Wie schreibe ich das richtig auf englisch?

Hey ihr Lieben, ich bräuchte mal eure Hilfe… und zwar möchte ich mich für ein Studium bewerben und bräuchte dazu ein Zertifikat, dass ich als Au pair tätig war und mit Kindern schon Erfahrung habe. Mein Englisch ist irgendwie bisschen eingerostet und ich bräuchte eure Hilfe ob ich das so meiner Host Familie schreiben könnte:

“hii, 

I hope y’all doing well. I just need a little help with the attached certificate of my au pair stay as I would like to apply for another study program at a special education school for the subject art. You don't have to fill it out right away!! but it would be great if I can send it with my application soon, just that they know that I already have experience with children”

Answer 1

[someone315]

Hey! :) Ich habe deinen Text mal ein bisschen überarbeitet:

Hi [Name der Host-Familie],

I hope you're all doing well. I need a little help with the attached certificate of my au pair stay. I'm planning to apply for a new study program in art education at a special education school, and I need to include proof of my experience with children. There's no rush to fill it out immediately, but it would be great if I could send it with my application soon.

Thank you so much for your help!

Best regards,

[Dein Name]

Comments

[Cocok1998]

Super danke für die schnelle Antwort :)

[Pfiati]

@Cocok1998

Ich würde das wie someone schreiben, würde selber "I mise all of you!" vielleicht mit einbauen.

Answer 2

[oatmilks]

Paar (sehr kleine) Kleinigkeiten:

• "Hi" wenn schon mit zwei I dann am Anfang zumindest groß
• I hope y'all are doing well (hier hast du das Verb vergessen)
• But it would be great if I could send it with my application soon...

Viel Glück bei der Bewerbung :]

Comments

[Cocok1998]

dankeschön :)

Answer 3

[AstridDerPu]

Hallo,

Dear [Host Family], 

I hope you are all doing well. I just need a little help with the attached certificate of my au pair stay, as I would like to apply for another study program (= AE; BE = programme) at a special education school (Was soll das sein?) for the subject of art. You don't have to fill it in right away (---) but it would be great if I could send it with (besser: attach it to) my application soon, just that they know (besser: just for them to know) that I already have experience with children.

AstridDerPu