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others .“ ein Kommentar schreiben.

Könnt ihr mir bitte helfen?

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Englischer Lebenslauf?

Wir sollen in Englisch einen Lebenslauf (CV genannt) schreiben und ich wollte nach Rechtschreibfehlern, Grammatikfehlern und anderen verbesserungen für folgende Abschnitte fragen:

Objective:

I want to make the world to a better place and no matter how difficult it will be, I will even work harder for my goals.

Skills:

I am educated in design, technogie, humanity. I recognize personal behavioral sturctures, the separation between unetic and etic, the goal that is being pursued withe the kosequenzes as well as the context. I analysis with structure and details, so can find out information successfull. I value respectful speech with other persons high. I have a large vocabulary with that I can articulate percise. I am able to comunicate complex ideas. I work effectiv in teams and as a solo. Organize difficult task and multi-tasking are easy for me. Managing and prioritize duties are no problem for me. Oten I have genius Ides with that I can find fabulus solucions. I can handle technical services.

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(also das ist nür n teil vom bericht)

"A personal evaluation of my work experience All in all i like the work in the Hospital because i like my workmates and the work i have to do. I have learned a lot and fortunately my workmates are kind with taking the time to explain everything to me that I wanted to know. Another Advantage is that I do not have to work on weekends very often and that I have very well ours of labor. What i don't like too much is that i only have one break the whole day and that break it about 8.30 o’clock in the morning so i don't have any time for lunch or any spare time between 9.00-15.40 o’clock. Another disadvantage is that the way from the hospital to my home is very long and because I do not have a car yet it takes me a long time to go there. "

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Wie kann ich mein Präsentation verlängern?

Hey,

Ich muss morgen eine Englisch Präsentation halten, die ca 2-3 Minuten Lesezeit erfordert. Ich habe bereits diesen Text geschrieben, hat aber nur 1 Minute Lesezeit. Ich weiss wirklich nicht, was ich über diesen Beruf noch schreiben könnte.
Danke im Vorraus:

My Dream Job as a Website Developer

Personally, I think that the job as a website developer would be the best choice for me, I like the kind of self-employment. As long as you have mastered the developer language and other languages such as English, you don't even have to have studied computer science. I prefer this variant because I want to work for myself and not for others.

My job in this business is to find customers who want to start a business online. I implement these wishes and plans in digital form.

In this job there are no fixed working hours, which is why I can work from anywhere and no matter when, as long as I meet the deadline. Mostly I would work at home.

I would also have to travel around the world to meet new clients, which makes my job easier for me. I can even work on projects while on vacation. On average you make $ 70-80,000 a year, which is quite sufficient. Unfortunately, I don't know anyone who works in this business, the interest must have come by itself.

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SCRUM - Wer kann mir bei dieser Frage für meine Prüfung helfen: "What are two good options for the Scrum Master?"

Hallo zusammen,

bei der Vorbereitung auf die PSM I Prüfung bin ich auf folgenden Fragen gestoßen. Leider komme ich da alleine nicht weiter. Können Sie mir da evtl. helfen?

Marian is the product owner envisioning a project for a new release of her Product. She made a projection of a release date based upon a sustained velocity of 17 completed units of work per Sprint. Over the first 3 Sprints , the average velocity was 13 for work that the Development Team estimated as 90% done. The Development Teams, feeling the need to meet the plan, figured that a velocity of 17 was within their reach.

a) There's less initial disruption than reorganizing into new teams. As they start, they will discover what works best, and how to potentially re-organize toward this.

b) Component teams generally have the skills needed to create a working Increment of software that provides business value.

c) because they have worked together for some time, they are likely able to start producing shippable Increments faster than new feature teams would.

d) Component teams have all the specialized skills needed to focus on their key competency.

e) There are fewer cross-team dependencies than working in feature teams.

Vielen Dank für Eure Hilfe!

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Englisch Hausi Bewerbung

Hallo. Ich muss in englisch eine bewerbung für ein platz als au-pair mädchen schreiben. währe nett wenn ihr rechtschreibfehler, grammattikfehler, verbesserungsforschläge geben könntet.

Personal statement

I love to explore new places, meeting new people and to learn something about other cultures. I never stayed at Australia before, so I wanted to visit it. I think it`s a good way to become a more independent person and to improve my English. It’s also a good chance to learn something about the live in this country, because later you can visit it as an tourist, but you can´t live like an Australian. In my childhood, we heaved some Au- Pairs and so I wanted to test it also.

Qualifications/Skills

Language skills German native speaker, learn English since 2004, some French

Work experience

2009 to 2010 Volunteer work: helping by the child gymnastics

2011 to date Volunteer work: helping by the church for children

2009 to date Regular job: helping children to learn, to make their homework (1-4 hours per week)

2011 to 2012 Regular job: delivering magazines by bike (2 hours per week)

Hobbies and interests

I love doing sport like gymnastics, jogging,… I also like to reed, hear to music and play the guitar. I find it very nice to help other children for example doing with them their homework,…

References

Available on request

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My dream job is a nurse. They works in a hospital and help sick people. I like this job because it's nice to help people. Nurses gets 2000 euro. My mother works as a nurse in Oberwart. This job is very stressful but also beautiful. Next year I will go to the Ecole. After that I will go in the School of Nursing.

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