Bewerbungsschreiben Pflegepraktikum auf Englisch- HELFT MIR BITTE!

Also, ich bewerbe mich per Internetbewerbung um einen Praktikumsplatz in der Pflege in Großbritannien. Könnt ihr bitte mein Anschreiben durchlesen und mir Fehler oder Verbesserungsvorschläge sagen? Wenn jemand Vorschläge zur Kommasetzung hat, immer her damit ;) !!! Das wäre ganz lieb und würde mir sehr weiterhelfen!! Ich habe folgendes geschrieben:

Dear …, After having studied Medicine at the XXX University of XXX for one semester, I am planning to supplement my studies and gain more experience in the nursing sector. Via Internet I found out about the XXX hospital and its patient-friendly atmosphere which seems very appealing to me. Thus, I am writing in order to apply for a 30-day nursing internship in your hospital from XXX to XXX . I have already gained practical experience in my subject, not only during several first-aid-courses I lately attended, but also during university classes: I study in a reformed degree course, which means that we work directly with patients from the first week on and therefore gain more practical experience than students who study Medicine in a classic program of study. I am a very open-minded and friendly person who likes to help and support other people. Therefore, I would like to get an insight in the daily work of nurses. Of course I am prepared to work hard and constantly give my best. I am very interested in exploring different countries. Thus, I apply for an internship abroad as I know that tolerance and openness are necessary for every prospective doctor. The English language will be no problem for me as I have learned it for more than nine years and even took the English advanced-course in high-school which I completed with constant straight As. Furthermore, I worked on my language skills during a language study travel to London in 2009. Of course I would pay for the internship in case of an acceptance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, XXX

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Vom Fragesteller als hilfreich ausgezeichnet

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch

24.08.2011, 22:33

Hallo,

im Großen und Ganzen würde ich das so lassen. Ein paar Kleinigkeiten habe ich geändert.

Dear …,

After having studied Medicine at the XXX University of XXX for one semester, I am planning to supplement my studies and gain more experience in the nursing sector. Via Internet, I found out about the XXX hospital and its patient-friendly atmosphere which seems very appealing to me. Thus, I am writing in order to apply for a 30-day nursing internship in your hospital from XXX to XXX . I have already gained practical experience in my subject, not only during several first-aid-courses I have lately attended kein Komma, but also during university classes. I study in a reformed degree course, which means that we work directly with patients from the first week on and therefore gain more practical experience than students who study Medicine in a classic programme (= UK; program = US) of study.

I am a very open-minded and friendly person who likes to help and support other people. Therefore, I would like to get an insight in the daily work of nurses. Of course, I am prepared to work hard and constantly give my best. I am very much interested in exploring different countries. Therefore / That is why, I apply for an internship abroad as I know that tolerance and openness are necessary for every prospective doctor.

The English language will be no problem for me as I have learned it for more than nine years and even took the English advanced-course at high-school which I completed with constant straight As. Furthermore, I worked on my language skills during a language study travel to London in 2009. Of course, I would pay for the internship in case of an acceptance.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely, XXX

wg. Gruß- und Schlussformel:

Im Englischen werden i.d.R. folgende Gruß- und Schlussformeln verwendet,

wenn man den Namen des Empfängers nicht, kennt:
Dear Sir ... Yours faithfully
Dear Madam ... Yours faithfully
Dear Sir or Madam ... Yours faithfully
Kennt man dagegen den Namen des Empfängers, heißt es i.d.R.:
Dear Mr Hanson ... Yours sincerely
Dear Mrs Hanson ... Yours sincerely
Dear Miss Hanson ... Yours sincerely
Dear Ms Hanson ... Yours sincerely

Viel Glück und Erfolg!

:-) AstridDerPu

AstridDerPu

26.12.2011, 15:52

Schön, dass dir meine Antwort gefallen hat. Hoffentlich hat's geholfen!

Danke für das Sternchen!

