Ist das eine gute persuasive essay (Englisch Ersatzleistung Klasse 7 )?
Why you should play tennis 🎾
Tennis is a wonderful sport and I think more people should play it. There are many reasons why people should play tennis. The first reason is that tennis is a great way to make new friends. You can easily go to the park or a tennis court and just ask someone if she or he would like to play some tennis with you and become friends with her or him. Another important thing is that tennis is a lifetime sport. I’ve seen 65 year old people still playing pretty well. Think about it this way, when you are old would you rather spend your hole life in front of a small window in a retirement home ? Or would you rather enjoy your life, by playing tennis and having fun? You’re probably still thinking that tennis is like any other sport and and that it’s nothing special. But do you know that tennis reduces stress. People who play tennis can deal with physical, mental and emotional challenges, which also helps to deal with stress. Soccer players can also deal with physical problems but they can’t deal with mental and emotional challenges. Because as a soccer player you are in a team and sharing the pain with the others. Tennis players are on their own and if they lose it's their fault. Not the fault of the others, only their own fault. It's like when a soccer player gets the blame from the hole team for losing the match. I also play tennis. I love this sport because after you have lost you work even harder than before and whether your next match is a loss or a victory you will feel the hard work you put into it. Tennis not only strengthens your mentality, it also makes your body stronger and you can live longer, get fitter and improve your hand eye coordination through this sport. An hour of singles play can burn 580-870 calories and if you have 3 hours of training every week, you will even live longer! The fifth reason to play tennis is that tennis improves your brain power. it has been proven that the more you repeat an activity, the stronger the neural connections in your brain will become. So when you play tennis, for which you need critical thinking and quick movements, you are improving your planning, tactical, agility, and coordination skills. Finally, the most important reason is that tennis teaches you a lot of lessons. Every tennis match is a small life lesson. It teaches you about hard work and how to believe in yourself. Through independence , endurance, confidence and determination, tennis teaches you how to be successful. I hope my text persuaded you! And hopefully I’ll see you on the tennis court one day!
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Tennis is a wonderful sport and I think more people should play it. There are many reasons why people should play tennis. The first reason is that tennis is a great way to make new friends. (Stil - Wiederholung)
You can easily go to the (auch unbestimmten Artikel verwenden) park or a tennis court and just ask someone if she or he*1 would like to play some tennis with you and become friends with her or him*1. Another important thing is that tennis is a lifetime sport. I’ve*2 seen 65-year-old people still playing pretty well. Think about it this way, when you are old would you rather spend your hole (RS) life in front of a small window in a retirement home ? Or would you rather enjoy your life (kein Komma) by playing tennis and having fun? You’re probably still thinking (Grammatik) that tennis is like any other sport and and that it’s nothing special. But do you know that tennis reduces stress. People who play tennis can deal with physical, mental and emotional challenges, which also helps to deal with stress. Soccer (= AE; BE = football) players can also deal with physical problems but they can’t deal with mental and emotional challenges. (kein neuer Satz) Because as a soccer player you are in a team and share the pain with the others. Tennis players are on their own and if they lose it's their fault. Not the fault of the others, only their own fault. (Das ist kein Satz.) It's like when (Formulierung) a soccer player gets the blame from the hole (RS) team for losing the match. I also play tennis. I love this sport because after you have lost (Komma) you work even harder than before and whether your next match is a loss or a victory (Komma) you will feel the hard work you put into it. Tennis not only strengthens your mentality, it also makes your body stronger and you can live longer, get fitter and improve your hand-eye coordination through this sport.
Hier höre ich jetzt auf, denn das hast du hier abgeschrieben: https://www.helenricetennis.com.au/blog-reasons-to-play-tennis/
und ich gehe davon aus, dass du richtig abschreiben kannst.
An hour of singles play can burn 580-870 calories and if you have 3 hours of training every week, you will even live longer! The fifth reason to play tennis is that tennis improves your brain power. it has been proven that the more you repeat an activity, the stronger the neural connections in your brain will become. So when you play tennis, for which you need critical thinking and quick movements, you are improving your planning, tactical, agility, and coordination skills. Finally, the most important reason is that tennis teaches you a lot of lessons. Every tennis match is a small life lesson. It teaches you about hard work and how to believe in yourself. Through independence , endurance, confidence and determination, tennis teaches you how to be successful. I hope my text persuaded you! And hopefully I’ll see you on the tennis court one day!
*1: in diesem Fall wird das Pronomen they als Singular Pronoun verwendet.
siehe:
https://www.lexico.com/en/grammar/he-or-she-versus-they
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/they
https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/singular-nonbinary-they
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/use-the-singular-they/
*2: Kurzformen (he's, I'm, don't usw.) werden vorwiegend im gesprochenen Englisch verwendet. In der Schriftsprache dagegen - zumindest in formellen Schreiben - sollte man solche und andere Kurzformen vermeiden und stattdessen Langformen verwenden.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
AstridDerPu
Und ich habe noch eine Frage. Sind Sie ein Lehrer/in. Wenn ja von welcher Schule?.(ich hoffe nicht von meiner)
Danke, dass ist sehr Hilfreich!
PS: Ich habe den Google Übersetzter nur selten benutzt. Ich war in der ersten und zweiten Klassen auf einer chinesisch- amerikanischen Schule, deshalb sage ich „Soccer“ statt „Football“ und auch z.B „Eraser“ statt „Rubber“.😊