:-) AstridDerPu

aliiina

24.08.2011, 23:47

super ! das einzige, was ich (neben den anderen verbesserungsvorschlägen der anderen) noch ändern würde: du schreibst erst "I am a very open-minded and friendly person who likes to help and support other people." dann über was anderes, um schließlich noch etwas über deine person zu sagen: "I am very interested in exploring different countries."

das würde ich als persönliche beschreibung zusammen tun, und dann erst näher beschreiben ;)

lg aliiina

Kathy34

24.08.2011, 22:16

Dear …,

After studying medicine at the XXX University of XXX for one semester I am planning to supple my studies and gain more experience at the nursing sector. On the internet I learned much about the XXX hospital an its patient-friendly atmosphere which seems to be very appealing to me. That is why I apply for a 30-day-nursing-internship in your hospital from ::: to :::. I have already collected some practical experience within my subject. It was not only during several first-aid-courses that I lately took, but also during the lectures: I studied in a reformed degree course which means that we usually work close to the patients from the very beginning. Therefore we have made more practical experience who study medicine in an ordinary university course. I always use to be very open-minded and friendly and like helping and supporting other people. That is why I am very interested in getting an insight of the daily work a nurse usually carries out. Of course, I use to work hard and do the best I can.

I am also interested in exploring different countries. As a result, I apply for an abroad internship, too, as I know that tolerance and openness are necessary for each prospective doctor. My knowledge at English is very good, as I have learned it for more than nine years and even took the advanced-course at high school that I finished with an A. Furthermore, I improved my language skills during a study trip to London in 2009. If you give me the chance to prove my know-how, I would even pay for the costs. I am looking to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

XXX

I wish you will be successful.

Jasaii

24.08.2011, 21:23

also 1. man schribt nicht dear, das ist persönlich 2. it seems to be very

NaGreg

29.12.2015, 16:31

Hey,

ich interessiere mich im Moment ebenfalls für ein Krankenpflegepraktikum im UK und wollte mal fragen, bei welcher Stelle du dich beworben hast?

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I would like to introduce myself to you.

My Name is xxx but people call me xxx. I am 17 Years old, I am turning 18 in three months. I was born in Albania, in the capital city Tirana. I have 4 siblings 3 brothers and 1 sister, my brothers are called xxx, xxx and xxx. My sister’s name is xxx. They are all older than me. My oldest brother is 29, he still lives in Albania with his wife and they also already have 2 children. Me, my parents and my other siblings moved to Germany when I was 10 Years old. Now we live in xxx. I learned German very quickly. But in the beginning it was hard to find new friends.

I’d also like to tell you something about my hobbies and interests. I like cycling very much, but I hate soccer. During the rest of my spare time I surf on the internet or I often meet friends and go shopping. After school I would like to do a technical diploma. My dream is it to work as a stewardess because I like to travel and because it has been a passion of mine since I was a kid. I also want to learn more about other cultures and the languages.

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Email of Compalint Verbessern bitte?

Heyy ich habe bald English Schularbeit und brauche eure Hilfe und Feedback! Danke im Voraus :) Habt einen schönen Tag! Unten ist die Angabe!

Email of Complaint

From: Lucas_Hannerer@gmail.com

To: Summer_2022@gmail.com

Subject: Feedback on Summer Camp

Dear Sir or Madam,

On 30th July I attended the Summer Camp which is located in Santa Monica. In all honesty, I was very satisfied with this journey. However, there is a reason why I am writing to you. Firstly I have to admit that the meals were significantly amazing. It is remarkable that there is finally no fast food unlike to other summer courses I have been to. Moreover, the Los Angeles sights and surfing at Venice Beach in my free time were very enjoyable.

As far as I could tell, it seems to me that I have learned nothing necessary in courses. Please don`t get me wrong but in my view, there were more leisure activities like sports, parties etc than learning opportunities. I invested all my money and time to learn something new but the quality of the learning strategy was like at the middle school level. I was on Campus not to only have fun but rather zu study.

As you will appreciate, considering the problems I faced during my stay, I would be grateful if you would give me a refund of part of the price back. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem.

Sincerely

Lucas

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